Maha Review: Romance, hits, misses, and more

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok, adorable Maha. Totally made my weekend. My favorite part was Shlok's open answer to Astha's question about Swati and his offer to rub her foot in front of his mother! 😉 She snapped back at him in front of her too, very wifey. He has really come a long way. Those were genuine moments of vulnerability for him. He wasn't playing then. Also his smile at the photograph was quite genuine. Shows that he's really falling for her.

On the other hand, the couch scene, definitely playing.

But some of the dialogues, while romantic, seemed unprompted. Like Astha saying that she's not his wife? His reply was good. The writers need to work on dialogue finesse. Something needs to prompt these kinds of dialogues before they are said. The writing of the characters have been strong so far, but the dialogues fall a little short and look inspired by you-know-who's dialogues.

Shrenu did well today. Avinash was also very confident. I love his body language on the couch. Watching over her like a black panther, makes for a very sexy scene. Parents also acted very well. Loved Kalindi's anger against Shlok today 😆. He looked properly chastised. She has spirit and it shows. As they say, like mother like daughter. I am playing off this assumption in my FF. Astha needs to be very spirited after Shlok reveals his true colors.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bobby Dhillon used to be the dialogue writer. And now I can see Usha Dixit in the credits. They need to be crisper and wittier. Though I feel they are much better now than they were earlier!
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Originally posted by: Heavens_Kiss

Bobby Dhillon used to be the dialogue writer. And now I can see Usha Dixit in the credits. They need to be crisper and wittier. Though I feel they are much better now than they were earlier!



They need to work on dialogue flow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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God acting by all the story and acting making me watch it maha was good and then the pace also between father and son have to see who is ser and sawa ser😆😉 bap ser to kya beta sawa ser (who is one up father or son )

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Originally posted by: chalhov

God acting by all the story and acting making me watch it maha was good and then the pace also between father and son have to see who is ser and sawa ser😆😉 bap ser to kya beta sawa ser (who is one up father or son )



That is one cute analogy!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I never thought that i would ever say this...But i m falling for IPKKND EBP <3
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Originally posted by: Geet24

I never thought that i would ever say this...But i m falling for IPKKND EBP <3



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Congrats EBP team, you got Geet. This is one hard IPKdian! Welcome Geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shloks character needs some epic one liners! They need the MB dialouge writers. ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -iPayal-

Shloks character needs some epic one liners! They need the MB dialouge writers. ;)



Hmm, I don't know about the MB dialogue writers. Some of the things that character said in the beginning made no sense. They sounded good though! They need small dialogues because this character does not say much anyway.

I think they need a dialogue writer like Arnav's.

Kya baat said, aise naach kyu rahi ho tum?
What?
What the...?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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^ I only watched MB for a few weeks (midway) and got over it pretty fast. lol. The only uniqueness there was the dialouges. They really make a character. EBP seem to be better the last few days so maybe itll pick up now? :P

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