Innocent Love ||KR OS||

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This one's for the kriyaansh week. I did not mean to show "you know who" in a bad light , but since i did not want Sharon to be the dazzler in this one , i gave her the attitude actually it wasn't even that bad. :P

Innocent Love

The dazzlers were sitting in the canteen (Taani was one of them). Taani was frustrated. A new girl had come to college and had the guts to fight with Taani.

"How dare she! Bloody newbee."

"Chill Taani! She will know her real place in some days."

Rey said , busy chatting with swayam on his phone. The divide between these gangs were just to show others actually they were really very good friends.

"Look , the new bee is here!"

Simmi said in anger.

"She is hot!"

Vicky exclaimed , checking her out , he received a smack from Sharon.

"Mind your language vicky."

Rey looked up from his phone finally , the girl had her back facing him. Rey got up and went there to give her a piece of his mind.

"Excuse me!"

The girl turned , and rey was shocked to see her. An automatic smile came on his lips , the girl looked at him and smiled back.

"Finally."

The girl said , and she hugged him. The dazzlers practically fell from their seats in surprise except Sharon who had a wide smile. The girl pulled back .

"I tried to search you everywhere , but couldn't! Why can't you be in one of those classes huh?"

The girl asked while pouting.

"I never knew you are coming. And when did this plan come up?"

"A week back. I thought to give you a surprise , but your college gave me a surprise . That girl , by mistake I stamped her foot , and she made such a big issue about that , I mean she was the one who was busy ordering the two girls behind her (not simmi and rinni any random girls) , and all of a sudden there was a crowd gathered. I just gave her a piece of my mind. She better show her attitude to someone else , not me."

"Chill baatcutter."

The girl was none other than kria , you may have guessed it.

"And what were you going to tell me?"

"Voh , actually."

That's when swayam entered . Kria saw him , he was with his friends.

"Sammy!"

She ran and gave him a bone crushing hug.

"Kria tu idhar?"

"Nahi mein udhar hun yaha mera bhoot hain."

"Idiot i mean , you here all of a sudden?"

"No one wants to see me here or what , I will leave then."

"Just kidding now are you going to crush me?"

"Oops."

She moved back. Swayam gave her a small peck on her forehead.

"Kaisi hain?"

"Great."

Rey looked there and muttered.

"Kya yaar , thodi der toh rehne deta kria ke paas."

"Arre rey , waha swayam ko gaaliyan dena band karo bechare ne apni jeeb (tongue) kaat di toh?"

He heard kria say.

"I am not!"

"Oh you are."

"I am not!"

"You are!"

"No!"

"Yes!"

"No!"

"Yes!"

"No."

With every no yes , they were coming one step ahead , and were only inches apart , when rey gave her a flying kiss , kria was quiet and then nods in a no. To which he laughed.

"I win."

Kria looked at him , a small pout came on her lips.

"Go to hell Rey. Ek toh I come to Mumbai for you both and this is the treatment I get? J-E-R-K , that's what you are. Get lost , don't even show me your face from now. I'll go back to dehradun and I swear to god , I won't ever come back."

She turned , but rey held her hand and turned her pulling her close , he said.

"Ek baar i left you , but now i won't let you leave me ,get that?"

"Bloody selfish moron."

"Not selfish , just too deeply in love with this baatcutter of mine , that I can't let her leave."

Kria blushed , he kissed her forehead.

Swayam cleared his throat.

"Rey , control dude."

Kria giggled , and moved back.

"By the way. Where is shona?"

"Finally , someone did realise that i exist."

Sharon said , kria turned to that direction and smiled , hugging her.

"I missed you so much Sharon."

"I missed you too."

"Woah , why would you two miss each other , isn't kria staying with you Sharon?"

Asked a rather confused rey.

"No , she is not. I knew she is coming , but i did not know when is she coming. So she was staying in a hotel maybe."

"Yes , i was."

---

"Rey! She was the girl who fought with me and you are saying I love you to her? She is a freaking weakling."

"Woah , control taani , that's my girlfriend you are talking about ."

"And my sister."

Sharon said defensively. Kria smiled.

"You are cool , so not what taani described. "

Simmi said , kria smiled and turned to rey.

"Rey , mujhe college nahi dekhaoge?"

"Sure madam let's go."

--

Rey took her to the fire escape after showing her this college.

"Why have you bought me here rey?"

"Kria , remember when we were in school we used to go the stairs and talk all day , hiding from teachers , bunking classes together?"

"Yes."

"When i left dehradun and i came to Mumbai , i missed that fun. So then i started coming here whenever i missed your presence , and you used to sit here , all day remembering our fun moments. This place bought me at peace , and this was the place , where i hid while bunking classes just to speak to you . This place means a lot to me , and it's special. This place made me realise that , even if we both are miles apart , our relationship will be really very strong."

Kria smiled , this side of rey was closed to everyone except her. They weren't the best of friends in childhood , but had their own sweet memories together , they had never realised when they got so close. Unlike others they never termed their closeness as friendship but something special , and then they finally confessed each other. They were very frank in their relationship. Everything and anything was shared. Keeping aside her thoughts she sat beside him on the stairs and held his hand.

"Rey , we both will make this place even more special , with new memories and much more fun."

Rey smiled at her , and pulled her in a side hug , as they replayed each and every moment of their life , and at that time they were the school going kriyaansh again , complaining about stupid things , teachers , fighting with each other , just deeply and madly in love with each other , forever and ever.

END

Just a random thought , i know i jumbled up everything. But i hope you all liked it. Tried my best.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
yaaayyy !!!
me first ... me first ... me first !!!!!
now coming to the OS
such sweet one 😳
taani toh humesha hi problem khadi karti h so now i have stopped giving her a damn 😆
such cute KriShaReYam moments
loved em all !!!!
and the OS was fantastic ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
awesome
different os
i luvd d twist
kriya is rey girlfrand & taani face
Edited by SweetDevil_KR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonder full oS
love it
par mujh esa kyu lag rhahai ki phle padh huyahai
anyway Awosm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os.. loved it.. loved d way u showed every character.. kria n rey r already in a relationship n they had long distance relation.. aww cute rey wen he was jealous of swayam .. loved d way rey supported kria n sharon defended her wen taani said kria a weakling.. loved d end part of them remembering d past n rey telling her abt how fireescape became important for him.. loved it awesome n superbly penned os..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really loved d os..
Kriyaansh in a relationship.. n that too long distance.. cute..
taani toh hamesha hi problems create karti hai..
love it when rey supported kriya..
ending was superb..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os
love how kria was tlking to reyam n sharon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely OS dear
enjoyed reading
thnx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superr like!!
So cute
perfect title ''innocent love''.
Loved everything abt..

Cute fight
kriyam bonding
krisha's love
and beloved fire escape.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Really loved it

the bonding b/w Kria-Rey-Swayam-Sharon

hehehe vicky n simmi's remark on kria

Good one :)

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