Maaneet SS BROKEN BY LOVE prt5 updtd on pg 15

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Alisha Shah

@Alisha_gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

P.S.:Hello Friends am back well everyone of you dun know me and for those am Alisha_Gurti with my new SS on Maaneet and before you people tell me that my prervious ff is incomplete so this one is completed but every part will post on demand...Now coming to story...

Prologue

A man in his middle twenty sitting on the ground outside I.C.U of City Hospital Delhi.He

He is crying like someone has snatched his soul and force him to see the torture they are giving to his soul.Well he is unfotunate man who himself is a muderer of his soul his life.He is begging for the life of that soul less and life less body.

Meanwhile in I.C.U a girl of twenty three years lieing on bed and numbers of machines are conected with her body, doctors are busy with her but failing in retriving the life in that lifeless body.It looks like that she don't want to live and she want to get free from this cruel world.

Outside I.C.U he is feeling suffocated and feeling heart renching pain in his heart.Tried of this torture he stand up and peek from the window and what he saw took his breath away.Doctors are giving her el ectric shocks to retrive her heart beat and her lifeless less body is jerking with the shock powers.He can't tolerate any more and open the door and run to her without caring about anything or anyone and he reach to her and hold her hand and a painful scream left his mouth.

Geeettt and at the same time beeping of the pulse machine start as life bonce back in her body.A lone tear left her eye as she wisper the name of man who is looking towords her.(his eyes are showing multiple emotions as love,pain,guilt,hate,fury and many more...) Maan...

Well thats prologue am waiting for your response.Please tell me you people like it or not should i continue it or not,If u can not comment pleasr press like button and for pms please add me.

Index:

Character Sketch:pg 2https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3752804/maaneet-ss-broken-by-love-prt5-updtd-on-pg-15?pn=2

Part 1:pg 3https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3752804/maaneet-ss-broken-by-love-prt5-updtd-on-pg-15?pn=3

Part 2:pg 6https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3752804/maaneet-ss-broken-by-love-prt5-updtd-on-pg-15?pn=6

Important Note:pg8https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3752804/maaneet-ss-broken-by-love-prt5-updtd-on-pg-15?pn=8

Part 3:pg9https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93162784

Part 4:pg14 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752804&TPN=14

Part 5:pg15 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752804&TPN=15&#p105699840

Edited by Alisha_gurti - 11 years ago

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Alisha Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712
NICE PROLOGUE

Thnks dear well.should i continue.it?

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Posted: 12 years ago

very interesting...

I have send buddy request...

please pm me whenever u update...

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Hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice prologue... seems interesting. do continue... and add me in pm list

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Manisha Govindraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting prologue

update 1st part sooon

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Zariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesomre plzzz continue

n pm me

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vandana73

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice but a request do not make it too sad !!

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sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice. 😊 would love to read more!

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Alisha Shah

@Alisha_gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

Character Sketch

Khurana Family:

The respectable family of Delhi involve in Construction bussiness.

Yash Singh Khurana:

M.D of Khurana Construction,Maan's father.

He is very nice person.

Shalini Khurana:

A house wife love her family so much but angry on Maan

Savitri Devi:

Obviously Maan's dadi same as GHSP

Anvisha Rathod:

Elder sister of Maan and happily maried.

Arjun Rathod:

Husband of Anvisha

Naintara Rathod:

Arjun's sister love Maan as her obsession and has major hand in doom of Geet

Maan Singh Khurana:

Bussiness man.A person who regret his mere existance on universe and have ton of remorses.Still in search of his long lost love and wife.

Geet Khurana:

The Young bussiness tycon hard ,tough,arrogant.heartless stone.

This poem will define Geet's condition

why the fate is so cruel

why the world is so cruel

i wanna die buh force to live

why i forced to grow so early

why i forced to pay so heavily

Dun know buh fate sets its path

whyyy

my soft heart turn to stone

buh really m I a stone??

I am happy in my dreamland

buh brutally force to face harsh reality

They got nothng from their doings

Except

turning love to hatred

smile and tears to blank

simplicity and innocence to arrogance & harshness

now time change

fate want the old time innocence back

buh don't u think it's too late

now there is nothing left

Except

a life less personality

or a ruthless girl

who don't know how to smile & cry

buh why

now the only think is left

Is remorses

Now it's their turn to feel the same pain

Now they have to shed the tears

Tears of remorses

Tears of regret

Tears of repent

But now nothing can change

They have to live the way they choose

They have to repent every sec of their life

They have to burn in the same hell

Which they make for me

aaahhh

Now am a living Zombie

But nothing can change the reality

Why the fate is so cruel

why the world is so cruel

Muskan Khurana:

four years old darling daughter of Geet.love to irritate her mom.

Kabir Khurana:

four years old.twin of Shanaya,two minutes elder than her.

Handa Family:

The Middle class family of Delhi Do Bussiness of import and export before the establishment of their company Handa empire.

Sukhdev Handa:

A man with high principles.Love his daughter very much but now hopeless to get her back.

Rano Handa:

A typical house wife and love her daughter very much and unlike her husband she is hopeful to get her geet back...

Brij Handa

Rajji Handa:

Mutual Enemies of Maaneet:

Ajay Kapoor:

Dev Shukla:

Tanya Shukla:

P.S here is C.S will update first part at night.

Edited by Alisha_gurti - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

very nice CS...

waiting for actual story to start...

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