ARSHI TWO SHOT-ITS ALL THERE IN HEART (for all girls out there) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a really lovely story Ankita, and the lesson in it was very good. No matter where one goes or tries to run away from problems, they still exist.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing one!!!!loved it❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a well thought out story to depict current life
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your thought is appreciable & so true each passing minute is a question in every girl's life as to how will it be with good as well as bad surrounding them, but still the girl lives her life & all that parents can do is to teach them to be strong & brave enough to face this cruel world ... lovely writing 👏... the way Arnav tried to make Khushi understand that they can't keep running in fear of keeping their daughters safe as danger might spring up anywhere & at any moment but the thing that they had in control is to grow their children to be strong was fab 👍🏼


A mother's fear after hearing such horrifying incidents engulfing her & panic literally eating her up was excellently narrated. Khushi raging once Arnav tried to explain his point rather than agree with her decision of shifting to London, her mind starting to reason his point, she gaining courage from his words as a father & finding solace in his arms was excellently framed


Arnav trying to bring her out of the fear that was suffocating her mind & trying to help her understand that if they keep running they will have to run & finally they will have no more place to run but the only solution was to grow their daughters with confidence to handle themselves in every situation was wise


Loved it when Arnav lashed out on the lady who said that Arshi didn't have a son, that it didn't matter & accusing them of treating children differently based on their gender ... so true , why don't all understand this & grow both equally ???? understanding the world is so tough ... the whole world cannot be changed but if each one of us have the mindset like Arnav all will be good & respect every human being & crime would die


Loved the ending where Arshi sleep beside their children peacefully with the thought of nurturing & protecting them ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🤗

Thanks for the PM 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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What can I say... I'm speechless... U have written such a sensitive issue in such a beautiful way...Like every parents Khushi is too worried abt her daughters but Arnav too have a point...we can't just run away from the problem & anything can happen anywhere as life is very unpredictable... The way he tried to make her understand is wonderful...Loved it... Awesome work
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A very well written OS touching upon a very important issue.
Arnav and Khushi's conversation was extremely nice!
The note at the end was well said :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was an lovely OS.

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