VirMan SS: The BOSS# CHAPTER 4 pg 28

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

NOTE: To all of you that are confused after the last update...

The employee that you have been reading about since the beginning is actually Viren and the guy that Manvi introduced as her husband is humara Virat!

Which is why I said DON'T KILL ME!

Hope this clears the confusion guys..

Thank You for all your comments and the amazing response!

Love You all!! <3

Edited by .aliyah. - 12 years ago

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

While reading the story ... the entire time I was thinking ... is she INSANE to think I'd kill her because I hate this story ? 🤪 Like .. this was freaking amazing ! 👏
BUT then I read last two lines and I was lyke she was damned right .. 😲 I could have killed you woman ! I choked on the chips I was eating and laughed at the same time at finding out Virat was Maanvi's first love and husband after all.😆 And all along in my imagination it was Virat as the PR. I am glad tho that Virat was not the one to have a fling with the blonde. Gah .. I hate those one-night stands and all, if you know what I mean, And really I was a little bit surprised and pleased at the same time on reading your err 'note' .
It was weird yet the different, attracting point of the story that Maanvi was the brooding sort of boss and not *cough* Viren ( I almost wrote Virat here! You are to blame! 😳) Though, I must say it is very hard to picture a strict, smileless (forgive me for the use of perhaps a non-existent word) Maanvi, when ever Maanvi is mentioned, a mischievous or smiling Maanvi comes to mind. 😃
Now it is for us to wait and read to find out so many things; what got Maanvi stressed for a couple of months, what is Maanvi hiding about Brian, VirMan's story and of course what is to happen for them in the future. I am guessing Viren will drop the idea of winning Maanvi over because at first I was convinced 'he' would get Maanvi from 'the other guy' but now that the places are switched, things will turn out differently? I hope I made sense there 🤔. I have a decent prediction for Viren but I am sure you have something better to pen down and only that will tell if my prediction was right.
Summing up, I think you must have figured out, that I loved this ! AND that I want you to update ASAP ! Emphasis on the ASAP! 😛
Oh and PM me when you update, pleajj .😊

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Nandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

WHAT???????????????????????????

VIRAT SINGH VADERA, MY HUSBAND??????????????

Do I really need to go & show my eye sight to the doc or you just updated that???????😲😲

OMG!!!!!!!!!! Within the last two-three updates this whole story has turned upside down!!!

First, Manvi started to behave normally, she was all giggling & laughing like a normal human being & NOW all of a sudden she introduced Virat as her husband?????? What in god's name is happening over here?????

I know what Virat must be feeling, he really would be having an urge to do bhangra & all but you really have managed to give me a mini heart attack with this BIG TWIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I mean viren was not her boyfriend or husband???? She was kissing a damn person for god's sake!!!!!!!!😲😲

This is really driving me nuts???? We really have one more writer who gives story full of twists & which are totally lovable!!!!!!😃

The way you have brought twists in the story is really amazing...I mean we didn't even came to know that you are gonna make a twist in the story & the story is going on a simple 7 straight way & all of a sudden with your next update there is a twist which turns the story like anything!!!!!!

I mean how do you do this???? You are really something which cannot be predicted!!!!!!!!😃

Awesome job you have done!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!😃

Cannot digest this fact more!!!😉

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IISHITA

@IISHITA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

WAT WAS DAT????????????????????????????????????????😲😲😲

VIRAT SINGH VADHERA, MANVI'S HUSBAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲

NOW FROM WHERE D HELL DID DIS COME FROM??????????????????????😕😕😕

SHE WAS SO EXCITED TO MEET VIREN, IN VIRAT'S WORDS MADLY IN LUV WID HIM. N ON TOP OF DAT INTRODUCE VIRAT AS HER HUSBAND...😕...😕...WHY????????????????????

IT WAS SUCH A WRONG POINT TO STOP...DID U PLAN ON KILLING ME DUE TO HEART ATTACK?????????? I GUESS YES...BUT I M NOT PLANNING TO DIE SOON DEAR!!!😉😆😆

SO U BETTER U😡PDATE SOON

YA BUT NO DOUBT AS USUAL VRY WELL WRITTEN WELL EXPRESSED AMZING