KriYansh OS - Beyond The Barricades - Page 6

Oh Mahi!! My my!

I loved it Jerry! I gotta tell ya that you write even subtle than me. Selection of words, the narration and the feel, I have one word "heavenly"

I always thought that I am the only shy writer here who will write such stuff in most wrapped form but nah! Here my jerry takes the cake.🤗 And I would say that I love this kind of mature.❤️

Starting from the start!

The regal feel was bang on! I can imagine it all. Selection of words and phrases was pure regal.😎

Story of a princess and a knight! It in itself gives me tickles.

The way you built up the scene was absolutely apt. You know it kept me craving to read quickly till the end. I didn't felt disconnected for a second.😳

Kria being mad over him, then the way he eased her, it was so well written!👏

My favorite lines from story is- Her eyes were tightly shut , she didn't want this dream to shatter like it always did when she opened her eyes . She was not willing to face the grave reality.

I can relate to it so much! It was my most favorite phrase.😃

And further, I could just feel the serenity in their act. You know beyond tickles and butterflies, there is something called "Absolute". you offered that with this work!

Your another stunner phrase for me- She knew he was her monarch and she was pleased to be his slave

I re-read it lots of time and still can't stop smiling. It's perfect in itself.😃

It was amazing Jerry!

Reading through it somehow ignited my fantasy mind where I can keep thinking about it and then adding something in it further.

Loved it so much!❤️

Love ya!!🤗

Likhte raho mere Jerryyy!😈