DILWALE DEVIL DHULANIYA LE JAYENGE...!! ~ KR FF.. *Hold On* - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

47

Views

6k

Users

19

Likes

119

Frequent Posters

Dreamer3003 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Beautiful start both of u 👏
Loved it 😊
Continue soon 😊
sadafarsha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Its awsum amazing zabardast
I luved it alooot se bhi zyada
But yeh bohat chotu update tha :(
Mujhe bara update perhna hai pweesh (puppy face)
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#43
AWESOME AND BRILLIANT WELL WRITTEN... DO CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME
Kryan_SanDhir thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awesome :) really good :))
Plz continue soon and plz pm me
kriapatel thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#45
so cute
the way girl describe kria
that was really sweet
lovely update
arsha_simran thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#46
first of all...
naam dilwale devil dulhania le jaayenge.,,,,,matlab???Rey ko devil bola/????😲😲😲
bechaara..,
but then intro nice!!! Taa slave heheheee...slave hokar bhi princess se jal thi hai,...senseless!!!!!
and den cuming to the chappy I thought a bit more respect types hoga kyunki raja maharajaon ki story hai and us zamane mein I love you????
modern zamane ke king ang queen hai kya!????
I guess wo hi hoga...
but usko chod kar just loved the update!!!!
kria ko kitni acchi taraf se describe kara hai uski sissy ne...
loved it!!!!
jhalli,cute si, masoom si, sab ko help karne wali, gusse wali,natkhati si, shararti si
awwwewee just love this!!!;!
waiting for the nxt update!!!!
update soon
nature2 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

CHAPTER 1


In the palace of Udiapur there was a girl sitting in the most beautiful room of entire palace and writing down something in her personal diary...

Girls POV

Meri choti behen, uss jaisa iss duniya me koi nhi hai... aur ho bhi nhi sakta kyu ki wo KRIYA GHAI' jo hai...bohot badi jhali hai par dil ki saaf bhi hai..massoom hai aur sabki madat karne waali..

Kabhi choti bachi ki tarah harkatein kart hai..toh kbhi badi hogyi ho ese baat karti hai..maa papa ki laddli aur humare rajya ka aakhoka taara..aur humare rajya ki praja ki sabse laadli aur pyaari rajkumari...

Uski haasi se pura rajh mahel roshan ho uthta hai...aur agar udaas hojaye to chand bhi rooth jata hai humse..aur agar gussa ho jaye to samjho sabki shamat aagyi..aur jab shararate karti hai tab use bachna mushkil hi nhi na mumkin hai..

Magar sabki bohot fikar rehti hai usse...maa papa aur mujhe bohot maan deti hai..humare praja aur nokron ka bohot khayal rakhti hai..sabka khayal rahta hai usse..kisko kya chaiye ye sab dekh thi hai...kisko bhi dukhi nhi dekh sakti hai...sabko apne masoomiyat se khush karti deti hai...

Magar kbhi kbhi dar lagta hai ki koi uski iss masomiyat ka fayada na uthale...koi bhi mushkil me ho ye janke unki madat mai lag jati hai fir dekhti bhi nhi ki wo insaan aacha hai ya bura...
Kbhi kbhi bohot galtiya karti hai..magar uspe chilane ka maan nhi karta hai...kya kare itni pyaari jo hai..eysi hai meri jhali si magar pyaari si kriya meri choti behen jise me apne aapse bhi zada pyaar karti ho...jise me kbhi bhi udaas nhi dekh sakti hoo..i love u kriya..!!

POV End

Girl closed her dairy and went to kriya's room and looked at her..kriya was sleeping very cutely...the girl went near kriya and crased her hair...nd kissed her forehead...and went back to her own room closing the door without making any noise...nd slept..

*~*~*~*

Heya guyzz so this was 1st chappy
Hope u all like it
Plzzz do hit like tab nd leave ur review..
Sorry I knw chota update hai
Bt m not felling well so plzz do understand
Promise next update will be bada wala
Have great day..!!




Beautifull chpter👏👏
Kanchi.. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Chappy 1

Was awesome
Luvd it...
Kria ka description bahut acchi tarah se diya uski di ne
jhalli,cute,masoom ,gusse wali,shararti aur sab ko help karne wali...
Luvd it...
Amazingly written
Update de nxt part soon

Sry 4 de late comments
Had ma exzms

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".