FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106 - Page 2

very nice update,sweety,

and welcome to the forum...😊

ur writing style is very different...

all the dialogues were so natural.it matches how they actually talk.

raji's plan is romantic...i hope it will come out well...😳

raji ya terrace la paarthu paiyan mayangi vizha poraan...😉😆

CHAPTER 3

In the TERRACE:

Raji climbs the stairs and reaches the terrace. She takes a look around and decides that she will stand behind the wall next to staircase, so that Karthik cannot see her. Meanwhile she hears footsteps and moves fast behind the wall and hides there.

Karthik comes to the terrace and looks around. Raji's heart starts beating faster and she takes a step back to control her excitement. Karthik looks at the sky and thinks aloud ... "Innikku nilaa nallaa daan irukku ...aana muzhu nilavaa irundirundaa innum azhagaa irundirukkum"...

Raji: Hi Karthik!!!!!!!!!!

Karthik: Hi Raji!!!!!!

Raji: HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!!! Karthik...

Karthik: thank you...

Raji keeps silent, peeps from behind the wall and keeps staring at Karthik. He is still looking at the moon.

Karthik: sari... ennamo enna ner le parkka vara maadiri dress maathittu vandirukke... Unnai red color nighty la paarkalaam nu aasaiya vanda ippadi pannittiye Raji...

Raji: mmm...hello!!!!!!!!!! naan dress maathittennu yaar sonnadhu...naan nighty la daan irukken...

Karthik: Poi!!!!!!!!

Raji: adu vandhu...

Karthik: sari adha vidu...en birthday gift enge?

Raji: solren...

Karthik: eppo?

Raji: naan unna ner la parthu , un kannai paarthu sollanum nu ninaichaa...nee ippadi adam pidikkuriye ...

Karthik: nee thaane 12 manikku solren nu sonne?

Raji: (leans against the wall...closes her eyes...takes a deep breath and says) Karthik... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!

There is complete silence for a minute...

Raji: enna karthik silent aa irukke?

Karthik: kannai moodittu irunda reaction ennannu eppadi theriyum?

Raji: ennadhu?

Raji slowly opens her eyes and to her surprise Karthik is standing in front of her smiling mischievously...

He comes close to her and says..." ippo sollu"...

She keeps staring at him...

Karthik: paarthathu podhum... sollu Raji...

Raji: (looks deep into his eyes and says) I LOVE YOU ... Karthik... jaathi, madham, azhagu, andasthu, arivu , padippu, valarppu, ...vayasu... Ippadi namakku naduvula ethanai vithiyaasam irundaalum, naan unakku konjam kooda poruthamaanava illainnu en manase sonnaalum, ellaathaiyum thaandi naan unnai kaadhalikkuren...Nee illaadha oru vaazhkaiyai ennale karpanai kooda panni parka mudiyala...I LOVE YOU ... I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH...

Karthik smiles and sings... Oru vaarthai kekka oru varusham kaathirunden... Indha paarvai parka pagaliravaa poothirunden...

Raji blushes and tries to move from there... but he catches her hand and stops her saying ... "enga odare?"...she stands stilll...

Karthik: Raji... I LOVE YOU TOO...

Raji bends her head down and doesn't look at him.

Karthik: ennaachu Raji?

She still continues to be silent.

Karthik: ennannu sonnaa thaane theriyum...

Raji: po karthik ... unakku surprise aa irukkanum nu naan nenachaa... Nee enakku surprise kuduthutte...

Karthik: (smiles) naan surprise aagale nnu yaar sonnadhu?

Raji: puriyalai... naan inge irukkennu unakku eppadi theriyum?

Karthik: nee maadikku variyaa nnu kettadhume ennamo surprise panna pore nnu en mandaikkulle bulb erinjidhu... Aanaa adu ennavaa irukkum nu evloo yosichalum thonalai...excitement thaanga mudiyaama maadikku vandu paarthen ...edaavadhu clue kidaikkumaa nnu... Onnum illaiyaa...Lakshmi yai kekkalaamaannu yosichen...appuram venaamnu vittutten...sari eppadi irundaalum 12 manikku ennannu therinjidum appadinnu yosichen...Aanaa ...Raji ...indha 20 nimisham evlo excitingaaa padapadapppaa irunduchinnu unakku theriyumaa...en life le naan eppavum ippadi feel pannadille ...Thanks Raji ...idellaam unnaaala thaan...

(he makes a pause and she smiles... he continues...)

aanaa ...maadikku vanda vudane manasellaam oru maadiri amaidiyaa aayiduchi ...avvalavu neram irunda padapadppu enga pochunne puriyalai...ennamo nee pakkathileye irukkura maadiri thonuchi... appuram un kural kettadhum , nee inge irukkennu confirm aayiduchi...

Raji: adu vandhu...

Karthik: onnum solla venaam...enakkaaga nee inga vandirukkennu ennaala innum namba mudiyalai... idu kanava irundu kalainjidumo appadinnu bayamaa irukku...Raji... Idu kanavu illaiye?

Raji: illai...

Karthik: ennaale ippavum namba mudiyalai...

Raji: "Doubt Karthikeyan"... idu kanavu illa...

She pinches him on his cheek...

Karthik: appaaa... confirm aayiduchi...

Raji: enna... kanavu illai nnaa?

Karthik: mmm hmm...nee meesai ponnu than nu...

Raji: romba than...

Karthik: innum valikuthu... (rubs his cheek with his palm..)

Raji: SORRYYY...

Karthik: paravayillai vidu...

Raji moves towards him and gently kisses on his cheek where she pinched him...

Karthik is completely surprised and says..."Rajiii"...

Before he could realize she runs towards the staircase and stops as Lakshmi and Vishnu enter the terrace.

Karthik tries to behave normal but...

Vishnu: machaan HAPPY BIRTHDAY daaa... (he comes and hugs Karthik)

Karthik: Thanks machaan

Lakshmi: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!! Karthik...

Karthik: thank you... Lakshmi...

Vishnu: celebration time...

Lakshmi and Raji bring the cake and light the candles. Karthik blows the candles, cuts the cake and all the three sing birthday song for him... he smiles and all of them have a blast eating the cake and cracking jokes.

20 MINS LATER...

Lakshmi drags Raji aside and asks her... "ennadi sollittiyaa?"

Raji: mmm... sollitten...

Lakshmi: happpaaa... oru vazhiyaa sollittiyaa...adukku Karthik enna sonnaan?

Raji blushes and smiles...

Lakshmi: ennadi censor cut aaahh?

Raji: po Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: Raji.. I'm really happy for both of you...

On the other side... Vishnu asks Karthik ..."ennadaa? happy yaa?"

Karthik: aamaa da... Romba santhoshamaa irukken...

Vishnu: Raji love panren nu sollittaangalaa?

Karthik: En unakku theriyaadha?

Vishnu: deiii...

Karthik: neeyum, Lakshmiyum avalukku help panneenga thane...

Vishnu: illai daa... unakku surprise tharanum nu sonnanga... adhaan...

Karthik: parava illai daaa... enakku eppadi solrathunne theriyalai...Ennoda best birthday daa... Idhu... evlo santhoshamaa irukku theriyumaa? ..Idhukku badhila Rajikku eppadi thanks solradunne puriyalai... (looks at Raji... both Raji and Lakshmi are laughing...) ...ava mogathula indha sirippu ennaikkum maaraama irukkanum nu thonudhu daaa...

Vishnu: avanga un kooda irundaa ippadiye santhoshamaa iruppanga daa...Yennaa... Avanga santhoshame nee thaan...

Karthik nods his head and says..."mmm... puriyudhu"...

Raji and lakshmi come towards them.

Vishnu: machaan naan kilamburen daa... Kaalaile office le parkalaam...

Lakshmi: OK ...Karthik ... naanum thoonga poren...

She turns to Raji and says..."naan kadhavu lock pannalai.. nee pesittu vandhu padu.. OK.."

Raji: ok.. Lakshmi...

Vishnu: romba late pannaame seekkiram padunga... kaalaile Office poganum...Late aana namma TL ku kovam varum...

Lakshmi: deiii ... Adangu daa...

Vishnu: OK Raji ...bye... good night...

Raji: thanks Vishnu!!!!!!!

Vishnu: namakkulle enna Raji idellaam... Karthik kaaga naan enna venum naalum , eppa venum naalum seiven...

Karthik hugs Vishnu ... and both Lakshmi and Vishnu go downstairs...

Karthik and Raji look at each other and smile...

Chapter 4 coming soon...

CHAPTER 4

very nice update...sweety

very romantic confession ,loved it very much.

wow,KR alone in terrace...can't wait for the next part...

serial la thaan ore sogam...no romance...please neengalaavathu...oru nalla romantic scene vaingappaa...😳

CHAPTER 4

At Downstairs:

Vishnu gets into his car... Lakshmi stands nearby...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Raji enna sonnaanga?

Lakshmi: edha pathi?

Vishnu: Karthik kitta enna pesanaangannu...

Lakshmi: En... Karthik edhuvum sollaliyaa?

Vishnu: Illa Lakshmi... naan romba santhoshamaa irukkennu mattum than sonnaan...

Lakshmi: mmm... Naan kettaaa Raji sollittennu than sonnaa... Anaa karthik mogathule irunda santhoshame solliduchi aval sollittaannu... irundaalum confirm paanikkalaamnu than avalai kaetten

Vishnu: Lakshmi... ithanai varushathule karthik ivvalo santhoshamaa irundadai naan paarthathille...

Lakshmi: mmm... Aanaa Raaji appa kuppaannu balti adikkaama irukkanum...

Vishnu: vidu Lakshmi... romba kuzhaippikka venaa ...meesai kitta pesi samaalichidalaam...

Lakshmi: OK Vishnu... late aaguthu... nee kilambu...

Vishnu: mmm...OK Lakshmi... bye... GOOD NIGHT...

Lakshmi: GOOD NIGHT...

Vishnu drives away as Lakshmi waves her hand.

Lakshmi looks upstairs ... Sees Raji and Karthik talking... smilingly nods her head and goes to bed...

IN THE TERRACE:

Raji: Lakshmi, Vishnu rendu perum namakku kadavul kudutha azhagaana gift Karthik... Namma 4 peroda friendship eppavume ippadiye irukkanum...

Karthik: mmm...

Raji: Enna yosanai?

Karthik: Onnum illa...

Raji: Ennannu sollu...

Karthik: nadakkurathellaam kanavo... nnu ...thonikitte irukku...

Raji: (smiles) Enna innoru thadavai killattumaa?

Karthik: killittu ...kiss panradaa irundaa ... OK...

Raji: romba than aasai...

Karthik: appo maattennu solriyaa?

Raji: aamaa...

Both keep quiet for a while.

Raji: Karthik... phone switch on pannikko...

Karthik: pch...venaam...

Raji: En? Naan than sollittene... appuram enna?

Karthik: unnoda thaniya irukkura chance marubadiyum eppo kidaikkumo theriyaadu... idha vida phone calls onnum avvalo important illa...

Raji: (smiles) adhu sari...

Karthik: Raji... Kaal valikkudhu ... Ukkaandhu pesalaama? Ille unakku tired aa irundaa paduthukko...

Raji: mmm hmm ...illa...

Both of them sit beside each other leaning against the terrace wall with their legs stretched and relaxed.

Karthik: Raji... un kaiyai konjam kodu..

Raji: Edhukku?

Karthik: romba than bigu panre...

He himself pulls and holds her hand. She smiles.

Karthik: athai maama kitta enna sonne?

Raji: naalaikku client meeting irukku .. night ellaam work pannanum nu sonnen.

Karthik: indha selaile nee romba azhagaa irukke...

Raji: azhagu selaila illai... un paarvaile irukku..

Karthik: naan selai kattittu vaa nnu madhiyam dhane sonnen ...Veettukku pogaame eppadi? Naan kaettennu Pudhu selai eduthiyaa?

Raji simply stares at him... Doesn't say anything...

Karthik: Enna badhile kaanum?

Raji: Enna sollanum?

Karthik: naan kaetta kelvikku badhil sollu...

Raji: venaa ... Vidu ... Appuram naan edhaavadhu sollida poren...

Karthik: Enna nee? Sambandhame illaama ippa edhukku kovam varudhu unakku?

Raji: edhukku pachai color selai kattittu vaa nnu sonne?

Karthik: naan karuppu thane modalle kaetten? Nee than nalla naal aduvumaa karuppu venaa nnu sonne.. sari appo pachai nnu yathaarthamaa than kaetten. Adhukku enna?

Raji: appo unakku nijamaave gnaabagam illaiyaa?

Karthik: Rajiii.. edhukku ivvalo tension aagare? Enakku suthamaa puriyalai...

Raji turns the other side quietly...

Karthik: Rajii .. ennai paaru...pleaaaseee...

Raji turns and looks at him and says..."edho enna paartha santhoshathule sariyaa gavanikkalai appadinnu than ivvalavu neram nenachittu irunden... aanaa unakku gnaabagame illai nnu ninaicha enakku kashtamaa irukku Karthik..."

Karthik: konjam puriyum badiyaa than sollen...

Raji: kaekkarennu thappaa ninaikkaade... Nee susan ku vaangi kodutha pudavai color enna?

Karthik: (answers immediately) RED!!!!!!!!! ... (and looks annoyed at her)... Adhukku enna ippo?

Raji simply stares at him... he looks at her sari again trying to figure out why is she so upset... Suddenly something strikes in his mind and he exclaims..."Rajiii ... Idhu naan vaangi kodutha selaiyaa????????" ...She still keeps quiet...

Karthik: Rajiii... SORRRYYY!!!!!!!!!

She bends her head down trying to avoid tears. He lifts her chin and makes her look at him and says pleadingly..."Sorry Rajii... Nijamaave gavanikkalai"...

She smiles and says... "sari vidu"... "vera edhaavadhu pesalaam.."

Karthik: Raji... onnu thonudhu... Kaekkavaa? Seidhidavaa?

Raji: (puts a question mark face).. Ennaa?

Karthik: solrathukku munnadiye mogam en appadi poguthu?

Raji: (smiles) .. illa... ennannu sollu...

Karthik nods his head saying... mmm hmm...

Before she could realize, he lies down on the floor keeping his head on her lap and holding her hand between his hands across his chest.

She seems to be amazed by what he did.

Karthik: enna appadi paarkare? Un madiyile thalai vaichu paduthukkanum nu evloo aasiyaa irukkum theriyumaa? Innikku than antha chance kidaichudu...

Raji: sari... ezhundiru Karthik...

Karthik: mmm hmmm ... mudiyaadhu..

Raji: enakku ennamo maadiri irukku...

Karthik: mudiyaadhu...

She keeps quiet.

Karthik: unakku comfortable aa illenna sollu... naan ezhundidaren...Sangadamaa irukka?

Raji: illai... pudhusaa irukku...

He smiles and holds her hand still closer to him.

Karthik: Raji... Enna yosanai?

Raji: Onnum illa...Karthik.

Karthik: Ennannu sollu...

Raji: appaa kitta eppadi solradhunnu yosikkaren.

Karthik: ippo adhukku enna avasaram? Modalle avarukku udambu sari aagattum... appuram medhuvaa sollikkalaam...

Raji: oru velai...

Karthik: Raajii ... edhuvaa irundhaalum varumbodhu paarthukkalaam.. anaavasiyamaa manase pottu kuzhappikkaade... endha situation aa irundaalum rendu perum serndhu face pannalaam... sariyaa?

Raji: mmm ... sari...

Karthik: enakku promise panni kodu..

Raji: enna?

Karthik: edhuvaa irundaalum maraikkama manasa vittu en kitte share pannikkurennu...

Raji: mmm... promise...

He holds her hand in one hand and raises his other hand towards her. She puts her hand on his hand and smiles. He kisses her hand and says.."I LOVE YOU Rajiii"...

Chapter 5 .. coming soon...

CHAPTER 5