My First AarYa FF Silent Conversations-Ch25Pg118 - Page 86

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Thanks you so much...sorry for a late reply...

Originally posted by: roserosey

😊love this ff
but dont like the ending

Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wowww!!! 👏👏👏

Finally, I'm back on my track for this FF.. 😆 Complete reading it dear.. 😳

Let me tell you, I always enjoyed reading your FF.. Every part has it's own specialities that made me hook up till the end.. 😃 Your FF is so sweet and cute as you.. 😳

I love the way you explained Aarti's feeling as well as her strength after loosing the baby.. It's good to see a woman like her... !! And your ending, seriously, you took it special and ended it with a good point.. Loved Palak's decision.. 😃

Thanks for all your PMs and yup, I did miss you a lot.. 😳

Take Care... 🤗

Originally posted by: pankhudi_TiaRa

hmmm read the remaining parts and loved them 😳😳

it was really a different and special fiction thanks for writing this ff 😳😳

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Shanti - Just amazing. The way you dealt with the conversation part between Yash-Arti - was bang on! What a thought ! Extremely difficult to write such characters unless you know the thought process and the feel correctly. Wow!

Thank you so much dear...I feel so good to have drawn in readers whom I never knew through this first FF of mine on the forum...and you have entered into my life late but are here to stay and it really feels so good ...Gratitude for all your kind words is all I have my friend...

Would like to be honest here - felt the ending - a bit - forced thought - though respect the character Palak for the decision taken but I felt...this is not shanti's touch.

Yes -- I had to end it fast due to some family commitments and somehow I don't like to have too much gap in my writings as the flow of the story is lost...so I thought it was necessary for me to end it and maybe you're quite right in your views...became like a Koshish!!! Gulzar!!!!

I know you will appreciate my honesty because - I relate your writing to one of the best writers ..Indu...but that doesn't mean this FF is not good...Would rate as - THE BEST as far as story and writing goes...and when time permits...I may reread again.

Indu is a fab writer and no other compliment can mean more than comparing mine to hers...I simply love her writings...though I was late into Samarpan as well...

Thank you for reading and loving this...really means a lot to me as I made so many friends here because of this FF...

Fantastic ! Fantastic ! and Fantastic !