VRIMAR- LOVE AAJ KAL

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys,
i know my one ff is already pending, and i m starting with a new one, but main kya karun.. jab se taani ke wapas aane ki news suni hai... har din ek naya idea aata hai... i start dreaming ki aisa hoga aisa nahi hoga...

anywaz... this is not taarey but vrimar ff... but taarey will play a big role for uniting vrimar...
and HATERS... needless to say
PLEASE STAY AWAY


so the story starts from first day of shoot of vrinda rejoining D3..

palkhi: hey vrinda,, thank god... u r here... and welcome back to D3...
vrinda: thank you mam... its homely feeling to be back on the sets of D3...

there comes shantanu
shantanu: here comes meri choti si behen
vrinda: shan that is in the show yaar, here i m ur frnd...
shan: haan haan i know, bt ur exit was a shock for me too, tumhari aadat si ho gayi thi mujhe... and specially aunty k haatho ke khaane ki, ghar ka khana...
vrinda: i knw... howu feel... jab main haunted nights k liye outdoor shooting gayi thi, then also felt the same...
shan: so welcome back.. and get ready to spread taarey;s magic all over again...
vrinda: thank you, taarey se yaad aaya... where's amar... wo aa gaye ya hamesha ki tarah late hain??

now sam comes there, and hugs vrinda,,,
sam: cmon vrinda we all know early morning shoots pe kabhi amar time pe nahi aata
shan: amar and vrushika
vrinda: vrushi se i had a talk half n hr before.. she was leaving her place, might be she will be here in next 10 min...
shan: okay...
anywaz main maa se baat kar ke aat hun...
shan leaves, and calls amar...

here on the other side...
a guy of 28 years is sleeping on a round bed... and suddenly his sweet sleep is disturbes by the ring of his cell...
guys; yaar shan tu kabhi toh mujhe sone dia kar...
shan: amar.. tu aaj bhi itni late tak so raha hai??
amar: kyu aaj kya hai??
shan: aaj teri i mean rey ki taani wapas aa rahi hai show mein, and vrinda yahan aa chuki hai.. sab tera wait kar rahe hain, shoot k liye late ho raha hai..
amar: haan toh aane de na, main toh apni charlie k sath hun...
shan: amar, charlie taani ka role nahi kar rahi hai...
amar; haan toh main palkhi ko bol ke taani change kara dunga, waise bhi i dont like vrinda... bus co actor hai, isiliye hi hello kar leta hun...
shan: tu yahan 30min mein aata hai ya tera replacement dhundh lun..
amar: chilla kyu raha hai, aa raha hun...
amar cuts the call...
and gets up and goes to the other romm and sees his angel sleeping peacefully...
amar goes near her... and tries to wake her up...
amar: charlie, charlie... charlie..
charlie: haan baby, kya hua.. itni subah mujhe kyu utha rahe ho??
amar: baby i m going for the shoot, as vrinda ne aaj se rejoin kia hai... alkhi jaldi bula rahi hai...
charlie: theek hai jao... and kisses his cheeks...
bye
amar: bye, and leaves her room... and gets ready and leaves for the shoot...

when he reaches the set its already 12pm...
it ws unch time.. since he dint have anything in the morning, he was feelimg very hungry... he goes to place shan, vrushika, vrinda, sam, archie, and mac, were there...
amar: hey shaan, aaj tu tiffin mei kya laya hai..
shan: main tiffin kyu launga...
amar: kyu launga matlab... lunch nahi kareg kya>??
shan: arey i mean, mujhe pata tha ki aaj se vrinda wapas aa rahi hai, toh wo mere liye lunch ghar se le ke aayegi, toh maine tiffin nahi laaya...
agar tujhe bhook lagi hai, toh aaj isi mei se kha le, waise bhi vrinda zada khana le ke aayi hai,..
amar: no thanks,, mujhe ab bhook nahi hai...

vrinda knew that amar doesnt like her, but she does not know the reason... she asked shan many times, but he alwz avoids answering her...
but she knows that at this time amar is hungry, and wont touch her food coz of his ego... so she moves from there, and signals shan to make amar eat something...
after vrinda leaves:

shan: ab vrinda chali gayi.. and i knw tujhe bht bhook lagi hai.. so ye apna ego trip chodh aur kuch khale, waise bhi khana uski mumy ne banaya hai... usne nahi...
amar: then its fine.. sirf tu keh raha hai isiliye kha raha hun..
amar eats the food, and vrinda is watching from behind a wall... and has a smile on her face...
this all is noticed by vrushika...
vrushika(thinking): sirf taani hi nahi... vrinda k mann mei actually amar ke liye kuch toh hai.. tabhi toh uski happiness ke liye itna sab kuch karti hai, and jatati bhi nahi...

lunch is over...
palkhi calls evryone for the scene:

palkhi: the scene is...
rey sees taani at shopping mall, and follows her to make sure he is not hallicunating...
while he follows taani, he sees taani with sivam and his blood boils.. he sees taani is laughing, and smiling with shivam... and also hugs him readily...

amar turns and sees vrinda talking to lavin... dont know why by=ut he doesnt like it that vrinda is so much comfortable around lavin...
shan sees amar lost somewhere, and follows his gaze...
shan (thinks): amar tu kab samjhega, ki sirf rey ko taani ko shivam k sath dekh ke jealousy nahi hoti... amar ko bhi vrinda ko lavin k sath jealousy hoti hai...
but his thoughts are disturbed when vrushika puts her hand on his shoulder...

vrushi: kya soch raheho??
shan: kuch khas nahi...
vrushi: mujhe pata hai ki tum kya soch rahe ho, yahi na... sirf taarey nahi vrimar ki chemistry bhi bht sizzling hai...
shan: vrimar??
vrushi: arey baba apne vrinda and amar...!!
shan: haan soch toh yahi raha tha, but tumhe kaise pata...
vrushi: kyunki sirf tumne amar ki eyes main nahi, maine vrinda ki eyes mein bhi amar k kuch feelings dekhi hain...
shan: what??
vrushi: haan, aaj lunchkarte time.. infact isse pehele bhi vrinda ne out of the way ja ke amar ko apne around comfortable banaya hai...
bs wo ye baat samajh nahi rahi, ye uske mann mei amar ke liye respect nahi.. balki love hai...
shan was about to say something...
when
palki: shot is ready... amar vrinda get ready...



huh!! done with the first part...
i hope u all like it...
please do reply and comment and let me know ur views...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start
update next part soon
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Nice concept
Great start update next part as early as possible
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PART 2:
palki: shot is ready, amar vrinda get ready...

amar goes to shan and vrushi...
shan: chal bhai, ja tera shot hai...
vrushi: and please try to make vrinda comfortable, i knw u dont like her but atleast usey unwanted feel mat karwana...
amar: haan haan theek hai

amar goes for the shot...
palki: action

rey sees taani playing with an earing in a jewelery shop and thinks he is hallicunating...
but then his eyes becomes blood shot red when he sees shivam standing beside taani... rey goes near the shop to meet taani.. but then he hears their conversation..

shivam: kya yaar taani, kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki tumne mujhe ab tak maaf nahi kia...
taani: no shivam aisa nahi hai... maine toh tumhe kab ka maaf kar dia...
shivam: isiliye, do din ho gaye tumhe aaye aur tumne ab tak mujhe hug bhi nahi kia!!
taani: awww... shivam u r soo cute...

taani hugs shivam...
rey folds his hand into fists... his mind is stopped only onw the fact that taani was in the city from last two days and only shivam knew about it... he leaves from there...

palki: cut... wow... amar what expressions yaar, aisa lag raha tha ki tujhe sach mei gussa aa raha tha...
amar: thank u palki, yahi toh meri adaa hai... jo karta hun wo real lagne lagta hai😉
palki: and vrinda and lavin u two really make a cute pair... have u guys thought of giving each other a chance...

vrinda dont knw why faces rey, and her eyes asks hm...
r
amar's eyes have the same anger as it was during the shoot...

lavin: sure mam... we will think about it... after all me and vrnda are very close friends. and if something lik this will happen first we will inform you...
vrinda seeing amar's expressionless face, becomes disheartened... and then saya...

vrinda: sure lavin... we are such good friends, i think we shud give each a chance to understand each other better... and side hugs lavin...
lavin who has some idea of vrinda's feelings towards amar sees amar's face... and can guess that whatever vrina said she doesnt mean it...

shan: that will be a great news... and u two look perfect together... made for each other...

palki: okay now next shot is shivam and taani moves towards swayam's place, and sharon is already there... and after some time rey also reaches there... he is shocked seeing taani in shivams arms... the scenen is, when taani was serving dinner to evryone she gets hurt and shivam picks her up to take her to the bedroom and at the same time rey comes there and sees them in that position...

shan: okay.. simple hai... jaise mere zada dailogs nahi hai...
vrushi: same here... zada dailogs mei samajh hi nahi aata expression consistent kaise rakhun...
palki: okay so amar, vrinda and lavin...
get ready...

the shot again goes perfect, and the end of the day...
amar: palki, i wanted to talk yo u..
palki: haan bolo...
amar: wo as u knw, ki bff end ho gaya hai, so i was thinking if u can consider charlie for taani's role...
palki: amar, i knw u dont like vrinda, coz u think taani ka role jo charlie ko milne wala tha woh maine vrinda ko de dia, isiliye tum hamesha usse rude rehete ho... but try=ust me vrinda ka taani rehena hi D3 k liye achcha hai... fans pagal hai vrinda k apeeche... agar ab change kia.. toh D3 band karna padega...
amar: okay... i understand...

palki and amar leaves from there, oblivious to the fact that someone heard their conversation,
and its none other than VRINDA...

vrinda: ohh, toh ye reason hai jiski wajah se amar mujhse rudely behave karte hai.. unhe lagta hai maine taani ka role charlie se cheen lia...
she leaves the set. and gets back home...

vrinda' home:
mumma: vrinda what happened... su che??
vrinda: kachu nai mumma... sab maja maa...
mumma: chokri, mane dassu ki vaat che??
vrinda: mumma.. m i that bad that someone will hate me??
mumma: no beta,, what happened... y r u saying all this
vrinda hugs her mother and without saying anything leaves for her room... and then locks the door...

vrinda: agar amar mujhse isliye nafrat karte hai qki unhe aisa lagta hai ki maine taani ka role charlie se cheen lia, toh main kal hi ye role chod dungi... and palki mam request karungi ki wo taani k role k liye charlie ko lele...

next orning...
taani gets up very early.. she does her regular excercises... and gets ready and leaves for shoot, without informing anyone...

when vrinda reaches the set... shan, vrushi, and palki are already there...

vrinda: palki mam, i want to talk to u something important...
palki: yes vrinda bolo
vrinda: mam, main ye role chodna chahti hun, as meri family meri shadi ki baat kar rahe hain, they want m to be at home... (lies)
palki, shan and vrushi are shocked...
palki: vrinda what are u saying...
vrinda: yes mam.. i have brought the check of advance payment... and meri ek request hai ki aap please ye role charlie ki=o de dijiye.. isse sa khush rahenge and unhe meri yaad bhi nahi aayegi...

now shaan and vrushi understands the matter... that vrinda has come to know abt the reason behind amar' rude behavior towards her...

vrinda leaves...
shaan and vrushi follows her... and stops her near her car...
shaan: vrinda, tum ye kyu kar rahi ho??
vrushi: amar ki khushi ke liye, apna career barbaad kar rahi ho...
shaan: usey ye baat kabhi samajh nahi aayegi...
vrinda: shaan tum jante the na amar k rude behavior k peeche ye reason hai, isiliye hamesha avoid karte the answer nahi dete the...?
shaan: vrinda... aisa nahi hai...
vrinda: shaan.. haan ya naa??
shaan: han
vrinda; thank u so much.. i knw tum nahi chahte the ki main hurt hun, but u kne truth samne aa hi jata hai...
vrushi: vrinda... tum aise nahi jaa sakti... hum tumhe aise nahi jaane denge...
vrinda: vrushi... maine sirf D3 permanently choda hai, hamari friendship nahi todi hai...

vrinda sits in her car and leaves...


palki is so stressed that she doesnt know what to do...
now she also understands that vrinda has heard her and amar's convo yesterday...

plaki calls amar and tells him about vrinda leaving the show, and also suggesting charlie's name to b taani...
amar is shocked to the core.. never in his dreams he thought vrinda would leave the show, and that too for charlie...

amar: palki what r u saying...
palki: yes amar... some fairy has granted ur wish,, from today charlie will play taani;s role...
amar: what happend??? i mean vrinda...
palki: she left the show...
amar: what??
palki: yes...

before amar cud say anythinf palki cuts the line...


guys wait for the next part... i myself dont knw how m i supposed to mould the story... but trust me... it will be best for vrimar...

love you guys...










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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg superb concept
Loved both d chaps
They were awesome😊
Shan n vrushi r so sweet..
Their bond with vrinda was superb😛
Lavin also knows vrinda likes Amar
Omg vrinda left d show
Can't wait 4 next update
Plz update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3:
palki cuts the line...
amar is shocked as well as confused...
shocked because vrinda left the show, and recommended charlie for taani's role... and confused bcoz she left the show after rejoining it... as fas as he knows vrinda was very excited to be back on the sets of D3... but he doesnt yy he is feeling so bad...
shrugging these thoughts, he goes to charlie...
and hugs her from back...
charlie: kya hua baby... aaj tna pyar?? kuch toh zaruru hai...
amar: achcha, firstly ujhe tumhe pyar karne k liye kisi reason ki zarurat nahi hai.. and secondly main bht khush hun, kyuki aaj se tum rey ki taani ka role play karogi, as vrinda ne ye role chodh dia, infact usne D3 hi chodh dia...

charlie: what?? ab aise achanak kyu?
2days back meri ussse baat hui thi and she was very excited.. but aaj achanak se usne D3 chod dia... amar.. kahin tumne usse kuch bola toh nahi naa?????

amar: no baby... main toh usse baat bhi nahi karta, main kyu usse kuch bolne jaunga...
now leave all thia, and get ready.. hume 1 hr mein set pe pahuchna hai...
charlie: okay..

they both get ready and leaves for the set...

on the other part of the city... vrinda goes to the airport, and gets ticket for australia, to go to her masi... and never return back to India...

vrinda is in plane and she is thinking about all the moments she spent with amar, and also as taarey... she also remembers how rude amar was from the first day of her shoot.. till yesterday, she dint know the reason, but today she is very well aware of the reason behind amar;s rude behavior towards her...

vrinda: amar, main apko kabhi hurt nahikarna chahti thi... infact maine D3 join hi apke liye kia tha, but us time mujhe apke and charlie ke barey mein nahi pata tha... warna main kabhi apki life mein aati hi nahi... aapne mujhe bht hurt kia apne rude behavior se but main bhagwan se hamesha apki and charlie ki happiness k liye pray karungi...

flight takes off... and vrinda leaves india forever...(this is what she thinks)


at D3 set:
amar charlie arrives...
no one is talking properly with amar... not even shan and vrushi...
charlie finds it a bit strange, as shan alwaz jokes round her and amar.. but today he is behaving very professionally...

amar goes to talk to shan...
amar: shan... meri baat sun, vrinda k show chodne mein mera koi hath nahi hai... maine usse kuch nahi kaha...
shan: amar maine aisa kab kaha ki tune usse kuch kaha hai.. tujhe clarifications dene ki zarurat nahi hai...
amar: yaar shan, tu mujhse aise kyu baat kar raha hai, jaise maine koi bht badi galti kar di ho??

just then vrushi comes there...
amar: achcha hua vrushi tu aa gayi, ab tum hi shan ko kuch samjhao...
vrushi: excuse me amar... hamara scene hai.. palki mam bula rahi hai...
shan and vrushika leaves...
amar: ye sab ko kya ho gaya hai, ye sab vrinda k show se jane ka reason mujhe kyu maan rahe hain...
just then he remembers his last day's convo with palki...
ohh god, kahi vrinda ne kal meri n palki ki baat toh nhi sun li... agar aisa hai toh mujhe usse baat karni hogi... and jo bhi misunderstanding hai usey clear karni hogi...

amar calls on vrinda's no...
but the no is not in use...
ama: how is this possible, kal tak toh ye no chal raha tha, toh aaj achanak se not in use??
fir se try karts hun...
he dails again, and again the same reply...
he dails man times, and evrytime same reply...

he gets frustrated and throws the cell on the floor...
with the sound of breaking shan and vrushi comes towards amar...

vrushi: ab koi fayda nahi hai usey call karne ka...
shaan: ab ye no vrinda ka nahi hai...
amar: kya matlab... ye toh vrinda ka hi no tha na...
vrushi: tha, jab tak wo india mein thi... wo apni k paas australia chali gayi hai, kabhi na wapas aane k liye.,...
amar: kya..?? usne jane se pehele mujhse baat karni zaruri nahi samjhi??
shaan: kyun baat karti wo tujhse aur kya baat karti..??? tu uske hi ka reply bhi nahi karta, aur na hi tu uska friend hai.. aur waise bhi tu toh usey pasand nahi karta na... tu usey charlie se taani ka role cheenne k liye nafrat karta hai na, toh achcha hua wo yahan se chali gayi...

amar is silent...
only one thing is ringing in his mind...
vrinda left him forever, but y he is feeling like this, he has no idea...

after shoot, everyone leaves from there...
charlie goes back home, as she doesnt know about what happend between vrushan and amar...
while amar goes to the beach and sits on a huge rock...

amar: mujhe vrinda ke jane ka itna bura kyu lag raha hai??
then he remembers each and every moment he spent with vrinda, as amar as well as rey...
he remembers their intimate scenes while shooting for D3...

he gets frustrated and closes his eyes... only vrinda's face comes infront of him...
he then realises that he is actually in love with vrinda, her smile, her bubliness, ...

present:
amar is sitting near the window of his room, and is thinking about the day 3years back he realised his love for vrinda... and that very day when vrinda left him forever...

his eyes then roams around the beach view... and he sees a known figure with a boy...
not some random boy with lavin...
amar thinks this girl mite be one of the girlfriends of lavin...

but suddenly he becomes freeze...
the girl turned towards him and its none other than vrinda...

she is wearing...




amar: ye toh vrinda hai... he ws about to run to her... but he stoppped when he saw lavin hugging her from back holding her waist...

ye lavin and vrinda... sath mein kya kar rahe hain... and lavin vrinda ko aise kyu hug kar raha hai...
vrinda ne toh sabse contact tod dia tha na, fir...

but then he becomes more shocked when he sees shantanu and vrushika running towards vrinda and lavin and hugging them...

now amar cant take this anymore...

amar too goes towards them...
amar: hey guys... tum sab yahan... and lavin tum toh london chale gaye the na, toh yahan achanak india mein...??
lavin: hey dude... wo actually kya hai na, friend ne yaad kia toh chala aaya... anywaz aaj meri friend ki engagement hai, so usi ke liye yahan aaya hun...

all this while amar's eyes are fixed on vrinda, but vrinda acts as if she doesnt recognise amar...
vrinda: lavin, shan, vrushi ab hume chalna chahiye...
vryshi: haan, nahi toh mere hone wale jijaji ko lagega ki maine unki vrinda ko unse chura lia... btw vrinda, aaj toh main saahil se puch ke hi rahungi ki usne tunhe pataya toh akhir pataya kaise ki tumne ek baar mein shaadi k liye haan kar di...

now amar got the whole thing, the friend of lavin who is getting engaged is vrinda...
HIS VRINDA...
he ws angry and very much outraged...

amar: showing his hand forwards... congratulations on your wedding...
vrinda: folds her hands in namstey and says thanks..

amar thinks now she even has a problem in shaking hands with me, but few minutes ago shan, vrushika, and lavin were hugging her she dint say anything...
amar: ohh ur welcum...
but i m really hurt that u dint even invite me for ur engagement...atleast u cud have invited even if ro formality as we were once co actors working together in a serial...
vrinda: brings an invitation card from her bag, and gives it to him.. and says... u r more than welcome... but not as my ex co star... but as shaan;s best friend...
since we were not even friends i ws doubtful whether to invite you or not, but its nt like i dint want to invite you...
anywaz... see u all in the evening... sahil mera wait kar rahe honge...
bye...

all: bye...
amar is heart broken knowing that his vrinda is gonna be engaged to some one else...
he leaves for his house...
and rest three laughs and shakes hands, and says plan 1 successful...


(i know this part is a bit confusing, but this how come this plan started to work, and when charlie and amar broke up will be in the next part)

enjoy reading!!
















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Posted: 12 years ago
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read all chapters they r amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsmmm awsm awsm!!! update soon
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part 4:

amar goes back home, and lies on his bed...
amar(thinking): vrinda ki shaadi ho rahi hai, and what vrushi was saying ki vrinda ne ek baar mein shaadi k liye haan kar di... iska matlab vrinda us sahil pyaar karti hai!! nahi, aisa nahi ho sakta... agar vrinda sahil se pyar karti hai, toh wo kya tha jo maine apne liye uski eyes mein dekha tha... oh god!! aap mere sath aisa kyu kar rahe ho???

he remembers the day vrinda left him:

flashback:
amar after realising that he actually loves vrinda... came back home...
charlie was sitting on dining table having coffee with ear phn in her ears...
he dint bother to distrb her..
he directly went into his room.. and lied down
after sometime charlie came there...
charlie: baby, tum kab wapas aaye... and wher wer u after the shoot...
its soo much fun shooting tarey... it tuk me to another world...

charlie keeps on blabbering, but amar is thinking onli abt vrinda...
charlie: amar.. kya hua?? y r u soo tensed...???
amar: kuch nahi...
charlie: vrinda ke baarey mei soch rahe ho naa??
amar gets shocked...
amar: tumhe kaise pata??
charlie: main bhi usi k baarey mein soch rahi thi, usey meri wajah se taani ka role chodna pada.. usey kaisa lag raha hoga... ab main usse kaise baat karungi...
i think muhe kal hi uske ghar jana chahiye
amar: koi fayda nahi hai
charlie: huh!!??
amar: shan and vrushi ne bataya ki aaj hi vrinda hamesha k liye australia chali gayi hai apni masi k paas
charlie: ohh!1
amar: anywaz... charlie ab tumhe bhi sona chahiye.. main bht thak gaya hun...
charlie: hmmm... gudnite...
saying this she hugs amar...
but amar cudnt bring himself to hug charlie...
when charlie sensed that amar is not hugging her back...she just amar's cheeks.. and leaves...

amar is not able to sleep whole night...

its almost one month that vrinda has left india... and D3 is going normal.. but not a single person on the sets is talking to amar except work related talks.. not even shan and vrushi...

amar is even aloof from charlie.. and this dint go unnoticed by charlie...
she somehow got an idea.. about amar's feelings towards vrinda...

coz whenevr anyone wud take vrinda's name amar was first to listen very intently as if his life was depending on it...
slowly she understud that its not her but vrinda that rules amar's heart...

she broke up with amar... and indirectly asking him to confess his love to vrinda...

flashback ends...

amar: aaj main vrinda ko bata dunga, ki i love her.. main uski shaddi kisi sahil se nahi hone dunga...

its evening:
amar, shan, vrushi, lavin evrybosy reaches vrinda's place...
even palki, and other screw members of their show and vrinda's other friends... rithvik dhanjani with his wfe asha negi... archie kalsi with alisha singh... sneha kapoor all are present there...

shan goes to sneha...
shan: hey
sneha: hii
shan: u r luking very pretty
sneha: thanks shaan.,..even u r luking very handsome in this dark green sherwani...
shaan: after all meri behen ki engagement hai...
sneha: and meri nanad ki...!!
shaan gets surprised: whaat????
sneha: (funbles)... haa...aannn... i mean meri close fr...friend ki...
shaan: holds sneha's hand and takes her out of the hall
sneha: ye tum mujhe kahan le ja rahe ho shaan
sneha: main hamesha se tumse kuch kehena chahta tha
sneha: haan.. toh u cud have siad that inside...
shaan: tumne jab D3 choda tha.. then i was hurt bt mujhe pata nahi tha ki main itna hurt q feel kar raha hun.. but then thot shyad tum meri achchi frnd ho isiliye.. but i was wrong swayam ban k sneha se pyaar katrte karte shaan ko actually sneha se pyaar ho gaya...
i love u sneha...
sneha has tears in her eyes...
i love u too shaan
and they hug each oother...

voice: ahem! ahem!
shan and sneha turns
vrinda, lavin, vrushi, archi, alisha are standing there with teasing expressions on their faces...

vrinda: lagta hai meri engagement k sath sath aaj kisi aur ki bhi engagement karni padegi
sneha: vrinda.. aisa nahi hai
shaan: arey!! aisa kaise nahi hai
maine tumhare and apne mummy daddy ko bula lia hai... wo aa chuke hai... aaj hamari bhi engagement hai
sneha is shocked...
sneha: how??
vrinda: wo kya hai na i alwaz kn ew shaan loves u.. but jab tumne mujhe bataya that u also loves him... toh mujhse control nahi hua.. and i planned a surprise engagement for u

they all hug each other and moves inside...

sahil is waiting for vrinda...
sahil was about to put ring in vrinda's finger when
amar: stop all this...
ye engagement nahi hogi... qki main vrinda se pyaar karta hun and i knw ki wo bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai...
vrinda is shocked... she dint knw abt charmar's breakup...
when she dint see charlie with amar she thought that might be charlie was busy... thats y she dint come

shan, vrushi, sneha, lavin are also shocked... as they dint knw that amar wud confess his feelings soo soon...

sahil: starts laughig and soo other gang members
vrinda stud there shocked...
sahil: yaa dude we all know that u and vrinda loves each other... isiliye toh ye sab drama kia tha
vrinda is more shocked to learn that it was an act...
amar: act kaisa act...
sahil: yahi ki meri and vrinda ki engagement ka act.. although vrinda k liye real tha but baki sab k liye act tha even for her family...
coz they knew that she loves u...
shaan: haan amar... vrinda ko india bulana, tere ghar k paas hi beach side pe vrinda ka milna, lavin and vrinda ka hug.. tujhe uski engagement pe invite karwana sab plan tha.. taaki vrinda india aaye,,, and tu apne love ko confess kar paaye...
voce: right!!
evryone turns towards the voice..
and vrimar are shocked to see charlie...

charlie: ye hamara plan tha taki tum dono ek ho sako...
vrinda: charlie tum bhi.. but tum toh amar ki gf ho.. amar tumse pyaar karte hai mujhse nahi
charlie: nahi vri.. we boke off three years back.. the day u left usi din i realised that amar was not himself.. and slowly i learnt that amar loves u so we broke off.. bt there was no chance, we cud contact u and ask u to come back..
then 3 months back i came here.. and talked to ur parents abt evrything and even sahil was here.. so we decided its time to call u back...
and then shaan, lavin, vrushi, archie, alisha, samenthon, mac.. all were the parts of this plan...
but now i m happy that finally u two r together...
she hugs vrinda

vrinda: who says?? we r together??/
i dnt knw him.. nor do i love him...
i cant accept this relation...
and she runs from there...
amar has tears in his eyes seeing the love of his life not accepting his love...
evryone leaves from there...


charlie, shan, sneha, vrushi, lavin goes to amar..
amar: yaar y is she doin yhis.. i knw maine usey bht hurt kia.. but i really love her
sneha: amar relax... she is angry on u.. and u have to woo her back...
shaan: right .. i knw vrinda loves u too.. she has proved it many times before too... but she is just hurt and angry on u...
charlie: yes, and we all are here to help uy to win her back..
lavin: yaa dude!! i knw vrinda kisi se bhi zada der naraaz nahi reh sakti... jab uska gussa shaant ho jayega then she willl be all yours...😉

amar: i guess u are rite... ab dekho miss vrinda dawda tum khud mujhse aa ke kahogi to maary u as u love me...☺️

othere: ye hui naa baat
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Imjust luv I really want amar and vrinda to be a real life couple

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