MG FF- PARINEETA THREAD 10 - Page 69

Part 79

Geet is totally broken but Maan got the essence – "He needs to be old self" to get her old self….people at office were so bitchy….seriously plain j and poking their nose where they don't belong.

Gayathri is still spewing Venom…that lady needs some serious reality check……and Roops..she is seriously funny. Well kids are now off to the trip and Geet madam is angry. Chalo, kuch toh reaction diya…gussa hi sahi.

Last line was sweet – she was restless, so he held her close and slept off.

Part 80

So Maan finally found her journal…hope it gives him insight of her crazy love….Geet is still very angry and upset but more than that she is fearful of getting hurt again….

Oh the starting of the diary itself was beautiful. Maan's thick head should now realize her love just by her smallest of acts like putting their name together.

Beautiful poem Ash…..Geet has indeed sacrificed herself in spite of miles for him…..now it is his turn to realize it….

Geet is really scared of his love now…she doesn't know when he will push her and she is scared of getting hurt….very well written Ash

Part 81

Maan rejected her outright…he is just feeling fraction of that pain because atleast he knows that she loves him but denying it to protect whatever is left of her….

And Geet…jitna bhi deny kare, she is helpless in front of her heart. She knows it and so does Maan. She couldn't feed him but then couldn't eat herself either. It was sad but cute because she just can't ignore him as much as she wants.

And finally haye Maan cooked for her. Slept in her lap and her heart wavering.

I just loved the daily mundane things which you explain Ash but amount of love and care they reflect. Very well written indeed.