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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_123

oh yah divu sounds cute and so u can call me that😳

wat next part not soon WHAT ok if u thinking ke i m screaming then yup i am doing so... wat u mean by not soon ok kaal tak ka waqt

puhleasee kal ek chapter post kardo plzzzzzz😳plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😳

plzzz

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i promise i'll be a gud girl till that i will finish my homework i will keep all my stuff in their correct places mummy ko bhi pareshan nahi karungi

ill be a very gud girl promise abh to kaal ek chhota sa chap post kardena puhleaseee😳

Hmm.....you sure about that?

All homework finished and your mum a happy bunny?

Teek hai - One part tomorrow!!😉

Will definitely post it sweety!😛 (I'm getting death threats so can't dealy it any longer!!😆)

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: amiee

cont ofcourse you have to cont you cant leave it there please cont soon............

Will try my best jaan!!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

OMG, that was great. I can't wait for todays update, remember you promised to update today. And what kind of question is 'should I continue'? Of course you should, infact you should continue immediately.


-Rimpy

Hey rimpy!

Don't kill me jaan - workload has meant no update today!!

Tomorrow pakka though!!

Will update even if it kills me!!😕

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: khattimeeti

quit the replies........post the part...........

Meanie!!😆

Next part tomorrow!!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nibbles

Meanie!!😆

Next part tomorrow!!



Tomorrow?? Nibbles, we're waiting desperately!!!!😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

Sorry for posting this a day later than I had promised guys - my work just seems to keep building up!!😕

Anyways, you'll have to wait just a little bit longer whilst I get through all the dedications for this part!😉

First of all, Han and Anju for being such meanies!!🤗.......guess their threats came to some use!!😆

Divu - for reminding me atleast three times a day that I need to update!😕

Tofy - still unconcious jaan?😉

And last but not least, Shafu - poor girl has been revising so hard over the past few weeks, decided she needed something to cheer her up!😛

Also, a great bit thank-you to all my wonderful readers!!🤗..........as I said to Sheena, your comments inflate my already huge ego!!😆

Ahem, here comes the update!!😳

Chapter 6b: Acceptance…

He watched enthralled as her waist moved slightly, in and out in perfect sync to her breathing. He wondered whether the creamy skin was as smooth as it looked, and without allowing his dazed brain to think, Jai reached out, his hands cupping either side of her hip before they inched higher, revelling in the way her body was soft and warm under his fingers.

Bani's mouth opened in a silent gasp as she felt his fingers roaming her bare skin, the sensual patterns he was tracing sending a tingle of nerves and excitement across her whole body, causing her to shiver and feel light-headed as she felt him replace his hands with the softness of his lips which devoured every inch of her abdomen.

Her breathing became heavy and ragged as his hands roamed higher up her back, searing her skin with passionate heat, while at the same time his lips brushed against her skin as they kissed her waist, her blouse, her shoulder, before coming to a stop at the hollow of her neck where her pulse beat wildly in rhythm to her heart.

Nipping her skin lightly, he kissed it sweetly, causing her to arch her neck as her hands clutched his stuffy jacket before pushing it of his shoulders, moaning inwardly as he gathered her in his arms before placing her gently on the bed.

Her sari had been pulled away to collapse in a pool of shimmering black on the floor and she felt her blouse slipping too as his desire became more demanding. Her avaricious fingers sought comfort in pushing away his shirt, pulling him closer and revelling in the feel of his abdomen against hers.

Then suddenly he pulled away, her body moaned in protest as she felt the warmth of his skin elapse. Confused, her eyes fluttered open, taking in his profile silhouetted against the dim light above him.

His tousled hair, his shirt half undone, his eyes watching her intently; for a second hesitation flashed across his face and Bani pushed herself up, her brow slightly creased as she raised a hand to his cheek.

"Jai,"

The feel of her fingers tangled in his hair, the breathless voice and the way her blouse inched lower as she sat up caused him to brush his mouth against hers gently. At first he teased her with his tongue, plucking her bottom lip and caressing her back softly until she let out a moan, making him lose all self control as he claimed her lips long and hard.

Sighing in contentment, she wrapped her other arm around his neck and pulled him closer.

Oblivious to the world, they lost themselves in passion once again.

*****

Jai rolled to his side, his fingers slipping under the sheets and resting on Bani's waist as he watched her sleeping soundly. The curtain's had been left open allowing the light from the dusky moon to filter through and cast a soft glow to her features.

She looked beautiful. Was there ever a time when she didn't?

With a sudden urge to kiss her, he leaned forward, his hand travelling slightly higher up his body as he brushed his lips against her mouth. Suddenly his attention was drawn to the sound of the front door opening and the barrage of voices that followed.

Realising that Maa, Dadi, Sahil and Rano had returned from the wedding, Jai scrambled out of bed, cursing softly as he quickly retrieved his clothes and dressed hurriedly while at the same time making the room look reasonably clean.

He didn't doubt for a second that Maa would turn up, ready to twist his ear for not arriving at the wedding. Sure enough, he heard a firm knock on his bedroom door just as he had pulled the covers over Bani.

"Maa…"

He said breathlessly, smiling nervously at Krishna and Dadi who watched him sternly.

"Jai, where were you? Do you have any idea how worried we were? Aditya was this close to calling of the wedding!"

She scolded him, waving her forefinger and thumb in the air which were tightly pressed together.

Racking his brain for a reasonable excuse, Jai rubbed the back of his neck as he watched his mother uneasily.

"Umm, Mom…actually, Bani…Bani suddenly fell ill!"

Jai replied, barely being able to conceal his grin for the ingenious brainwave.

"What? Let me see her."

Said Krishna worried as she tried to push past Jai whose smugness soon turned to alarm.

"No! I mean, mom, she's sleeping…and, and…"

He struggled to convince Krishna who protested at not being allowed to see Bani. Finally Dadi, who had been watching Jai with an odd expression, pulled Krishna back.

"Krishna, let the poor girl rest, you can see her in the morning."

Said Dadi as she bundled her daughter-in-law to the direction of her bedroom.

"Go back to sleep Jai."

Dadi told him as she turned to make her way to her own room, though not before she had flashed him an impish grin and a great big wink that unsettled him.

Pushing the door closed and locking it safely from the inside, Jai continued rubbing his neck as he wondered why had Dadi acted in such a way. Just as he had passed the dressing table, something caught his eye and he backtracked to the mirror.

There, under his collar, he saw a small red bite, which made him grin, as he looked over to Bani who was still fast asleep – looking every bit the angel that the world believed her to be.

Making sure that she was completely covered and comfortable, Jai settled himself not to far from her and flicked through a few files, which required his immediate attention. However, they soon bored him and he threw them back on to the pile at a nearby table and leaned back into his chair, his chin cupped in his hand as he watched her, before sleep took over an hour or so later.

Urm, I edited this part like 5 times, though I'm still not to happy about how this turned out!😕

Also, I know some of the FF's that are floating around tend to be probably a lot more 'explicit' - for lack of a better word😕 - I'm sorry if this part wasn't what you expected, I just don't feel comfortable going any further than this😳 - I guess kissing and caressing is my expertise!😆

Not sure when the next part will be up!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

ok so after like ages i m the first one wow

me first me first me first😉😆

dekha iss baar tumhara kaala jaddu nahi chala 😆

and well as i had promised i had been a gud girl mummy ko bhi pareshan nahi kiya sab kaam khud kar liye😳

hmm ok back to the update

haila nibs wow kya superb part likha hai.. really really guud and aheem 😉well it was reall mindblowing the way u wrote the entire part was juts too gud👏

and well i guess this is enough i mean more explict then this would turn out to be sumthing too much 😕while this was simple yet understandble and very much decent 😳 and abit aheem 😳

seriously excellent part👏👏👏

itna accha part likhne ke baat i cant stop bugging u abh dear.. now come up with next part i wanna know bani's reaction to it aur phir woh red mark ha ha i m sure jai usse chorege nahi😆

conitnue soon soon very soon

and well since u already posted the part now i m back to the shaitaan bacchi mummy ko bohot pareshan karungi😈😆

Edited by divya_123 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow 😉 they skipped the wedding 😆
well jai would have skipped anything for this i m sure
pls cont soon...........
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Posted: 19 years ago

Divu jaan, you are taking awfully long to read!😕

Still conscious na?😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: amiee

wow 😉 they skipped the wedding 😆
well jai would have skipped anything for this i m sure
pls cont soon...........

I guess they just got carried away sweety!!😆

Though I'm sure Adi won't mind when he finds out the reason!!😉

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