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Helloo beauts!

Hey..its ok Elena..but waiting for the update..!!

its ok we will wait for update
when u will free try to update

Hey dear... I jus read dis story of urs... Its jus amazing... Luved it... I ws kind of inactive here... So sory 4 rplyng late... I cn undrstand ur cnditn vry wel... Do pm me whn u update nxt...

Hi Elena ,
I'm sorry I wasn't able to comment as I was hospitalised for about a month n before that I had my exams !
However , I'd already read ur update n I must say its getting more interesting with every update !
U've got me hooked in to his story now !
N I would especially like to mention that u r an amazing writer n I simply love ur stories !
As for Virat n Manvi I feel something's changing gradually n that their relationship n comfort level with each other !
Virat has unknowingly started liking her ( in fact I would say more than that ) ! As for Manvi it is more of a physical attraction n although somewhere she wants to begin their relationship on the true sense of the term , she's afraid of " not being enough " !
The woman has serious trust issues coz of her parents ' troubled marriage n her father abandoning them for another woman !
This is a beautiful journey of how Virat wins her love n more importantly trust ! N I would surely love to see how u unravel it !
Pls don't forget to pm me whenever u update next !!!