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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 9

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Sorry friends...itna intzaar krwaya...

@mmradhu dear this update dedicate to you...

Suddenly her foot slips at the time for descending the stairs

And she fall into strong arms. Both look into each other eyes.

She looked beautiful, his eyes refused to remove gaze'.

He stared at her for a minute. Geet couldn't remove her gaze,

That how attractive he looked.

Both were completely lost in each other eyes. He was

lost looking into her, her beauty, and her innocent.

Anjli: geet

Geet{di, di to yhi aa rhi hai}

Geet : niche uttaro

He makes stand on her feet.

Geet : ase kya dekh rhe ho

.

Isse phle kbhi ladki nhi dekhi

.

Dekhne me toh ache ghar se lagte ho

.

Maan : thanks khehne ke bajaye tum mujhse ase baat kr rhi ho

.

Anjali : geet

Geet : ji di

Anjali : hello Mr. khurana

Geet : di aap inhe jaante ho

Anjali : inhe koun nhi jaanta geet

Ye Maan singh khurana hai

Khurana Fashion World ke MD

Geet : what?

Anjali : kya hua geet

Geet : kuch nhi di

Anjali : Mr. Khurana ye geet handa hai

Aaj ke event mein isne bhi participate kiya hai

Maan : nice

Geet (think ) babaji why he staring me?

Please fulfill my dream. I want to work with KFW.

Anjali : excuse me

Mein abhi aayi

Maan : hmm

.

Geet : mein bhi chalti hu

Maan : stop

Geet : mein

Maan : yaha aur koi hai

.

Nhi na

.

Tum thodi der phle kuch kh rhi thi

Geet : wo mujhe kuch kaam hai

Bye

.

Maan : thodi pagal hai

**********

Flashback out

(Friends now I take assumption like flight time, destination time)

She pacing in the room left to right.

Geet : dekha babaji aapne

Ek bj gya

Lakin unka koi ata pata nhi

.

Kya kha th aunhone jaane se phle

"geet tumhari fik na kru ya nhi ho sakta"

.

Aur ab dekho babaji

***********

Adi : sir ab aap rest kr lijiye

Waise bhi aapne bina rest kre aap directly meeting mein aa gye

Maan : it's ok adi

Jitni jaldi kaam khtm ho jaaye

Utna hi acha hai

Adi : hmmm

*********

At 9:00 p.m (London)

Maan : meeting ke karan mein toh ghar pe inform hi krna bhool gya

.

He sees the time.

Yaha 9 bje hai abhi toh waha 1 bj gya honga

Abhi tak toh sb so gye honge

.

Is waqt disturb krna shi nhi honga

***********

Flashback In

Girl 1 : I wish mein select ho jaayu

Mujhe hotty ke sath work krne ko milenga

Girl 2 :- wo toh mujhe milenga

.

.

Geet : babaji apni bachi ke sath rhehna

Jo bhi maine subh kiya

Wo jaan buzkar thode na kiya tha

.

Ydi usne mujhe us wajh se select krne se maina kiya na

Toh dekh lena

**********

Sasha : itne khas designs nhi hai MK

Maan : Adi tumhe kya lagta hai

Adi : sir maine 5 candidates select kiye hai

Ek baar hume unhe chance dena chaiye

Sasha : adi yha hum sbko kya chance dene baithe hai

Hume next month ye designs apne client ko dekhane hai

Ydi hum

Maan : sasha

Ek chance dene mein koi nuksaan nhi hai

Ho sakta hai... usse hmari company ko fayda ho jaaye

.

Adi , aaj evening party mein result announce honge

Tum candidates ko bta do

Adi : ok sir

Maan : show me result

Tumne kis kis ko select kiya hai

Adi : yes sir

*************

Flashback out

Now she tired and slept at 2:00 Clock... And another side maan felt restlessness.

*********

I try to update next part soon...

Please hit like button and do comment.

previous part 8 on page 41


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Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
priyanka it was superb. i loved it. flashback part was amazing. i loved maneet's first meeting part. geet is waiting for maan in present. and maan is also restless. very exited for next dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
FB was cute.i'm sure at d party geetwil b selected.waiting 4 d party.geet slept waiting 4 maan's call i guess.hop maan will ring her up soon.otherwise she will b so tensed
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for update and dedicating me... update was awesome... loved it so much...
Maaneet 1st encounter is amazing... so maan was mesmerized by geet in 1st glimpse... our geet is very beautiful so there is no wonder for that he is staring at her... so geet also participated... hope she was selected... there maan doesn't ring up to geet since geet maybe slept and here geet is waiting for his call... hope maaneet may speak... waiting for next part... continue soon. take care
Edited by mmradhu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing dr
maan geet frst metng ws gud
geet is nervous
hope she gets select
in presnt geet misng maan
ud nxt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Their past moments are amazing.. Nice one.. Waiting forr next part.. Waise Geet thodi pagal hi hain..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
so they met huh
and like this
well can only happen with geet
poor thing
dude should have called her
she is so restless without you
but then its late now
cant wait for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful dear
maaneet met and geet shouted on him😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
flashback was good hope geet got selected
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Posted: 11 years ago
kitne ffs likh rahi hai.
I think I haven't read it pahle padungi phir comment doongi
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago

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