OS-part 2 ' I love to hate you'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So here I am writing another OS. It's only because you guys appreciated the first one,thanks a lot again.This one has no relation with the first one ,only the title is the same. Hope you'll like it.so here it is...

I LOVE TO HATE YOU

Christmas holidays had begun most of the students had gone home for the vacations except
HER- as she was now no longer welcomed in that house. And
HIM- cause he wasn't interested in going to that so called place where his mother lived once.

With kaustaki gone surely she was going to feel lonely but she had thought of something to keep her busy. HIS birthday. She recently discovered that he hate birthdays and for her this little piece of info was enough to take revenge. She had been preparing for days - ordering cake,buying those happy birthday banner and stuff. She wanted to make his Bday so special that he would hate it to death.
This was her way of revenge- SWEET REVENGE.

He unaware of all this was happy, okay not exactly happy but one can say he was calm, as this time of the year which he hated the most was going according to his will with no one to bother him, that's how he liked it. It was his bday the next day and he had planned to stay in his room the whole day.

She on the other hand planned to decorate his room while he was asleep so that he would get a shock,surprise as she would like to call it, when he woke up.
So gathering all the stuff, she made her way to the boys hostel.

He was lying on his bed trying to sleep when his phone rang- Oh he forgot to switch it off. It was his mother and that was it- the calmness all gone, he went out in anger.

After a while she entered his room seeing no one inside she felt relieved and started doing what she came to do. Only 25% of the job was done when she heard footsteps outside, she ran and hid behind the closet.

It was HIM - totally drunk, he was struggling to walk.

She was terrified, if he saw her it could be the end of her.

But he was so into his thoughts that he didn't even notice the decoration.
Remembering something suddenly he threw the chair and started screaming.
Randheer:" I hate you. I hate you...ahh...I hate you. W..why did you do it to me, why did you leave me...why??? When you went with that man leaving me and dad behind, you should have just killed me, that one moment of pain would have been far better than this endless agony."
With that he broke into tears. His mother had left him when he was 9,just a little kid and that too on his birthday.

SANYUKTA AGGARWAL... She couldn't think of anything for a while, the echoes of his screams were still present in the room. Her mortal enemy was there on the floor with blood red eyes, isn't it how she wanted him to be - helpless, in pain. Then why was now her eyes filled with tears too. Everything was crystal clear to her, all his hatred specially for women was because of his mother. He has never been loved ,never been cared for.
Her heart was in pain as if aching for his heart.
Everything dropped from her hand and without even thinking of what she was doing. She rushed towards him...his Randheer, she hugged him, enclosing his body in her arms- as if to put his broken heart together. She held him so close- as if trying to save the remaining part of his soul from darkness.

RANDHEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT... The so called perfectionist was now in the arms of a girl- vulnerable and weak. As he realised what was happening he tried to free himself but she held him more close to her heart. Weeping with him, for him.
Sanyukta: it's okay...hmmm. I'll never let you go, I'll never leave you. I am here I'll always be here its okay...shhh.. It's gonna be okay.

This was it. This was all he wanted to hear..someone who'll always be with him, that's what he wanted. He held her more close, holding her so tight, her bones were on the verge of breakage...but to her that pain was nothing compared to the torture her heart was going through seeing him in pain.
As she looked at him, she saw in his eyes- her randheer asking for love and she kissed him...her first kiss her most treasured she gave it to him. Out of breath she was but even if it meant death to give this poor soul a little relief, she would have happily died that very second.
He kissed her back with so much energy as if demanding for those lost loveless years, then he was unconscious. She held him and pulling him up kept him on his bed. As she turned to go he clasped her hand. Still unconscious but he blabbered...
Randheer: don't go.. You said you won't go. You promised you won't leave me like she did..don't..
Sanyukta: I won't , I am here...I won't go. I won't leave.
And with that she lay beside him holding his head in her arms once again.

This was the first time in years he had slept with so much peace, content. Warmth of a woman's love this is the first time he experienced it , felt it. And this time he wasn't going to be deprived of it again.
END


So how was it😊 your suggestions are always welcome🤗. Thank you for reading it..😃.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was hel awsm! Plz write more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So sweet, so serene. So beautiful :)
Loved it.
Please continue writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gurly u so left me speechless...with this outflow of emotions..!!
i really donno what to say.. i have always loved sad stories..i kinda have a soft spot for such stories..!!
but say u hv done an absolute awesome job penning the entire thing down the entire sequence...!!
i had so much fun reading it..!! it got tears in my eyes reading the entire scene u rote down with utter perfection..!!

my favourite lines:
so beautifully penned down... i want to see this happen in the show... why do i have a feeling the reason for randhir hating his mother is somewhat close to the reason u have written..
Everything dropped from her hand and without even thinking of what she was doing. She rushed towards him...his Randheer, she hugged him, enclosing his body in her arms- as if to put his broken heart together. She held him so close- as if trying to save the remaining part of his soul from darkness.

RANDHEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT... The so called perfectionist was now in the arms of a girl- vulnerable and weak. As he realised what was happening he tried to free himself but she held him more close to her heart. Weeping with him, for him.
Sanyukta: it's okay...hmmm. I'll never let you go, I'll never leave you. I am here I'll always be here its okay...shhh.. It's gonna be okay


so beautifully penned down... i want to see this happen in the show... why do i have a feeling the reason for randhir hating his mother is somewhat close to the reason u have written..I would love to see the out flow of the reason in the show... and gal ur a fabulous writer i donno often say it to ppl but this forum has a hell lot of awesome and perfectionist writers...!! nothin makes me love a story more than the language used in it...!!! and ur work is jzz flawless...
regards
safrena
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey!
awesome os dear,
i just loved it,
if possible please do continue it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: forevermine

gurly u so left me speechless...with this outflow of emotions..!!

i really donno what to say.. i have always loved sad stories..i kinda have a soft spot for such stories..!!
but say u hv done an absolute awesome job penning the entire thing down the entire sequence...!!
i had so much fun reading it..!! it got tears in my eyes reading the entire scene u rote down with utter perfection..!!

my favourite lines:
so beautifully penned down... i want to see this happen in the show... why do i have a feeling the reason for randhir hating his mother is somewhat close to the reason u have written..
Everything dropped from her hand and without even thinking of what she was doing. She rushed towards him...his Randheer, she hugged him, enclosing his body in her arms- as if to put his broken heart together. She held him so close- as if trying to save the remaining part of his soul from darkness.

RANDHEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT... The so called perfectionist was now in the arms of a girl- vulnerable and weak. As he realised what was happening he tried to free himself but she held him more close to her heart. Weeping with him, for him.
Sanyukta: it's okay...hmmm. I'll never let you go, I'll never leave you. I am here I'll always be here its okay...shhh.. It's gonna be okay


so beautifully penned down... i want to see this happen in the show... why do i have a feeling the reason for randhir hating his mother is somewhat close to the reason u have written..I would love to see the out flow of the reason in the show... and gal ur a fabulous writer i donno often say it to ppl but this forum has a hell lot of awesome and perfectionist writers...!! nothin makes me love a story more than the language used in it...!!! and ur work is jzz flawless...
regards
safrena

Thank you... So much. Your post always make me so happy. Thanks for appreciating it.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devilsgirl

Thank you... So much. Your post always make me so happy. Thanks for appreciating it.😃


hahaha and ur reply is so tiny!!! 😆😆😆 gal i expect better replys..! n i am glad ur so happy... n nytym i jzz love sad OS FF nythn... 🤣 call me Sadist but i cnt help it!!😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks a lot everyone 😃 I am glad you liked it. Your appreciation is my strength of writing cause for me typing so much is really difficult.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful! Very well written!
I loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH MYYY!!! gosh!👏👏 gurlll, u left me breathless! really! it really was a breathtaking story!❤️ loved how she realized that instead of hatred she actually cared about him! the realization of love for both was just tooo dammnnn cuuuttteee!!!☺️ Cutie, u portray ur character's thoughts n emotions really beautifully! this whole thing was like one picture-perfect scene n it was sooo touching like I felt both of their pain, as if I was there n eye-witnessing it!❤️ REALLY! FABULOUS JOB!🤗 PLEASSEEE PLEASSEEE WRITE MORE ON MY SanDhir! WILL BE WAITING EAGERLY!
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