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OsheenDGr8

@OsheenDGr8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

No words to tell how much I loved it... Ol maaneet dialogs were heart touching n the blend of past n present was fab...
Thnx so much for d awesome OS... Waiting for ur next one 😉

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awesome beautiful Os
loved it very much Ritu
keep it up!

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

oh man it was soo emotional.. but beautiful hun..

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wow loved this Os by ritu

u have again done it girl it just touched the heart the poetry at the start and end was just awesome amd the way the pain was portrayed we simply superb loved it waiting for more work from my ritu

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Faiza Ghafoor

@SecretSapphire

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

finally I am here to comment
I am not much active on IF now a days
not commenting on FFs or spamming any thread
but here u come and brought me out from my den to this world of magic
where the magic of your poetry bewitch me and ofcourse all the readers out there
I am in love with your poetry and this one the starting lines of ur os
the poetry was awesome. I am still feeling the depth of the emotions u showed in ur poetry
the concept is awesome
I had tears in my eyes while witnessing the pain of Geet and had a smile on my lips on their cute confession.
I thought he ditched her but he was also suffering without her
one thing I love the most is the End
I believe all well that ends well
and that was a happy end
so my Paroo is improving as a writer and of course as a poet day by day
I loved it a lot

P.S I am PariNain Changed my username 😳😆 😉