Smitar's:Marrying Khushi#2 Part 17(1) Pg 110(19/11) Link to #3 on Pg 1

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PSharada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Khushi is really hopeless. She thinks that she will marry a person who has mustache and eats paan. ASR must be having the shock of his life after hearing Khushi's plan of an husband. And now ASR got an opening he was waiting for. So he is most probably going to get her family to say yes to his proposal. Can't wait to see how ASR would take this forward. Waiting for the next update.

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daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Wonderful update. Dialogues are the highlight of this story, especially Kushi's. Some of the phrases coined in her dialogues are simply superb, like ->You are Dilli's diabetic shehenshah

So now ASR know which door to knock. I can't wait foe the pre-marital rituals to start :)

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sudhalata1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Whenever i read your update i have a big smile on my face😃 beautiful

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Smitaji... Aja happywalaa childrens day hain... Bachoo ko update ka treat de hi dooo... 😉

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kamtokdin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

this is just too funny! asr jelous of a panwaala? wishing he was a halwai. what the...

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Milii

@Milii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

I was imagining ASR's bechara face when Khushi replied to his proposal...😆

Ufff...had they shown something like this in the serial...it would have been hillarious...

Awesomeee update!! Loved it to bits...👏

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rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Lovely update. Khushi is so innocent and cute !

So Arnav will start wooing her family now ??

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palermn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Loved it awesome. You are a amazing writer. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you

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saschades

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

lmao khushi happy to marry a panwala.

ASR is in love with her

nice update

thanks for the pm x😉

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Dimz13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Part 13

Kushi admitted to ASR that he haunts her dreams as well...and it's like giving the world on a plate to Arnav...! And in between breaking Kushi's bangles...mittu's constructive criticism,the background music...not to miss out the munni and sheela from besharampur...😉 And life threatening threats from Kushi...Arnav popped the question. Wow...I'm sure if Kushi wanted him gone on the first train available...she now thinks he should be sent to to nearest plagal khans for treatment...😆