A writer par excellence!!âď¸ You have given the story the finishing touches I always wanted to see on air. I'm sure I will read it again,thank you for this amazing workđđ. Loved it to the core, especially these
1)Excellent portrayal of Khushi's new avatar. Always wanted to see her financially dominating Arnav for insulting her about her class .The writer in you, gave her character the well deserved justice . When she started giving back, he couldn't take it, felt pity for him but he deserved it.
2)The Anjali you portrayed has more depth and was strong enough for both Arnav and herself. Also you gave her the reason to be strong ( the baby),cv's should have taken that move. You have wonderfully finished the cv's untold story with the new entry ,a truly genuine and deserving guy who can treat her right.
3)You have brilliantly unraveled the interconnected past of the protagonists, and Arnav's father's involvement in it adds another feather in your cap.
I know one should never question 'how' in a story, but still felt a little confused on how Khushi collected the evidence of her fight with Shyam on the terrace, guessing Shyam(the creepiest guy everđ) bugged the terrace as well long before Khushi found his true intentions .
Enjoyed your work thoroughly, thank you.
It is a job well done.
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