'FROM REEL TO REAL' - A VIRMAN SS..updated LAST PART PG 17

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"From reel to real" , a virman ss

Hey guys...first of all before starting the story an imp. Note..

I am not a writer, neither do I do the writing stuff n all as I guess there r pretty much talented writers out there so spare me plzzz!!

But the fact is that this story is written by none other than our very own talented writer mahuya jaiswal dii as some of u might be knowing her n kittu khyati ofcourse. Since mahuya excels in her own splendid hindi stories, so m just here to provide the global version' of that story to u since they r beyond excellent n are worth reading too...I hope my translation doesn't kill the essence of the story( well not sure about it)..but I would recommend that if any one of u knows hindi then better read the original script as no translation can express it that beautifully the way its being written...im writing for the first time n m not a writer' so ignore my mistakes plzz n I would like u all to give ur valuable comments n crictisism plzz...pretty long note done now here u go-

PART 1

"PACK UP" ..as soon as these words echo in my ears, a feeling of pure pleasure engulfs me. WHAT A BLISS !! . after a complete hectic day of shooting for hours, when finally the director shouts out loud these words, the only thing that I mutter silently in my head is THANK GOD'. N finally bidding adeu to everyone on sets we head towards the entire different world ,away from those heavy lights n make-up..."our real world..OUR HOME".

And as the clock strikes 9:30 in the night..the nation switches on to our yet another love saga on their idiot boxes !n starts the series of wise commentaries, crictisism n not to miss some words of appreciation also if we were lucky enough some day ! ;) well, none other than less this included our own families also which used to tell us about how the script should be written ,how a particular scene could have been modified so that it sounded a little better n all...n truly we used to enjoy all this feedback...the real drama at our homes was much more enjoyable than the reel one it seemed . and gradually in the beginning it became a usual affair to listen to their oh so precious thoughts about our performances...but as we swayed into the time schedule slowly n slowly...it all faded..as we could gather no strength after the long days work to bother about anything else than providing our body with that much needed beauty sleep !!..but what seemed like eternity was the mothers love with which we were still cherished and were relieved to senses when with all love she used to pour us a glass of water on our return back to home. Nothing in the world can relace that love no matter how famous u become!

This pack up story revolves around the life of both of us.."VIRAT AND MANVI".

WE used to work for a production house which signed us both for their upcoming daily soap.well we both met for the first time in production house office and...what to tell u how it was...interesting?? boring?? Or just normal ??...all n all whatever it was..it wasn't at all a scripted one as many of u might imagine like 'my dupatta flowing all over his face n he lifts it n sees me causing love at first sight syndrome NO! OR unexpectedly flowers showering all over us n we bump into one another n he saving me with his those muscular arms' oh my! ( cheesy isn't it ?)

Well...all sort of cheesy things did happened with us too but in our REEL life. That real life encounter of ours was much like a without sugar-extra caffeinated-oh not so tasty coffee!!

As I was already selected for the roll in auditions..i was on cloud nine n hence there wasn't even a pinch of nervousness in me when I entered the directors office. I was waiting their patiently n after a few minutes went to washroom to relieve myself ,leaving my handbag on my chair. When I returned, I saw my handbag was shifted on the other chair n a helmet took its place instead ! "who the hell dared to touch my bag "I thought as I looked around for the person, n suddenly I saw a tall, handsome ,young figure entering inside. For a moment I was completely mesmerized by his personality n charm...those beautiful hazel eyes ,chiseled abbs that one could very well appreciate from his body fitting tee, his short n bouncy hairsand not to forget those few locks which adorned his forehead when the wind blew ,his face radiating a warm glow and his perfectly toned body could drive any girl nuts for him!

I mentally slapped myself n was bought out from his trance when I heard him talking to me.but as soon as he started the director came and interrupted him, providing all of us with the news that he was being selected to play the lead actor of the show in which I was casted in. that way we met ,giving each other a very formal small n headed towards our journey of REEL life!

Who knew what magic it would create in our REAL life...

Ok guys..heres the first part for all of u. this ss might contain 2 or 3 parts. Will be updating those as soon as possible . you all are requested to plz hit the like button if u likd the story n give all ur valuable contents!

p.s "plzz ignore the typos..its not proofred!


part 2 - page 4

part 3- page 6

part 4-page 9

part 5- page 12

part 6- page 15

part 6 (II)- pg 17

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Kicha111 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
love 2 knw more abt virman
1st meeting itself manvi is checking hm
Cont soon
Wait'g eagerly 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

coffee without added sugar...umm!!! nice. Why does this feel like the story of Nia and Kushal, lol.
Mahuya di - you are a fabulous writer I wish I could read hindi more fluently and enjoy your stories as much as everybody is
Vaish - when u first told me about this translation job, i knew u would do a great job and you indeed it do it full justice it seems like - I havent read the original version. But, a lot of phrases, I can see that you you adapted and just didnt translate literally. I really liked it. Great job! waiting for next update :D

Great story and looking forward to more!

luv - anu

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kicha111

Awesome update

love 2 knw more abt virman
1st meeting itself manvi is checking hm
Cont soon
Wait'g eagerly 4 d nxt part





thnk u😊 will continue soon for sure!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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n forgot to mention - nice title :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluebolt

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unres

coffee without added sugar...umm!!! nice. Why does this feel like the story of Nia and Kushal, lol.
Mahuya di - you are a fabulous writer I wish I could read hindi more fluently and enjoy your stories as much as everybody is
Vaish - when u first told me about this translation job, i knew u would do a great job and you indeed it do it full justice it seems like - I havent read the original version. But, a lot of phrases, I can see that you you adapted and just didnt translate literally. I really liked it. Great job! waiting for next update :D

Great story and looking forward to more!

luv - anu




it was actually more difficult to translate especially when the original one got which i did got deleted!!
im wondering y i wrote this after reading it myself n iv reallized that i suck at it !! original story is far more better than it seems !🥱...thnk u for appreciating ..will surely complete the job iv started !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc ...n trust me it didnt kill the...essence by u translating ...it ws very good wud love to read further pls PM me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly i wanna say mahuya di, tis friend of mime u did splendid job in translating ur story had askd me many times to read ur stories infact i even startd bt u knw we unlucky ones arent that gud or i say fluent to read an amazing story bt nw since its in english nw i cn read n fully enjoy!
The cncept of the story looks interesting n would love to read further!

Nw my behna turn! Vaish! Woho girl em proud of u that u stand by ur words n translatd her story n trust me u were she is amazing i cn fdl the esence of original in ur version!
Muah! For tis n u really did a fab! Nw gve me it other also n wo b jaldi jaldi

anu i knw even i have the same feeling that first meeting was mre indicating Nia n Kushal! ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mamaian-Afshan

Firstly i wanna say mahuya di, tis friend of mime u did splendid job in translating ur story had askd me many times to read ur stories infact i even startd bt u knw we unlucky ones arent that gud or i say fluent to read an amazing story bt nw since its in english nw i cn read n fully enjoy!
The cncept of the story looks interesting n would love to read further!

Nw my behna turn! Vaish! Woho girl em proud of u that u stand by ur words n translatd her story n trust me u were she is amazing i cn fdl the esence of original in ur version!
Muah! For tis n u really did a fab! Nw gve me it other also n wo b jaldi jaldi

anu i knw even i have the same feeling that first meeting was mre indicating Nia n Kushal! ;-)




really afshu ?? i didnt know..i was actually waiting for u to comment coz u would actually make me aware of the thing! thnks twino for reading n ill update the next part soon now!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice story Mahuya di and awesome work Vaishali 😊

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