Veera Baldev FF: Tu meri hai part 13: page 28

Hi guys, first time i am writing a story on this forum. I've wrote another story before which is on VirMan (virat manvi)Hope you guys like it.

In my story Baldev gets what he want by hook or by crook. I'm going to start from the end of friday's episode

Part 1

When Baldev sees Veera and Karan there he feels some kind of pain in his heart, but totally ignores it.

Baldev - Tum dono ki kar rahe ho

Karan - Oh actually mujhe na

Random lady - Haaye haaye sharam ni aandi dono ko, sare aam yeh sab karte hai

Karan got confused but Veera knew what was happening

Veera - Nahi hum toh bas yuhi ...

Baldev - Yuhi ki, acha karan tob sheher se aaya hai na ise nahi pata pind ke tor tarike, lekin tenu te pata si na toh tune kyu nahi roka

Veera wanted to speak but no one was letting her

Baldev - Ab aise harkat ki hai toh sazaa toh milni hi chahiye

Veera - s sa sazaa

Baldev - haa sazaa

Veera - nai

Ratan and chaiji were there too

Ratan - galti ki hai toh sazaa bhi mile gi

Baldev smirks, while Veera's heart breaks into pieces listening to her beeji

Baldev - Acha toh sazaa yeh hai ki teen din ke liye tu mere ghar ki NAUKRANI bane gi

Veera - Naukrani, no way

Baldev - Oh yese (yes) way

Veera makes a sad face

Karan - Dekhiye iss me Veera ki koi galti nahi hai

Baldev - Veera nu bacha ne di koshish mat kar, jante hai teri koi galti nai hai, veera tu na kal aana, tere kapre beeji dedegi aur tu mere hi ghar rehegi, matlab pura din kaam

Chaiji couldn't do anything as it was veera's fault for her but Ratan was sad as she couldn't do anything either.

Baldev takes Karan with him and slowly everyone leaves including veera.

Ranvi had gone to do some bank work and didn t know anything about what happened on the school terrace

When ranvi came back he found out about what happened and was upset but he couldn't do anything because all the pind saw what happened

Precap - First day of veera's punishment, could this be a start of something new?

Sorry guys, i know it's short but i will try to give a long update next time. plzzz comment
Part1 - above
Part 2 - page 2
Part 6 - Page 11<div></div>Part 7 - Page 14

Part 8 - Page 16

Part 11 - Page 25

haven't pmed anyone yet, will do in the next update

well written dear...

wow what a punishment

hey nice start dear continue soon and pm me

Nice... What an idea...
Veera bny gi nokrani...

Awesome start!!

Wow what a punishment ... Awesome start Plz update soon

Hey guys, here's part 2, enjoy

Part 2

When Baldev and Karan come home, Karan goes straight to his room and Baldev goes to his mum-dad's room where both are there

Baldev - Beeji kal se Veera humare yaha rahe gi teen dino ke liye

Bansuri - Kya, aur tu yeh baat aaram se bata raha hai

Balwant - yeh toh bohot achi baat hai

Baldev - naukrani ban kar

Balwant and Bansuri look at each other looking confused

Bansuri - Matlab

Baldev tells everything what happened today and her punishment

Bansuri - Yeh achi saza di us larki ko

Balwant - Lekin ek jhappi (hug) to bas dosto ke bich thi na

Bansuri -'Lekin yeh pind hai sheher nahi, log kya sochengi

Balwant - hmm

Baldev - Acha beeji papaji main sone jaa raha hoon

Bansuri - Haa beta tu jaa soja, thak gaya hoga na

Baldev goes to his room and lies down on his bed

Baldev - (in his thought) ab nachaionga Veera ko mere isharo pe

And plasters an evil smirk in his face but deep deep inside he's happy that she's going to stay in his house for a whole 3 days

Next Day Ranvi gives Veera some tips on how to treat everyone

Chaiji - Kya veera, ab teri chir chir (bak bak) ke bina kaise rahoongi

Veera - ( her normal mode ) kui baat nahi moti chaaaji, kabhi kabhi chup chup ke mil loongi

By then Beeji comes

Beeji (looking down) - Main janti hoon ke tujhe khana banana nahi aata isiliye maine iss kitab mein sab likh liya hai

Veera - (happily) Thank you beeji

Veera has a bag on her shoulder so she can put the book in the bag

She bids everyone goodbye and goes to Baldev's house

She knocks the door and in seconds, bansuri opened the door and behind in the hall everone were present

Veera - Namaste (smiling)

Bansuri - Mere saath chal

Bansuri hold veera's wrist a bit tightly and takes her to a small dirty room

When they reach veera's room Bansuri gives Veera her cloths for three days

Veera - Yeh kapri, kitne saadi saadi hai

Bansuri - kyu tujhe maharani ki jaise kapri doon. Naukrani hai, naukrani hi rahai

Veera just nodded

Bansuri - Abhi hum sab ne khana kha liya hai toh rasoi gandi hai, woh saaf kar, uske baad saari kamre saaf karne hai. Saaf safai ka saara saman estore (store) room mein hai. Jab woh sab ho jai toh mere paas aana aur kaa doongi. Agar koi kaam ke liye bole toh uska kaam bilkul thik se karna. Ab ja kaam kar jaa ke

Veera nods, she goes to the kitchen and starts to clean it. she knows how to clean as she saw her beeji doing it

Veera's house

Chaiji - Pata nai Veera thik hogi yaa nahi, bari chinta ho rahi

Ratan - Ab sazaa mili hai toh poori toh karni hi hogi

She said while washing the cloths

Chaiji - Ratan tujhe thora bhi dukh nahi hai

Ratan - Galat kaam kiya hai usne toh yeh sab toh ho.a hi tha. Isme koi dukh ki baat nahi hai

Ratan does say this but deep in her heart she is really scared.

Baldev's house

After cleaning the kitchen Veera goes to Bansuri-Balwant's room and starts cleaning it. Bansuri was sat on the bed reading a magazine while filing her nail. Balwant was finding his shoes bu couldn't seem to find them. Veera knows what he's trying to find. She sees them under the bed so she quickely goes, gets the shoes nd puts them near his feet. Balwant smiles and pats her head

Balwant - Shukriya beta

Veera - kui baat nahi (while smiling)

Balwant goes as he has a meeting to go to. Veera has cleaned everything and is just cleaning a vase when by accident the vase falls and breaks into peices. Bansuri boils in anger while Veera is terrified. Bansuri is about to hit her but just then Karan knocks on the door and saves Veera

Bansuri - (angrily) ab ja bohot saaf safai kar li tune

Veera nods and goes with Karan

While going Veera says

Veera - Thank you Karan bachane ke liye

Karan - aare is me thanks ki kya baath, hum dost hai na

While going to karan's room Veera keeps staring at Karan with a small smile on her face

When they reach Karan's room Veera starts dusting his room. After that she cleans Gunjan's room and then finally she goes to Baldev's room. When she enters she gets shell shocked

Veera - Eew itna ganda room, isme toh bohot time lage ga

Veera first cleans the bed and then starts folding the cloths up and putting them in the wardrobe. Then she starts to dust the furniture, she suddenly hears the door openning and turns around. When she sees it's baldev she breaths in relief, actually she thought it was a thief (wierd, I know)

Baldev - Tu yaha kya kar kar rahi hai

Veera - Saaf safai, teri sazaa

Baldev - Oh, waise mere pairo me bohot dard ho raha hai, zara daba de na

Veera - (dramatically) Jo hukum mere aaka

Baldev smiles

Veera starts to massage his legs while he id just staring at her, when she looks at him he pretends he on his phone

All day she does work set by Bansuri then she gets told to make dinner. While making dinner Baldev comes to annoy her.

Baldev - Bhare khane pak rahe hai

Veera - Tu yaha kya kar raha hai

Baldev - Yuhi aa gaya, socha dekhu ki kaam ho rahe hai

Veera was about to shoot back when she sees Gunjan and Karan laughing together, this brings pain to her heart

Baldev sees her sad and looks where she's looking and finds outcthat she's somewhat jealous and in pain. He feels a kind of anger growing in him

Baldev - (angrily) Khana jaldi bana warna ...

Veera - (coming out of her thoughts) Ab maine kya kiya

Baldev goes from their in anger and goes to his room. When he reaches his room he punches the wall hard

Baldev - Uss Veera ki itni himmat ke woh kisi aur ladke ko dekhe. Ek minute menu itna gussa kyun aaa raha hai. Lagda hai main pagal ho raha hoon.

Dinner time

At dinner Veera serves everyone the food

Balwant - Wah aaj toh khane mein maza aagaya, par yeh thoda alag

Veera - Woh maine na iss me thoda tel (oil) aur namak (salt) daala, kyunki agar hum yeh zada andar kare toh dil ki bamari ke chances zada hote hai

Balwant - Yeh acha kiya bata kar ab (taking 500 rupee out) yeh lo

Veera - Nahi mujhe paise nahi chahiye

Balwant - Tu mujhe apna papaji manti hai na, to papaji ko kabhi na nahi karte

Veera takes the money and takes ashirwaad from him

Balwant - Khush rahai

Gunjan - Sach mein khana toh bohot changa bana hai ji

Veera - Thank you Gunjan didi

Gunjan smiles

Karan - Tumhare haath ka khana dubara taste kiya, aur yeh to pehli baar se bhi acha bana hai

Baldev - Tu pehle bhi iske haat ka khana kha chuka hai

Karan - Ha woh lehli baar mere janam din pe banaya tha

Baldev has now started to get irritated with this Karan

Bansuri - Ha bas thik hi bana hai khana

Veera gets a huge shock, she has complimented veera for the first time

After cleaning the dining table she clears the kitchen. Because now there's no job o do she goes to the terrace to get some fresh air

When she goes someone grabs her arm and pins her to the wall

Veera - Baldev

Baldev - Yaha ki kar rahi hai

Veera - Itna kaam kiya hai toh fresh air toh chahiye hi na

Baldev - Ki chahiye

Veera - Woh taazi hawa

Baldev - Waise tu karan ko surf dost hi samaj ti hai

Veera - kyu batao

This gets baldev angry and he puches the wall which the right wall from Veera

Baldev - (dangerous tone) Bataa (coming close to her face)

Veera - d dost hai

Baldev breaths in relief and goes from their

Veera gets confused and then calls ranvi

Ranvi - Hello veera tu thik toh hain na, zaida kaam toh nahi kiya na, thak gayi kya

Veera - Veerji pehle saans lo, main thik ho, thoda zaida kaam karna parha, aur main thaki nahi hu

After talking to all of her family she goes to sleep

Precap - Second Day of her punishment, Baldev to become more jealous

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