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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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starsarun

@starsarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

My res ;)

*Edited* I liked it and would like to read futher of it. Khushi's emotions were described beautifully... Lets see what you had store..

*Edited* 1stly a Big Thank you dear for dedicating the OS to me. Its My Pleasure.

Hey! You have wrote before too. I knew it.

I really really liked the ending. That was not sad ending. it was appropriate. and I can say that you took OS very much sincerely. One of the reason of your nervousness. 😛

About the OS... I liked the whole. You really paid heed to me. I can't believe.

Arnav was too much ignorant of Khushi. Even I twitched my nose when he was talking like that about his status and money and all...

Me too wanted that Khushi should be strong too and It was pretty shown.

Khushi's feelings were beautifully featured. what she must have gone through because of Arnav's silly talks. He always dominated her through his anger but at the end his only solace was Khushi.

Arnav was angry on Khushi and Igrnored the slight change in her but Once he realized his mistake, he wanted her, only her.

Khushi was right in her way. she tried what she can so that Arnav will come out of his past. I loved the ending.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

well that i would love to read
and congrats on being a rocker

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Snippet Updated!

I shall post the entire OS soon! :)

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TaujooMadiha

@TaujooMadiha

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

i was displeased with the track too. hope i like the one that you are going to write. all the best

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome start.
This track was very important in khushi life because from here her way for being independent starts n Arnav's recognize that his wife is full of talent, what only is needed is an opportunity.
Update soon

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

yay, nice 'snippet', finally someone's going to give this scene/idea the respect it deserves! i didn't mind the fight over aarav and spoiling him with toys, that's what arnav does, he runs out and buys expensive gifts at the first sign of trouble. but i thought he'd moved way past the 'aukad' and 'dimaag' type insults to the woman he professed to respect so much that he bowed his head down in front of her. and the 'courage' part really annoyed me, did he forget everything that happened when he was kidnapped? the ham-fisted attempt by the cv's to create a mini misunderstanding was sad to see because arhi were wayyy past this stuff by then, such words would only be spoken in a rage and immediately regretted and asked forgiveness for 😔 ok, will stop thinking about that track and cheer up as i know ur os will be good 😛