||Virman FF: Dominant desires||* Chap. 5pg93*

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meghna325

@meghna325

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

This sure is a great update ... hope Virat convinces Manvi somehow and they get married By the look of it both have their own reasons for marrying the other. The story looks really interesting... waiting to read the next update zainab.

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zainab3

@zainab3

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Awesome update my dear...😛

Manvi reject to marry virat...

I am excited to know what will virat do now??

Thanks for the PM..

AND update as soon as possible😊

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Fabulous update..!! 👍🏼 Loved their POV's especially Manvi's.. Very well written 👏👏.. Her attitude is simply awesome.. She's a tough nut to crack! Loved her thoughts on marriage! Virat is an arrogant and egoistic person.. Looks like he can go to any extent to secure his position.. Eager to know about his next move.. Please continue soon.. Take care 😊

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Amazing update! 👏Thank u so much for adding both of their POV's in an update! 😊 I love how Manvi calls him 'do-do bird' 🤣 ", you need a brain. Which I truly think you lack!" this one was my fav of all 🤣 Just so damn funny!! Now, Manvi refuses his proposal. Whar my arrogant boy do? 💔 🤣 Update soon! ⭐️

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reyna winget

@reyna.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

so arrogant virat 😲 !

🤣 manvi rejected him...!!

continue soon...

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

another fab update by you and must say yu are gaining speed haaan 😃😆😆
both of them not ready to bear eachothers company but agreed to discuss over sumthing so important 😆😆
the way manvi got back at him was fab speechless virat and also how she lectured him over the marriage thing ...
this is really getting soo good...ofcoz very well written by yu 👏
update next part soon and do pm me 😃

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Virat is such a jerk but I love his style.

It was a good update a bit on the short side again, I really want to see how he convinces her to get married to him, if he just makes a sincere request I'm sure she'll agree but this whole deal talk is certainly not working.

So hopefully you don't keep us waiting too long, because I want to know more, I'm impatiently waiting to see how Virat manages to make her agree to his deal.

Waiting and please try and make it a longer one, I know its hard believe me I understand the pains of writing, but I would seriously want to read more because it ends too soon.

Love ya Zainab don't be upset with my complaints

Love Nush

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spoorthy

@Khushi

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: littles12

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">i should get a long comment!😃</font>

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inlvwithehmmbh

@inlvwithehmmbh

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Awesome update!
Loved how manvi and virat are reacting to their intense kiss. Well the convo at the coffee shop was definitely better as it showed their true reasons over marriage and their attempt to behave like civilized people was very much a fail seeing people looking over at them eventually.
Once again very good job! Update soon and do PM me :)
xx