Lakshmi (Flash Fiction/Surrogate Mother) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: datspreets

Indeed Lakshmi had blessed two houses, though in different forms.

Very nice closure, Preeti. Flash fiction is very hard to write.  

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very good job! A nice fiction though I'd have to say I like The other Inspiration one better just probably a little bit of writing style and choice of words was better.

But nevertheless, excellect job! Flash fictions are so hard to write, I never ever tried šŸ˜†