Despair (AR) FanFic - Chapter 13 - Page 86

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Despair



Chapter 1


This day sucked totally, it could go down as one of the worst days of Riddhima Gupta's entire life. She couldn't help but think what a fool she had been as she got her clothes ready for tomorrow. Hopefully tomorrow would be a fresh new start for her and she'd make no more mistakes and these short-term relationships would have to stop. Because, even though she knew she wasn't serious in the relationship and it would only last for a while, the abrupt ending of one did leave scars especially when it ended on such awful notes.


She cringed as the sight of Sid's wife storming towards her flashed in her mind for the umpteenth time this day. Monica had slapped her. Hard. It still hurt. And she had called her a s**t, accused her of being a home wrecker. Riddhima knew she herself wasn't really at fault and neither was Monica, she couldn't even imagine what the poor woman must be going through after knowing what a cheating bas***d her husband had been. If anyone was at fault here it was Sid Malhotra, who had dared to pursue Riddhima into a relationship with him despite being married and a father of two.


Riddhima had met Sid at a pub on one of her night outs with her friends. He had been charming and witty and since Riddhima was already tipsy on those vodka shots, it didn't take her long to fall for Sid's charm. Soon they had exchanged numbers and a few days later were in a mutual agreement of a short-term relationship. Only if Riddhima had known at that time that Sid was already married she wouldn't have even spared him a glance. But to her misfortune Sid was one amazing liar. After a few weeks, he had wanted to take their relationship to the next level and Riddhima didn't really mind his advances either. She had trusted Sid and thought that maybe this could eventually develop into something more, maybe a commitment of a lifetime.

On second thoughts Riddhima should be thanking Monica for that slap, it had really been a wake up call for her and she had been saved from sleeping with that scumbag. Sid and Riddhima had been heading to the hotel with Sid's arm wrapped possessively around Riddhima's waist and suddenly Sid had stopped in his tracks, horrified at the sight of his wife standing before him, he had jerked Riddhima away from himself and of course it didn't take Riddhima long to put two and two together.


The final blow had been the slap and all those abuses hurled at her by Monica while Sid just stood next to her in shock of being caught. Once Riddhima came back to her senses she had told Monica her side of the story and explained to her how she had no clue that Sid was married and that he had cheated her too. To say Monica was appalled at her cheating husband was an understatement.


Although at that point Monica was done with Sid for good, Riddhima had some scores to settle. She chose the choicest of abuses for him and didn't leave before giving him a bloody nose.


Now she sat on the corner of her bed with her head in her hands cursing herself for being such a foolish woman all this while. Everything was supposed to be going well, it was the first day as a resident doctor for her tomorrow at Sanjeevani. She had been so excited about it, but now all her excitement had been drained way thanks to the whole Sid-Monica episode.


Just then Muskaan entered Riddhima's bedroom, interrupting her train of thoughts. It was about time, Riddhima had been wondering what was taking her best friend so long to come. She had called her over so she could rant to her about everything that had gone wrong in her life in the last 24 hours. She knew Muskaan would be able to cheer her up, she always managed to some how whether it was with her wisecracks or by just being her usually bubbly self.

"Muskiii what took you so long?" Riddhima screeched at her.


Muskaan's eyes widened at Riddhima's over-reaction. "God Ridzy!! Why are you shouting and what happened why did you call me so urgently? I was preparing for tomorrow you know ..." She stopped mid sentence when she saw her friend's worried expression and small tears rolling down her cheeks.


Immediately she went to her and took her in a side hug. "Riddhima what's wrong? Why are you crying? I'm getting worried."


Riddhima took a deep breath and steeled herself before telling her. "I ... I and Sid broke up."


"WHAT? But why?" Muskaan asked in shock. Last time she had checked, Riddhima seemed to be very happy in her relationship. she wondered what had happened so suddenly.


And that set Riddhima off. "Muskaan he's such a dog you won't believe it .. He's married and has two kids' he was cheating on his wife and me all this while."


Muskaan gaped at her in her shock. "What the f**k? Are you serious?"


Riddhima sighed heavily and narrated the whole story to her and watched the expressions on Muskaan's face change from one of shock to anger to disbelief and finally of empathy.


"Well that truly sucks! But you can't do much about it now, what's happened has happened Ridz and you sitting here and crying about it won't change anything, you know that. So just go get smashed and suck it up."


Riddhima looked at her friend in disbelief. "Get smashed? Are you for real? It's the first day of work tomorrow and you're suggesting I get drunk the night before?!"


"So what man?! I'm sure a few drinks until you forget about all this Sid fiasco won't do much harm. And tomorrow will be a fresh new day which means a fresh new start. And you never know you might find some SINGLE hot hunk at the hospital tomorrow, who'll just rock your world and make you forget all about Sid in a second." She told her cheekily with a wink.


Riddhima shook her head rolling her eyes at her. There was no way she was going for any guy again, well not anytime soon anyway. She had learned her lesson now.


"Pleaseee Musaan." She groaned. "Not men again. I've decided to take a break after this, and it's always those good looking ones who are dodgy. If I do I'll go for a total nerd or loner this time at least they can be trusted to be loyal."


Muskaan just chuckled at Riddhima's logic and giving her best friend a tight hug and a kiss on the cheek bid her a good bye. And Riddhima followed her advice and got smashed till Sid was totally flushed out of her system.


As Muskaan so rightly pointed out tomorrow would be a fresh new day which meant a fresh new start.


Hey guys =) for those of you who don't know me I'm Rosh. And well this idea had been bugging me for quite some time now and so I finally decided to pen it down. I hope you guys like the first part and do tell me your HONEST views about it, even if they're negative I won't mind LOL.

And I just wanna thank my friends Rads and Neeti who helped me with a lot of the ideas and Tashu for the banner and the credit for the title goes to her. ILY GUYS <3

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Index

Chapter 1 - page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 4

Chapter 3 - page 7
Chapter 4 - page 12
Chapter 5 - page 20
Chapter 6 - page 27
Chapter 7 - page 31
Chapter 8 - page 40
Chapter 9 - page 51
Chapter 10 - page 63
Chapter 11 - page 65
Chapter 12 - page 79
Chapter 13 - page 86
Edited by mcdreamy. - 11 years ago
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EEEKS CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ARE ACTUALLY writing an FF OMGGG I am so excited. And HAHAHAHA Neeti I beat you, I reserved first :D okay after reading the first chapter I felt all akdmamsm and didn't want it to end cos I wanted to see Armaan but then I saw your red red writing :( You better show him in the next chapter okay cos I love him even though I haven't seen him yet cos he is my babyyy. And I'm excited for the next chapter too cos drunk Riddhima is always nice to see ^^ and the title is really nice to well done to Tashu for that LOL but that also makes me intrigued like how is that gonna relate to the story, cos although I have a rough picture in mind of the concept I can't wait to see how you show it.

Btw the threat still stands, so if you give up on this FF then imma slap you and send you flying to Africa. Seriously. AHHH I still can't believe this is real maaan I wanted to read an AR FF like this for ages and what I love is that the FF won't annoy me cos there are certain types of FFs that annoy me but you've told me it won't be like that so AHHH and I hope you know what I'm talking about hahaha. Yesterday I thought you would never get around to posting cos of how long everything was taking 🤣 but what we settled on is daaa best. And I love how you said we helped when all we did was argue about things and confuse you lmaooo but if you need any more of that come to RadsIsSexy (I had to get that in somewhere cos I am sexy) and we shall helps :D I AM PROUD OF YOU ROSH BETA

Oh and as a side note DYING at how MAHUA called us all KUTTE she's such a joker
Edited by kajen_hamesha - 12 years ago
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Ahhh I cant believe you did it BEHNAAA.
You have no Idea how much excited you had got me for thisss and after the first chapter it has literally like increased. Riddhima drinks, Sids is cheater, What more could be ask from first Chapter. AWESOMEE. Of course there's No Armaan but that just makes me despooo for next update cox I cant wait to see how you will be portraying him. Awww My Armaan <3333
Also cant wait for that special character whose name took hours to decide.. EEKSSS
CANT believe Rosh is Writing a FF and she has promised that she is gonna complete! !!!!! 😆 😆
THANKS FOR THIS AWESOMEEE CHRISTMAS PRESENT.
NOW, Keep that enthusiasm that you had last night about this FF and update ASAP. So many people like me are gonna thank you for this, since we were DYINGG To read something on AR andnits here.. New and Fresh. Kushi ke aasu aagayee :')
P.S ILY TOOO
Edited by -MidnightSky- - 12 years ago
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KAMEENI AUNTIE Meri Mat Maari =) Okay I going to make this fast! Firstly I is so proud yet shocked that ju have started an FF. I never knew you could write so so amazingly! I already gave you live commentary on FB so I is not going to comment too much. Secondly you are welcome for the banner and the title! I am really looking forward to reading further about what is going to happen. So update soon Oh wait I can't even say that cause you already did! Okies now I go read PART 2<<

P.S. ILY<3
P.S.S Thank you PA for the complement!
Edited by .BezubaanPari. - 12 years ago
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BITCH :| Thanks for not even telling me about this :|

*Reserved*

Okay so firstly i knew you were planning on writing one and Neeti Rads were behind you but you still didnt tell me about finally writing and posting it :| I am so upset with you for that. Biatch :|

Secondly, OMG THIS IS ONE AWESOME STORY LINE! EEEKKSS ^_^ Sid taking fayda of Riddhima and Riddhima punching him 🤣 Lmfaoo But poor Riddhima got slapped for no fault of hers 😲

I loved how you wrote the reactions! And also Riddhima ki feelings are very very well written! :')

So, Riddhima listens to Muskaan and gets drunk. I wanna see if she goes out drunk or stays home and gets her sober self back :D I wonder how and where you decide to get Armaan and Riddhima face to face. Lets see ;) CANT WAIT.

PS - You better not make us wait for updates or imma seriously kick you 😊
Edited by SleepingBeauty. - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

EEEKS CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ARE ACTUALLY writing an FF OMGGG I am so excited. And HAHAHAHA Neeti I beat you, I reserved first :D okay after reading the first chapter I felt all akdmamsm and didn't want it to end cos I wanted to see Armaan but then I saw your red red writing :( You better show him in the next chapter okay cos I love him even though I haven't seen him yet cos he is my babyyy. And I'm excited for the next chapter too cos drunk Riddhima is always nice to see ^^ and the title is really nice to well done to Tashu for that LOL but that also makes me intrigued like how is that gonna relate to the story, cos although I have a rough picture in mind of the concept I can't wait to see how you show it.

Btw the threat still stands, so if you give up on this FF then imma slap you and send you flying to Africa. Seriously. AHHH I still can't believe this is real maaan I wanted to read an AR FF like this for ages and what I love is that the FF won't annoy me cos there are certain types of FFs that annoy me but you've told me it won't be like that so AHHH and I hope you know what I'm talking about hahaha. Yesterday I thought you would never get around to posting cos of how long everything was taking 🤣 but what we settled on is daaa best. And I love how you said we helped when all we did was argue about things and confuse you lmaooo but if you need any more of that come to RadsIsSexy (I had to get that in somewhere cos I am sexy) and we shall helps :D I AM PROUD OF YOU ROSH BETA

Oh and as a side note DYING at how MAHUA called us all KUTTE she's such a joker



You know I can't believe I'm writing one too like finally :| and yes I WILL KEEP UP TO MY PROMISEEE and if I get lazy then I have you and neeti on my back to pester me to finish this off 😆 you'll find out the reason for the title in the next chapter hopefully and yess Armaan baby will be there <3 and of course that SPECIAL character too who it took us sooo long to name lmfao 🤣 and no it won't be like those certain FFs that annoy you lmaooo i'll make sure of that 🤣

MAHUA IS SO JOKE THAT MADE ME CRACK UP TOO 🤣🤣

Edited by GoldenSkies - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MidnightSky-

Ahhh I cant believe you did it BEHNAAA.
You have no Idea how much excited you had got me for thisss and after the first chapter it has literally like increased. Riddhima drinks, Sids is cheater, What more could be ask from first Chapter. AWESOMEE. Of course there's No Armaan but that just makes me despooo for next update cox I cant wait to see how you will be portraying him. Awww My Armaan <3333
Also cant wait for that special character whose name took hours to decide.. EEKSSS
CANT believe Rosh is Writing a FF and she has promised that she is gonna complete! !!!!! 😆 😆
THANKS FOR THIS AWESOMEEE CHRISTMAS PRESENT.
NOW, Keep that enthusiasm that you had last night about this FF and update ASAP. So many people like me are gonna thank you for this, since we were DYINGG To read something on AR andnits here.. New and Fresh. Kushi ke aasu aagayee :')
P.S ILY TOOO



THANKSSS BEHNAAA GLAD YOU LIKED IT <3 YESS Armaan and the special special character are in the next chapter which I shall be posting tonight hopefully. IKR I can't believe I'm writing this either 🤣 wow you're such a nautankiii "khushi ke aansoo" 🤣 OHH AND hopefully you'll like the next chapter cos I included something you wanted to see so yeah wait for it ... 😆
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YOU'RE SO JOKE MAHUSSS 🤣
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Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

BITCH :| Thanks for not even telling me about this :|

*Reserved*

Okay so firstly i knew you are planning on writing one and Neeti Rads are behind you but you still didnt tell me about finally doing it :| I am so upset with you for that. Biatch :|

Secondly, OMG THIS IS ONE AWESOME STORY LINE! EEEKKSS ^_^ Sid taking fayda of Riddhima and Riddhima punching him 🤣 Lmfaoo But poor Riddhima got slapped for no fault of hers 😲

I loved how you wrote the reactions! And also Riddhima ki feelings are very very well written! :')

So, Riddhima listens to Muskaan and gets drunk. I wanna see if she goes out drunk or stays home and gets her sober self back :D I wonder how and where you decide to get Armaan and Riddhima face to face. Lets see ;) CANT WAIT.

PS - You better not make us wait for updates or imma seriously kick you 😊



HELLOOO 😳 Well tbh this was such a last min plan and I couldn't tell you cos you would have been fast alseep at that time DUHHH 🤣 So yeah last night I said to rads and neeti i feel like writing an FF and they were like you'll never finish it so write an OS but I was like no I wanna write an FF and I PROMISE TO FINISH IT too so yeah 😆

I am glad you liked the first part and the story line, I hope you'll like the next chapter too and you'll see how AR meet then and there's a surprise in the next chapter as well so I hope you'll like that too 😳

LMFAAOOO about updates well since it xmas holidays now so I'll be updating regularly, but once college starts I'll keep a day where I update every week but that depends on if I don't get it finished before college starts cos I wanna keep it short .. but let's seee 😆
Edited by GoldenSkies - 12 years ago

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