you are only mine- mg ff pt 10/ pg 19/ 12.8.2013

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usha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

awesum updt ...loved it...loved the way maan tortured brij...cliffhanger???waiting eagerly fr nxt updt...continue soon...

and fr studies...all the best...will wait eagerly fr ur updts...

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

superb.. i read all parts

add me in ur pm list..

update soon.. waiting waiting

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drrose31

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

liked the part

thanks for pm

cont soon

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sayu123
note-
hello readers,
i am sayu . well my exams in stating from mrch 20th and then my preprations are now started and have to submit some projjects and assinments . my prelim was finished on sat and now break of 1 week and then start my oreals and presentionts start. so, i will not able update my story regurly and will try to give some more up[dates before my eaxms start. hope u understand and wait for my updates.😊

ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS

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sayu123

@sayu123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

part 12-

warning 16+: some mature content ahead and plz don't bash me.

past

maan made call to geet's home. Here in geet's home geet was alone and petrified of her parents. bcoz her bauji and maa solding her like anything. geet's bauji here landline ringing. they stopped scolding to geet and received the phone call.

geet's bapuji " hello, kaun bol raha hai?"

he here's cruel laugh of man. and got scared." kaun ... bol raha hai?" asked in shaking voice.

maan" ji koi nahi bus aapka subhchitank."

" maine aapko geet's ko marne se mana kiya tha na" "to aab aapke use parinam bhi bhotoke"

geet's bapuji got confused and asked" aapko kaise pata ke hum geet ko pit hai"

maan didn't tell anything and they haer's painful screamingof unknown person.

here in godown maan bitting the brij and after making call they gave him electrical shocks and anngonly he screamed " aahh... aah..."

geet's bapuji here screamed and got scared " ye kaunsi chilanke awaz hai?" and some sweat pearls came on his forehead. He stated shaking just like dry leaf and seeing this geet's maa got scaered.

Maan" Suna aapne Mr. Handa ye aapke bete ke chikne ki awaz hai"

"aabhi to bahot kuch baaki hai" and cut the call.

p.s. sorry for grammer and spelling mistake.

sorry for being so late and kept u hanging.

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mandeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

fabulous :)

loving this cruel maan taking revenge for geet's pain:)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

well he did say not to beat geet
but did you guys listen
so now brij is paying for same
how could they do this to their own daughter pathetic i tell ya