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Posted: 11 years ago
soonish dee ! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150

Aneee monday chala bhi gaya ur jaldi firse anne wala bhi hai.😆.soo are u planning to updateee 😉

hahaha...yad aagaya 😆 aab monday kaha hai toh monday hi update karna padega na 😉 😆 tu unres kabb karne wali hai? 😆
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Anee... It is Monday... Last week there was no update... Hope u give a long one today😊
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Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Anee... It is Monday... Last week there was no update... Hope u give a long one today😊

updating in a while 😊
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Wait wait wait...I will explain !

Last week i was really busy...a lot..That is why i couldn't give an update!

And yesterday I was about to post but.. Loadshedding problem!


And the update contained some FI which were to be corrected.

So the update is delayed ! SORRY GUYS!

Okay without further ado, here you go!


Chapter 17

Wait...for the pictures to load completely ! 😛


By than the others had come out of the cave and they started moving towards Devi's fall.


Aayan : "Omfg! This is beautiful!

Armaan : " Yeah yaar! Hai na Ridz?"

Ridz : " Amazing!"

Mayank : " Do you know the reason behind its name?"

The students nodded in a no.

Mayank. "Actually in the year 1961, a Swiss tourist who was just swimming in the Phewa lake was swept away due to the unexpected overflow in the dam water and her husband was helpless. Thus, her body was never recovered and was vanished forever. Then the fall was named after her name as Davis fall.

Kabhir : " Wow, interesting." 😃

Mayank : " Yeah! I was lil bit confused in its name. So googled it, and I was amused when I read the details." 😃

Humeira, not seeing Asad and Zoya in the group : " Hey, where are Asad and Zoya now?"

Najma : " Might be somewhere, romancing!" 😉

Asad and Zoya reached there by than and zoya was a bit suspicious listening to the latter part of the conversation and glared at Asad.

Asad , " I didn't say anything. Promise." (You yourself said everything.) He murmured under his breath.

Zoya : " Huh? You said something?"

Asad : " Nah! Come let's go. Otherwise they will start suspecting us more."

Zoya : " umm...okay!"


After that they went to phewa lake.

Eight students were to be there in a boat, but before Tanveer could join the group and annoy the hell out of Asad, he requested Armaan to handle everything and the seven of them sat on the boat and sailed away leaving behind a fuming Tanveer.

Aayan was continuously dripping water on Humeira's direction, and getting irritated, she took a handful of water and aimed at him..but tch! It splashed all over Asad's face, who was busy admiring his lady love, Zoya.

Asad glared angrily at Humeira and the next moment, they started their water fight!

But due to all this the boat went off balance, and after a lot of effort they were able to make it steady. During all this no one had noticed that the six of them were holding their respective partners hand tightly.

After the boat came to balance, Najma who was sitting at the edge of the boat noticed this and glared at them. " What the hell guys? Had something happened today, you guys would have left me all alone right?" 😔 She said faking sadness. Rest of them looked at her in confusion.

" Why are you all giving that look? Just look at your hand! All of you care about your love and me?"

The six of them were holding their hand so tightly that they didn't even realize it. In a fraction of second, Asad-Zoya and Aayan-Humeira left each other's hand while Armaan-Ridz had no problem in continuing what they were doing.

Humeira :" It's not like that Najma! We were worried, that is why we held whose-so-ever hand came in contact. She said focusing on whose-so-ever.

Aayan looked at her in sadness.

Asad : " Yeah yaar tamatar. You are our darling sissy right! How could we leave you all alone. Tum bhi na! And if I return back without you, mom dad will not let me enter inside the home."

Aayan : " Bhaijaan! Don't take her seriously. Dramebazz! She's tryna be emotional!"

Najma : "Aaayyyann! You idiot! Wait till my prince charming comes to my life."

Aayan ( Facing skywards) : Hey Najma's so called prince charming! I have doubt if you actually exist or not. By chance if you do, please stay wherever you are. Yeah, If you are so willing to make your life a living hell, you are free to fill the form. Best of luck."

Najma ( To the boat sailer) : " Uncle, yo lake ko depth kati cha hola?" ( Uncle, what's the depth of this lake?"

Boat sailor : " Sayad 79 ft. ( Around 79 ft) "

Najma : " Did you listen? You would not be able to survive if I throw you right there."

Humeira : " Najma but how come you speak Nepali? 😲"

Najma : " Oh! You know Simran? Our classmate?"

Humeira : " Yeah yeah!"

Najma : " She's from Nepal. I learnt basics from her. And moreover, Hindi and Nepali language are quite similar."

Aayan : " Simran! She's beautiful na?"

On the other side of the boat were two couples romancing openly.

Zoya : " Asad, disadvantage of secret relationship. We can't romance openly like Ridz and Armaan." She said sadly. 😔

Asad : " Umm! But if you want I can announce right now that we are in relation than we can romance in this boat itself. What say?" 😉

Zoya : " Sacchi?"

Asad : " Mucchi ! "

Zoya : 😃

Asad taking her smile as an approval shouted, " Guys! Guys! We have something to..." but was cut off by Zoya, who was in a complete dilemma. After making up her mind she whispered in his ear, " I wanna make this special, unlike your proposal."

Asad just looked at her in disbelief than sighed sadly, " Your wish!" while the others looked at them in confusion.

Asad : " Nothing ! Get back to where you were." He said sadly than looking at Armaan, "Continue you OPEN romance."

After a while they reached Talbarahi temple ( Temple located at the middle of Phewa tal).


As they came out of the boat, the seven of them were stopped by prof. mayank and Nupur.

Nupur : " Students! What was going on in your boat? We saw it was going off balance. Who you mind to explain?"

Armaan : " Woh... ma'am...we were just...having fun, you know!"

Nupur : " Fun? If something had happened to you guys than what would we have said to your parents?"

Aayan : " Chill ma'am. Nothing happened right?"

Nupur : " You guys are really naughty." She tried to maintain a strict tone.

Mayank ( In a whisper) : " Tumhare students hai naughty toh honge hi."

Nupur : By God Mayank. Are you professor or student yourself? Students ke samne strict banna padta hai." She wishpered back but the others could easily hear what she was saying.

Asad came to Nupur and said, " Ma'am you need not to be strict just to make students obey you. We respect both of you a lot. Aurr... ( stepping backwards) isse liye toh...your affair is still a secret issue." 😉 He said and ran away with the others following him, while Mayank and Nupur looked at their crazy students in disbelief.

After offering prayers and chilling around the temple, for about an hour they sailed back.


After much insistence, Mayank and Nupur had finally obliged to take the students to sarankot to fulfill their crazy demand of paragliding.


Sarangkot, one of the tourist attraction at the top of the pokhara city is a beautiful place to see the Himalayan range without going on a long trek! About 2 and half hour ride upwards from the lakeside, and the DTUians were there.

Aayan : Holy god ! This is heaven!"

Armaan : " And I am not gonna back off this time. "

Nupur : " Students. Are you sure about paragliding?"

Asad : " Yeah ma'am 100%. How can we miss such a beautiful way of sharing the airspace with Himalayan griffin vultures, monasteries, temples, lakes and jungle, village, fewa lake and fantastic view of the majestic Himalaya. We wanna enjoy the trip, so 30-40 minutes gliding tour is not a big deal? What say sir?"

Mayank being impressed: " Alright than! Let me complete the formalities." 😃

Humeira : " Sir, will there be a guide with us?"

Mayank : Yeah, in case you are afraid. But since you all are more in numbers, I guess you will choose your partners , so free to choose one.."

The students were ecstatic on hearing this.

Tanveer from nowhere spoke : "Asad! Baby! I have Acrophobia ( Fear of height). Will you please be my partner?" She asked faking innocence, batting her eyelashes.

Asad, " I would have dear! But what to do, I am equally afraid of height. So I would want someone strong to accompany me."

Zoya amused by his reasoning spoke, " Hey Asad! I don't mind if you join me. I have a lot experience in paragliding.

Asad : " Okay, Alright!" (I would love to!) He mumbled.

Aayan whispered to Armaan : " Pyaar mein kameeney hogaye hai bhaijaan. Bicharee Tannu!"

Armaan : " Agar itna hi pyaar aaraha hai uss Tannu par toh, why don't yo be her partner?" 😉

" HELL NO!" He shouted gaining everyone's attention. " I mean... Humeira, will you be my partner?" 😉 " Well, don't get hopes. I am just asking for a single gliding tour." 😉

Humeira's smile faded away as soon as he said the latter part, which didn't go unnoticed by Asad- Zoya.

Zoya to Asad : " Dekhna, one day your brother will fall on his knees for my sister. Bahot parehsaan karta hai na."

Asad : " Yeah ! Even I want that. Only Humeira can handle my crazy brother." He winked at her. 😉

Zoya : 😃

Asad : " Zoya...Look at Tanveer. Ask me how I controlled my laughter at her expressions when I agreed to join you for paragliding. She was looking at you as if she wanna eat you alive." 😆

Zoya : " I know. And when she asked you to be her partner, (Asad! Baby! I have Acrophobia ( Fear of height). Will you please be my partner?)" Mimicking Tanveer " I wanted to eat her alive."

Asad : " Jealous." He raised his left eyebrow with a slight smirk on his face.

Zoya : " Yes, very much! And I have right to." She replied with similar expression.

They were soon called by Mayank for completing the formalities and some of the students were not allowed, as they did not fulfill the required criteria.

Asad held Zoya's hand as the guide instructed them how to preflight the glider and connect it together, steering control, how to control inputs as the wind shifts, and so on, while Zoya seemed a bit nervous.

He wishpered to her, " Hey my expert glider? Nervous?"

"Yeah little." She gripped his hand even more tightly.

" If you get nervous, what will I do? ❤️ You know I am Acrophobic, right?" 😉

She chuckled at this.

Soon they were off the land enjoying the chill weather along with the view of snow capped mountains, gorgeous lakes and breathtaking sceneries.

Okay thats it for today...

Hope you liked it.. 😃

Do give your feedbacks ! 😃

Buddy meh for PM ! 😛

Love Anee 😳

Edited by Aneezarp27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow awesome update anee👏👏

wow i loved the nepal😃😃

you discuss about every one part very well👍🏼

loved the devi's river story...😊

ayan and najma fight😆😆 its so funny...😆😆

and najma know nepali very good😛😛

the both ride amezing...

and tanveer have Acrophobia 😲 😆😆

but i like that how asad make fool her😆😆

asya closely romance and ridz,,,and arman openly romance and humz...and ayan would be romance 😳😳



luv u

ruhi😃
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awesome pic😃😃
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Good research you have done on all the locations Anee.. The pictures are beautiful...and yep the
story is going fine .. I am just waiting for Najma's boyfriend and Zoya's brother to join the group...😊😊😊
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Hi...I am reading this FF for the 1 st time...Read all parts in 1 go...really interesting...nw I am impatient...pls update soon dear...pls pm me if u can...waiting for thhe next part...
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THAT WAS AMAZING I LOVED IT SOOO MUCH IT WAS REALLY FUNNY SEEING HOW EVERYONE LEFT NAJMA AND WERE HOLDING THEIR LOVES. THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

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