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Yaa, I know, what u all are looking at, It takes me forever to write fan fics.. But this one is such that anyone can continue it.. so all writer, can partcipate in this one...

Jenny Presents

Intezaar

A fan fic about A-K

Characters

KHANNAS

Angad Khanna: Angad is the richest kid in town, he is a singer and similar to character in the orginal show.

Naina Khanna: A widow who runs the khanna industries on her shoulders, she is very attached to her both sons, Angad and Kartik..

Kartik Khanna: Opposite to this character on the soap, very sweet and loving.. Always helps his mom and brother out.

Suraj Khanna: He is the adopted son of Naina and Dillip. He is actually their previous housekeepers son.

Teddy: He is the servant of the house

Niyati: Another servant of the house and is in love with Teddy.

Bose

Damini Bose: She is the loving mother of Mishti, Prithivi and Seema. She is also a widow and takes care of the bose family.

Mishti Bose: The girl in charge, very sporty and handles all the shows, and she has raised her brother Prithivi like a mother.

Seema Bose: The 2nd daughter of Damini Bose, Seema is very fun loving and senstive to things.

Prithivi Bose: He is the only son of the Bose Family and is very outgoing and loves to make friends. He lives in London with his nanny.

Khushboo: The bose family servant

SHARMA's

Gayatri Sharma: She is a widow and is mostly a housewife, She couldn't give her kids the education hey needed because they were in deep problems. She is best friends with Naina and Damini. But now runs BTN chnnel with Naina and Damini..

Kripa Sharma: A softspoken girl, very beautiful and a sweetheart at heart, she doesn't pay attention to her brain at all and listens to her heart all the time. Her weakness is Bhoomi, her child.

Bhoomi Sharma(age 3): She is the adopted daughter of Kripa. Kripa loves kids and works in an orphange. Although everyone thinks that Bhoomi is Kripa's sister, Bhoomi is her kid, but she hasn't given her birth or anything.

Aryan Sharma: He is the brother of Kripa and lives aboard.

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Intezaar is about two people who wait upon each other's time, those people that have always loved each other and will always do so. They were sepearted but again they kept meeting and meeting until one day when they realized their love, they had to part. Intezaar is about the Kasuati in which Angad, Kripa , Mishti and Prithivi have to go through.

I will post part 1 tommrrow...

comments plz..

Jenny

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Posted: 20 years ago
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awwww jenny its awesome...i love the new charachters yaar
pls continue soon 😊
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😆 😆 😆 jenny kya baat hai ...i luvd it yaar 😆 😆
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very good
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jaldi start karo
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sounds great, plz continue soon
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O Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Aa Ja O Meri Jaan
Mere Dil Ka Jahaan
Maange Teri Khabar
Dhoondhe Tera Nishaan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Tera Tujhako Saunp De Kya Laagat Hai Mor
Mera Mujhamen Kuchh Naaheen Jo Hovat So Tor

Tere Bin Mera Man
Jaise Ban Men Hiran
Jaise Pagali Pawan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
A girl is dancing to the rythms of the song wearing hooped earings , a watch on her left hand and a braclet on her right hand. The braclet reads : Princess. She is spinning onto the stage listening to her favorite song whenone person lays a hand on her. She turns and sees her brother Aryan standing there. She smiles and walks upto him.She then releases her hair and sits down with him. She then takes out of the thali full of goods and he smiles. He takesout his hand and she smiles. She ties the bond on his hand and he smiles. She then shly askes. Kripa: Bhai, mera gift?Aryan: Oh god, tumhara gift, I forgot about it..Kripa: AGAIN!The girl sits in one corner not looking at her brother, He comes and gives her a warm hug. He then takes a mike and singsPhoolon Ka Taaron Ka Sabka Kehna Hai
Ek Hazaron Mein Meri Behna Hai
Sari Umar Hame Sang Rehna Hai
She smiles and looks at him. She then gives him a hug and waves him good-bye. She then picks up her bag and rushes towards the school when she realizes she is late.While she is getting ready to go to school waiting in traffic, one man has come out the car and heads towards the school. He sees a girl rushing to him and he gives her a big fat hug.Simi: Kya Mamu, You are late?Angad: Opps I am sooo sorry Simiji..Prithivi: Hi Simi..Simi: Hi Mamu, how are you?Prithivi: I am good..Angad: Kyun Simi, How was school?Simi; Great, I just made a brand new friend!Prithivi: Really, introduce us to her!Simi: Bhoomi!A girl at age 3 running down the gardens, She was wearing her unifom and looked really pretty. Angad and Prithivi saw her and smiledBhoomi: Hi simi, Kya Huva?Simi: Bhoomi, this is my Prithivi mamu and Angad mamu.Bhoomi: Hi, nice to meet you.Angad: Same here Sweetheart, Where's your mom?Kripa just got out of the car in that time, and rushed towards Bhoomi.Angad and Prithivi turned around to see a beautiful girl in her 20's rushing towards BhoomiIt's not true that they hadn't seen a beautiful girl than her, but something about her appelaed to both of them.Kripa smiled and picked up Bhoomi in her arms.Kripa: Hi beta, am soooo sorry.Bhoomi: Late again.Kripa: Sorry, mamu had came.Bhoomi: Really? What did he say?Kripa: Today is Rakshabandhan nah?Bhoomi: How was dance class?Kripa: Ummm good. Bhoomi: Meet my new friends.Kripa turned around to face Angad and Prithivi.Bhoomi: This is Simi, and her mamu's Angad and Prithivi.Kripa: Hi, nice to meet you.Bhoomi: This is my mamma, Kripa.Angad stared in shock, and Prithivi was shocked.Bhoomi and Simi went to play.Angad was still in shock when Prithivi brought up the subject.Prithivi: So, what does your husband do?Kripa looked in horror..Kripa: Husband?Angad: Yea, you know Pati.. Umm.. ur not married???Kripa: No, I am not married..Angad: U know, having a kid before marriage?Kripa laughed at his thinking.A & P: What happened?Kripa: Bhoomi is my daughter, true but I have adopted Bhoomi when she was a baby.A&P: What?Kripa: Yea, I am still 20 but I have a daughter who is adopted because I love kids..Bhoomi rushed to Kripa..Kripa: Beta, let' s go..Bhoomi: Okay, are we going to Nanni's house?Kripa: Tomm. Bye guys.A&P: Byee..Preview: Kripa goes to Gayatri's house, Angad lost in thoughts of Kripa, and more fun moments.Do send in ur comments..Anyone continue...
Edited by jenny1000 - 20 years ago
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awesome parts Jenny. Just read it now. Continue soon.
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JENNY!!!!!!! awsome job i loved it i can just see Angad's shocked face when he sees kripa with a kid...hehe!!
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nice plot do continue when u ahve time. different story so would love to read more
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Intezaar: Fan Fic: Part 2

Recap: Introduction of the characters

That day Angad stared into the light, and all he could see was Kripa's courage. He has never seen a girl like her. He would want all the meetings to be togather, He wanted to get to know her more, when the phone rang.

Angad: Hello

Naina: Hi beta.

Angad: Oh Hi mom, How are you?

Naina: I am fine, How are you?

Angad: I am fine mom. How's bhai and Suraj?

Naina: They are fine,missing u a lot.

Angad: Give the phone to one of them.

Kartik: Hi Angad

Angad: Hi bhai, aap kaise hai?

Kartik: Mein theek hoon.. oh god, suraj wants to talk.

Suraj: Hi bhai, when are u coming here?

Angad: welll...

Suraj: Bhai pls..

Angad: Okay, am coming tommrrow..

Suraj: WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

Angad: Stop screaming Suraj, am coming tommrrow..

Suraj: Yeaaa..

Naina: What did you tell him Angad? He is jumpinmg up and down.

Angad: Mom, I am coming home tommrrow.

Naina: Really beta?

Angad: Yea mom, am coming tommrrow.

***Naina, Kartik, Suraj, Damini, Mishti, Gayatri, and the rest of the charaters live in Naintal and I have no clue about how long the ride from Mumbai to Naintal is so I am just guessings..**

Naina shut the phone and give the news to Kartik. He was really happy and glad that Angad was coming. Kartik has raised Angad like a father because Dillip passed away when Angad was only 4. Naina paid more attention to Suraj as Suraj was younger than Angad.

On the othe hand, Kripa was packing her bags with Bhoomi sat on the bed.

Bhoomi: Mama, we are leaving for Naintal tommrrow?

Kripa: Yes beta.

Bhoomi: How long is the ride?

Kripa: About 4-5 hrs.

Bhoomi: Car or Train?

Kripa: Train, oh god, U ask toooo many questions.

Kripa packed her bags and then went out with Bhoomi to the kitchen when the Phone rang.

Kripa: Hello?

Gayatri: Hi beta.

Kripa: Hi mom.

Gayatri: How are you?

Kripa: am fine.. and u?

Gayatri: Theek hoon., How's Bhoomi?

Kripa: She is fine mom.

Gayatri: U guys are coming rite?

Kripa: YUPP!!

Gayatri: Okay beta..

**Gayatri in the beginning had a strong disliking for Bhoomi because she was adopted which forced Kripa to leave her house, and now Kripa is going back after 3 yrs to Naintal.**

On the other side of town, Prithivi was sharing a talk with Simi when the phone rang..

Simi: Hello?

Seema: Hi beta..

Simi: Mamma!

Prithivi turned and smiled...

Seema: How's my little baby?

Mishti: Didi let me..

Mishti: Hi angel..

Simi: Hi masi..

Prithivi grabbed the phone from her..

Mishti: How's my little angel?

Prithivi: I am fine, little sis..

Mishti: Prithivi, how are you?

Prithivi: am good, we are packing...

Mishti: You're coming tommrrow rite?

Prithivi: YUPP!

Prithivi: How's mom?

Damini: Hi beta.

Prithvii: How are you mom?

Damini: lonely with you..

Prithivi: am coming tommrrow with Angad.

Damini: Good beta, may God always bless your friendship.

Click

**Angad and Prithivi are best friends, when Angad left Naintal to achieve something for himself, Prithivi too left his home with his little neice Simi, who cannot stay without him. Prithivi and Angad both go every 3 months to visit their family but now, they are coming for a long break to Naintal, WHY?**

Next morning, All the three sides rushed to the train. Naintal Ka Safar was 4-5 hrs long. Kripa entered the train with Bhoomi. They sat in the right wing near the window.. and Angad, Prithivi and Simi also sat with them..

Bhoomi: SIMI!!

Simi: Bhoomi!!

Kripa turned around to face Angad and Prithivi who smiled at her.

Kripa: Hi guys..

A&P: Hi Kripa.

Kripa: Sit..

They all sat down while the kids played in the train.

Kripa: You're going to Naintal?

A&P: Yup.. Our family is in Naintal.

Kripa: Hmm.. You're quite close knitted..

Prithivi: We are childhood friends.

Kripa: Ohh.. and Your daughter is sweetheart.

Angad: Not daughter, neice..

Kripa: Opps sorry.

Prithivi: No probs, I am Prithivi Bose.

Angad: and I am Angad Khanna/

Kripa: Nice to meet you, I am Kripa Sharma.

2 hrs later..

Angad was reading a newsaper, Kripa was reading a book and Prithivi was listeing to music when the conducter made an annoucement..

Conductor: Because of traffic, we will reach Naintal in 6 hrs, and We are gonna play Music to enteratian you.

Kripa looked in frustrated and Angad hated traveling.

Angad: I told you man, we should have taken a car

Prithivi: It's not my fault we have traffic.

Angad: Yea, but I hate waiting.

Simi: Mamu, I am hungry.

Kripa took out Britanna cookies and gave it to the kids. She offered it to Prithivi who refused poiltely and Angad grabbed it out of her hand.

Angad: Thanks.

She just smiled at Angad's child behavior. Angad offered Prithii who in retuned took some cookies and poped it into his mouth

A song played in the background:

The song was called Mummy from Chocholate

(kehte hain sabhi ke badi hot hu main
tell you what takila ka ek shot hu main) - 2
magar khayal yeh rahe jara
mummy ko nahi hain pata - 2
so mummy se na kehna

Kripa laughed at this song.. Angad was like.. hmm. good song and the kids and Prithivi enjoyed the song a lot..

The train ride was affair, and everyone went their way..

Gayatri came to recieve Kripa , and Bhoomi. She gave Bhoomi a hug and Kripa a warm hug. They went on their way..

Angad was given hugs from Naina, and Suraj like millions of them. Kartik came and gave him a hug. He had tears in his eyes.

On the other side, the entire Bose family was crying seeing Prithivi and Simi..

The next day: Party day

Kripa came down the stairs when Gaytatri was feeding Bhoomi. Kripa told Bhoomi to go in and get ready for the party, and Gayatri and Kripa sat down.

Gayatri: Beta, am so glad you came back.

Kripa: Mom, Pls don't show fake sympathy on Bhoomi

Gayatri: Beta?

Kripa: Mom, I know you called me because Aryan is abroad, and Dad's business needs to be handled so you needed me..

Gayatri: Kripa, that's not true.

Kripa: Mom, because I can't take Bhoomi everywhere, I am hiring a maid for her.

Gayatri: Maid?

Kripa: Yea, normally Grandmothers do this, but Bhoomi has no grandmother.

Gayatri: Beta, the mistakes I have made in the past, Pls forgiv me.

Kripa: Mom, let's not talk about this, What;s this party all about?

Gayatri: It's our new project, Dreams, with my friends Naina and Damini.

Kripa: Damini and Naina aunty?

Gayatri: Yes, it's the launch party..

Kripa: Okay, we are coming mom. I am getting ready.

Over to the other side of Khanna and Bose family.

Angad: Mom, we are having a party?

Naina: Yea beta.

Prithivi: what's the reason?

Damini: Well, it's the launch party of Dreams, our new project with Gayatri.

A&P: Gayatri aunty?

D&N: Yupp..

Angad: Cool, what should I wear?

Simi: and me?

Prithivi: and me also?

Mishti: Hmm...

Seema: okay, Simi, you will wear the green dress, Angad, wear the white top with black pants, Prithiv wear the blue top with the white pants and Mishti, u wear the white dress yaar..

A&P&S&M: Thanks Dids

Seema: Welcome guys.. and Simi, dids?

Simi: I meant mom..

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The party scene.. The KHANNA AND BOSE family walked in first. Angad wore a white t-shirt and black pants, Prithivi worre a blue top with white pants, Simi wore a green churdiar and looked adorable in it, Mishti wore a white strapless dress and looked stunning. Seema wore a green punjabhi and looked like a coconut.. Damini wore a beautiful pink sari and Naina wore a yellow sari and looked like a banana. Kartik walked in with a suit on and Suraj looked extra cool with a cap, pant and shirt. While Angad was joking around withe veryone, Kripa walked in wearing a pink legha and blue churidar top. Bhoomi wore a orange cute dress and Gayatri dressed in a hari green sari.. Gayatri walked over and said Hi. Kripa touched Naina and Dami's feet. Angad and Prithivi turned around and were shocked to see Kripa. Angad stared at her and the song played in his thoughts

(aashiq banaya - 3 aapne ) - 2
(tere bin suni suni hain baahein
teri bin pyaasi pyaasi nigaahein
tere bin bin asar meri aahein) - 2
tere bin

Angad stared at Kripa until Prithivi got him out of the thoughts. They all walked over to Kripa who stared at them. The music party was loud and clear and the song Inteezar from Paap played on. Angad lend Kripa his hand and they danced onto the tune

Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar
Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar

Meri Subahon Ko Teri Shaamon Ka
Meri Shaamon Ko Tere Vaadon Ka
Meri Raaton Ko Tere Khaabon Ka
Meri Neendon Ko Teri Baahon Ka
Mere Jazbon Ko Teri Chaahon Ka
Bahaki-Bahaki Si Kuchh Khataaon Ka
Khoobasoorat Se Kuchh Gunaahon Ka
Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar

Apane Dilabar Ka Apane Hamadam Ka Apane Jaanam Ka Intazaar
Surkh Phoolon Se Mahaka Rasata Hai
Dil To Mera Magar Zard Patta Hai
Paas Aankhon Ke Sabz Manjar Hai
Dil Ka Mausam To Phir Bhi Banjar Hai
Mahaki-Mahaki Si Kuchh Hawaaon Ka
Bheegi-Bheegi Si Kuchh Ghataaon Ka
Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar
Apane Baadal Ka Apani Baarish Ka Apane Saawan Ka Intazaar
Apani Dhadakan Ka Apani Saanson Ka Apane Jeene Ka Intazaar

Koi Badali Kabhi Is Tarah Aayegi
Pyaas Sadiyon Ki Pal Men Bujh Jaayegi
Tujhako Lauta Ke Meri Aagosh Men
Dekhana Vaqt Ki Nabz Tham Jaaegi
Aisa Hone Ke Kuchh Duaaon Ka
Umr Bhar Jo Milen Un Panaahon Ka
Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar
Tere Aane Ka Tujhako Paane Ka Phir Na Jaane Ka Intazaar
Tere Aane Ka Tujhako Paane Ka Phir Na Jaane Ka Intazaar
Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar Intazaar
The dance ended and Kripa and Angad both felt drawn to each other..Preview: More fun




Edited by jenny1000 - 20 years ago

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