Intezaar: Fan Fic - Page 3

Originally posted by: jenny1000

happe,

plz do.. I love ur writing skills and I think u would do justice do all my fan fics.. u can even continue this one...😆

awwwww thanx for believing in me. But I can never be good as you. I even wrote on your 1st fan-fic that I became fan of your fan-fic. But I will surely try my best. 😳
As for this one, I would love to continue this as well. I'll try tomorrow as it's late now and I'll be off to bed in short minutes.

As always amazing part. I loved it. Kripa is so much like me. I always used to tell my bua that I wanna adopt her daughter. My bua is like before marriage, I am like yes, right now. I love kids as well. 😳

Originally posted by: happe

As always amazing part. I loved it. Kripa is so much like me. I always used to tell my bua that I wanna adopt her daughter. My bua is like before marriage, I am like yes, right now. I love kids as well. 😳

Thankssss Hapee for always believing in me.. Ur a true angel!!!

Will miss ya loads.....

Yeah, I decided to give Kripa's character a completely different look.. even I wanna adopt kids, i think i love them soooo much..

When i am in India, I make it a point to go to an orphange at least once and play with kids.. they are soooooo adorable...😃

wowwwwwwwwwww jenny.................all three part was awsome......just loved it...........cant wait for next part..........

~sweta~

Guys, I'll be continuing this fan-fic as well since Jenny doesn't have time. So please do read it when you get time.

that was great,plz continue soon

Part 4

Next Morning

Everyone gets ready at their place. They all have breakfast at their house with their families. Then everyone leaves for office. Angad. Naina. Prithvi, and Damini were already at the office waiting for Kripa and Gayatri.

First they had to drop Bhoomi at children care center and they came to office. Since Gayatri is only coming to office for today, she'll taking care of Bhoomi from now on.

At office

Kripa walks with Gayatri and everyone greet each other.

Angad was stealing glances of Kripa cuz she was looking beautiful in a turquoise color chooridaar.

They all go in board members room and they continue with their meeting. They ladies explained the project to Angad, Kripa, and Prithvi.

Now the ladies have explained the youngsters on what to do and how to handle project. They all leave from there while Kripa, Angad, and Prithvi were discussing the project thoroughly.

They were still talking about project when Kripa's cell rings.

Kripa: sorry guys, if you don't mind, can I attend this call.

Angad: of course, no problem

Kripa: thanks

Kripa then attends the call.

Kripa: hi bacha

It was boomi's call.

Bhomi: mamma, I miss you. Come home na.

Kripa: beta, main kaam kar rahi hoon na. Shaam ko aap se mil rahi hoon na.

Bhoomi: okay

Kripa: waise aap ko ghar kaun le kar aaya

Bhoomi: naani, wo mere liye khaana bana rahi hai

Kripa: wow bhoomi beta, u having lunch already w/o ur mamma, I am hungry now.

Bhoomi: mom you can come home now and eat with me

Kripa: I would love to beta, but I have work na

Bhoomi: will you take me for ice cream when you come home.

Kripa: bhoomi beta, aap janti hai na, aap ice-cream nahin kah sakti.

Bhoomi: mom please

Kripa: acha ice-cream nahin, par hum shaam ko movie dekhne chal sakta hain. Theek hai

Bhoomi: okay mom

Kripa: bye bacha, I'll come home soon

Bhoomi: love ya mom

Kripa: love you too, aur naani ko khoob pareshan karna

Bhoomi: MOM

Kripa: she is my mom na, I can say that

Bhoomi: bye mom

Kripa: bye beta

Kripa hangs the phone. Angad was staring at her whole time, he heard most of the conversation. Prithvi was out to get some files so only Angad and Kripa were in the room.

Kripa: sorry, meri beti bhi na

Angad: waise apki beti bohat hi pyaar hi

Kripa: thanx

Kripa: so where were we?

Angad: well right now it's time to eat lunch. If you don't mind me asking, will you go out on lunch with me?

Kripa (smiles): sure, I am starving.

Angad smiles back.

Angad: let me get Prithvi and ask him he wants to join us.

Kripa: sure

Prithvi comes in the room as Angad was going out. They meet at the door.

Angad: Prithvi, I am taking Kripa out for lunch, you wanna join us.

Prithvi: I would love to yaar but I can't. Just came from mom's cabin, I have to go with Mom at one of her friend's place.

Angad: oh okay. So we'll see you later.

Prithvi: ya, later today

Kripa says bye to Prithvi and she and Angad go for lunch.

At the restaurant

Kripa and Angad sit at one corner and talk as they wait for their food to arrive.

Angad: Kripa, you love Bhoomi a lot na?

Kripa: yah, she is my jaan.

Angad: Can I ask you something?

Kripa: sure

Angad: Why did you decide to adopt a child?

Kripa: Angad, I love kids. I used to visit orphanage often. Then one day Bhoomi was brought to that orphanage, she was so small. As soon as I looked at her, I felt something. Then I held in her my arms, I can still remember the smile she gave me when I touched her cheek. She looked like an angel. I just knew that I can't leave her in this orphanage. It's not that she wouldn't have gotten any care there, but because she needed a mother.

Angad: Kripa, I really respect you for that. It requires lot of courage to take such a decision. After all you were taking a responsibility for some one's life.

Kripa: thanks Angad, atleast you don't think I made a wrong decision.

Angad: why is that?

Kripa: nothing

Just then the waiter brought their food.

I'll continue when I get time.

great part happe 👏 👏
plz cont soon 😊

wow..happee.. u rock.. i couldn't have done better in this at all... 😉 👏

Great Part Happe!! Loved it! 👏