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fariha baig

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Posted: 12 years ago

virika FF its all about love

character sketch n prologue

VIREN SINGH VADHERA

Handsome,cool,cute choclate boy of colege live with his family in chandigarh love his family a lot love jeevika most in his life cant live without her is very close to his best friend jai

JEEVIKA CHAUDRY

cute,bubbly,chirpy,loving girl live with her family in hrishikesh love her family n respect her beeji a lot love viren most cant imagine her life without him most close to her best freind kashish shre everything with her cant see others hurt cos of her in school she was called doll

KASHISH KAPOOR

jeevika best freind chirpy bubbly girl live near to jeevika house share everything with her n is close to her she love jai and after marriage went chandigarh she has an elder brother to whom jeevika kashish r close jeevika call her kash

JAI SINGHANIA

virens best friend a cool handsome boy live in chandigarh on 15 min drive from viren house viren is his best friend n always stand with him he love kashish n treat jeevika as sister

All othrs characters are same jeevika is not shy type girl but is stubborn with kashish and viren

PROLOGUE

vadheras were sitting together in living hall,busy in their own works dadaji and shlok playing chess maa,buaji,chachi talking and virat busy on his laptop.jeevika was in kitchen preparing tea for viren and chachu who would be coming from office.aftr few minutes viren chachu entrd jeevika also came with tea n put on table chachu sat on sofa

maa:aao viren beta betho

vn:nahi maa mein bht thak gya hun mn room mn ja rha hun

je:virenji chaye

vn(RUDELY)😡:room mein le aao

jeevika nod viren went jeevika followed.all noticed this behaviour of viren but ignore

vt to himself:ye bhai ne bhabhi se itna rudely kaise bola shaid kaam ki tension ha

he ignored just like others

VIRIKA ROOM

viren entred jeeika also came n put tea on table.viren forward his laptop bag to jeevika hoping she wil hold but jeevika glared at him angrily n went out viren got sad 😔he put his bag on bed he got freshed n cme out.

jeevika was in kitchen cutting vegitables viren was passing from their jeevika saw him n both got lost in eyelock😳 jeevika was cutting vegi without notice n she accidently cut her finger she came out of sense and start crying 😭holding her finger viren immediatly enter and held her finger but jevika jerk his hand viren got angry and left from thre virat was pasing he saw jeevika crying n went to her

vt;bhabhi ye ap dehan rakhna chaiye tha na bhabhi

he wshd hr hnd n pt cold ice on her finger

vt;bhabhi aap chalein mere sath

j.nahi virat mujhe bht kam ha mn karlungi

vt;bhabhi ap kuch nhi karogi maharaj ha na ap chalo

he took jeevika to her room n make her sit

vt;aaap yaheen raho bhabhi dinner ke liye mein apko bulalunga

j nod virat came back to his room

vt;kya ha yar aj bhai ne bhabhi se itni rudely bat ki phir jab bhabhi ko chot lagi phir bhi bhai andar nhi gaye ktchn ke bhr hi they lkn kya hoskta ha bhai bhabhi to ek doosre se bht pyr krtte hn zarur koi choti moti fight hogi kuch dair mein theek hojayega no tension

Was this just a small fight or something else?🤔

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manvi to come

foursome to dinner

family member consult virika to virat

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INDEX

PART 1 PG 1

PART 2 PG 1

PART 3 PG 1

PART 4 PG 2

PART 3 PG 5

PART 6 PG 4

PART 7 PG 7

PART 8 PG 8

PART 9 PG 9

PART 10 PG 11

PART 11 PG 12

PART 12 PG 13 and IMPORTANT NOTE (PLEASE READ)

PART 13 PG 15

Edited by Farihangel - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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fariha baig

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Posted: 12 years ago

ITS ALL ABOUT LOVE Part 2

VIRATS ROOM

virat was thinking about past incidents about virika

**koi bat to zrur hai bhai bhabhi ke beech jaise bhai ne bhabhi se rudely bat ki jab unki finger pe cut aaya to bhai ne react nhi kia jabke vo kitchen se bhr thy hua kya ha yaar kya karoon kya karoon**

He got idea to ask manvi but then he thought she will get worried.he was lost in his thoughts when his cell ring he saw ID was of manvi

he pick the call

vt(virat):hello

m(manvi):tumhari problem kya hai itni dair mein phone kyun uthaya

vt:hlo miss bandariya ye btao phone kyun kia ha

m:kyun kia matlb mjhe kisi se bat krni thi mein bor ho rhi thi to socha tumhe phone karlun tumhe koi kam to hota nhi ha na

vt:madam mn free nhi hun tum bhabhi ko phone kro or unse bat karo mjhe pka rhi ho

m:tum pyar ke dushmn ho cheep vo busy hongi

vt:kyun

m:tum cheep hi rehna are unki shadi hogyi ha or abhi jiju ke office ke aane ka time ha to u knw na

vt to himself**manvi ko bta dun kya nhi yar preshan hojaygi zrur srf chti fight hgi jisko solve krne ka mne soch lia ha

m:hlo hklo chp khn kho gye

vt:Hn manvi vo kch nhi maa bula rhi hain mn jata hun bye

m:ok bye mn kl phne krngi or pkane ke lye

vt:ya ya try kkr lna

He cut the call n wnt out whre al wre siitng togethr in hall

dadaji:virat bta ab tumhra clg khtm hgya ha tum viren ko office mn join karlo

viren:hn virat ab tujhe apne future ke baare mn serious hona pdga

vt:bhai abhi mri umar hi kya ha

maa:bta tmhri umr ki ldkon ki hmre time mn shadi hojati thi

vt:mri chro maa abhi bhai ki shadi hui hai unka socho

vn(viren):matlb

vt:mtlb bhaiapki shadi ko bht tme ho chuka ha koi hnymoon vghra ka prgrm bnao

before viren cld spk jeevika said

J(jeevika):nhi virat abhi khin nhi ja skte bdi maa ki tbyt thk nhi ha

vn:hn or mjhe offce mn bht kaam ha

vt:acha to hnymoon nhi to ek dinnr shi dadaji kya bhai bhabhi aj diner ke liye bhr jayn

dadaji:han han kyn nhi

vn:nhi dadji aj kam zda ha plz aaj nhi

vt:aj nhi to kl bhai mn kl ki booking karwa rha hun

viren just nod unwillingly.vt thought ** oh abhi tk fght no prblm kl sb thk hojayega**

Next day virat gotup early by call on his phone without seeing ID he cut the call after 10 min agn his cell ring it was manvi he got frustated n pick the call

vt:hlo bandariya subah subah phone kyn kia abhi sirf 6 bje hn tm bhi so or mujhe bhi sone do

m:cheep bat to suno

vt:Kya ha

M;mein dupahar ki trn se chandigarh aa rhi hun sham ko 5 mjhe pck krne aajana

vt:aj kyn kya hua

m;vo mri di ka sasural ha or unki shadi ko itna tme hgya or mn unse nhi mili isliye

vt;thk ha mn drvr ko bhjh dunga

m;tm kse ldke ho apni bhabhi ki bhn ko akla statn pr rhne doge or drvr ko bhjhoge pta ha ek ldkii khuli tijori ki trha hti ha

m;kareena bnne ki zrurt nhi ha aajaunga

m; acchi si gari lana

vt.mn tmhe lne arha hn kareena ko nhi or wse bhi lcky feel kro ke virat vdhra tmhe lne arha ha vrna ldkyan

m.mrti thi tmpe clg mn lkn tum bhao nhi dte thy pta ha hzr bar bol chke ho tme pe aana ok bye

vt;bye

he thoght**ab top manvi ajaayegi vo bhi aj or use bhai bhabhi ki fight ka bhi pta chal jayega kch krna pdga lkn kase or kya

At brekfast table virika we not thre n all wre sitng

chachi:vt hmn tmse ek bat pchni thi

vt;ji chachi

chachi;tmhe nhi lgta vire or jevika ke beech mn

vt;kch an ban ha right hn mne bhi note kia ha

dadaji;ye abhi se nhi ha bta jbse dno ne shadi ki ha tbse mn dkh rha hn

shlok;pr virat bhaiya viren bhai or jeevika bhabhi to ek doosre se bht pyr krte hn na

maa;han virat ase kse dno mn kch

vt;maa apne nte nhi kia jis trha bhai ne bhabhi se rudly bt ki thi or unhne dinr pe jane se mn akia imgne maa unhe to sth rhne ka moka chaye hota tha

chachu;or kya bhabhi vt sahi keh rha ha

shlok;shh viren bhaiya aagye

thy cme n st al did brkfst viren lft for offce n jeevika wnt to ktchn

vt;dkha kse dno ne ek dsre ko ignre kia ha

maa; hm kya krn vt bta

vt;maa dkhte hn agr dinr se kch bat bne vrna sochnge are mn btna bhool gya aaj manvi aarhi ha mnee usse kch btya nhi vrna vo prsh n hojti

maa.thk kia bta mn tarun se kh kr guest room thk krvati hn

vt;ji maa

at 5 virat was in station manvi came n hug him

m.kse ho cheep

vt;thk hun bndrya tm ksi hn

m;frst class bs di se mil lun phr or khsh hojaungi

vt;chlo

They reach home.all wre busy among themselves manvi came in n said NAMASTE.she met all n all lookd happy

m;chachi di khn hn

chachi;ktchn mn jao use nhi pta tm aane walki ho

m;wow srprse cool

manvi went in ktchn n sw jeevika lost in mkng food manvi cme n hg hr frm bck bt to hr srprse she shrug her off

j;9angrily0;virenji plz mjhe choriye

manvi was shockd first she said so angrly scnd she ask viren not to hug her n third ji whre this cme frm

m;di mn hun manvi

jeevika look back n hu her tigth

m;kya hua di aap thk ho

j;hn hn mn thk hn tu bta kb ayi kske sth ayi

m;abhi ayi ek ldke ke sth

j;ks ldke ke sth

m;apke dewar ke sth di dnt wry

j;chlo kmre mnn chl kr batn krte hn

m;hn chlo

j;ruk mannu virenji aate hnge mn unke chaye bnalun

m;ok di lkn ji i mean virenji

j;mannu mri shadi hgyi ha

m;hahaha ok di

she went outsde jeevika thoughT**manvi itne din bad yhn ayi ha usse pta nhi chlna chahiye ke hmre bch mn kya ha jb itne tme se chpya ha abhi bbi nhi pta chle hmn nrml bhve krna pdga**

viren cme n sw manvi happy he thght**lgta ha manvi ko hmre baare mn kch pta nhi ha jeevika ne kch btyya nhi nrml bhve krna pdga**

he came in

vn;what a surprise sali sahiba

m;jiju

she ran n hg hm

m.kse ho jiju

vn;frst clas tm btao

m;good

vn;tm yhn btho mn zra aata hn

he whspr to hr;mn jevika se milkr aata hn vrna naraz hojygi

m.hn hn jiju jao

he went to his room n sw his clothes,towel on bed

vn;hmre bch kch bhi ho lkn jeevika bhi bhi mjhse bht pyr krti ha lkn jeevika tm mjhe chorke kyn gyi

jeevika in kitchn with moist eyes

j;viren u loved me bt u didnt trust me thats why i went fs=ar frm u

v;u shld hve once tlkd to me i cld undrstnd bt wht ws need to go far u knw na how mch i love you i cant live without you

j.wht u thnk is it easy to live without u viren but i cnt live without a man who dnt trst me

both;i love u lot

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manvi to knw abt virika prblm

foursome to dinner

virmans palns to unite virika

disscussion with their friends

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@millee18

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VIRIKA FF ITS ALL ABOUT LOVE

PART 3

recap

manvi came

manvi saw jeeika in tears

m(herself).jiju to room mein hhain to di yahan kya kar rhi hain

she went in jeevika immediately wiped her tears

j.mannu tu yhn kya karrhi ha

m.di vo mn pani peene ayi thi

j.are han mjhe yad aaya virenji ne paani manga tha mn de kr aati hn varna vo naraz hojayenge

m.han di jaldi jao

j.mannnu hm kamre mn chl kr bht sari batn krnge

m.pr di kmre mn to jiju hn

j.tu fkr mt kr mjhe pta ha unhe kya chahiye

m(smirking).kya di

jeevika understood n hit her lightly on shoulder

j.paani

m.accha mujhe lga

j.mannu

manvi laugh

j.acha tu 10 min tak aaja

m.take your time di

jeevika went

m.nhi yr di jiju mn srf pyar ha or kch nhi

she happliy came to virika room n ws shckd to see insde

viren was siting on laptop n jeevika had came back from washroom

v.jeevika mera mobile charging pelaga do

j(angrily).khud lagalo

v.jeevika mn kam kar rha hn

j.mn tmhe farig lag rhi hn

v.j dnt be this rude

j.who r u to gve me advce

v.ur legally weded husband

j.bt u knw ths mrge is nthng fr me tumse mra hr rshta ussi din khtm hgya jb tmne mjhpe shk kia tha

v.j i hd sd sory for 1000 thsnd tmes for GOD ske

j gt silnt

manvi was watching all this n was really shocked she thought to ask virat n ran to her room she entred without knocking virat had came from bath n was shirtless manvi ignored

m.virat mri bt suno mjhe tmse bht zruri bat krni ha di jiju ke bnare mn

virat was angry

vt(shtng).tmhe tameez nhi ha ase bina knck kiye ksi ke room mn jaate hn kya kch to shrm kro agr mne shorts na phni hti to

manvi shhouted.shutup

m/mn tmse jiju or di ke bare mn bat krne ayi hn

vt got serious he doubt manvi gt to know evrythng he wore his shirt n bth st on bed

v.ab blo

j.vt di jiju mn fight hui ha

vt.nhi ase kch nhi ha

m.vt mn di ko 20 saal se janti hn unki aankhn mn orh lia ha mne

vt.manvi vi

m.kch ha na vt

vt.hn m

m.kya or kbse

vt.as such kuch pakka nahi pata lekin kuch baaton se lagta ha ke kuch ha

m.jaise

vt.kl bhai ne bhabhi se bht rudely bat ki phir un dono ne kl dinner pe jaane se mana kardia m u knw thm na thy wnt chance to be alone or aj suba ma,buaji,dadaji,chachu,chachi sabne bhi mujhse yhi poocha

m.unhe bhi doubt ha

v.hn

m.kbse virat

vt.dont knw lkn jbse bua ki tabiyat kharab hui or bhai bhabhi ne shadi ki us time se mn ye note kar rha hun thy r nt same as thy wre whn lvng hre bfre marriage n all

m.humein kuch karna padega partner

vt.hn manvi

he forward his hand

vt.dogi mera saath

manvi smiled n held his hand

m.ofcourse hum di jijju ko milayenge

vt.lekin humein unke aise behaviour ki reason nhi pta ho sakta ha just kkoi choti moti fight ho

m.but we have to do something then also

vt,hn to sbse phle kya karien

m.idea agr kl di jiju dinner pe nhi gaye to ab jayenge

vt.hn thk ha to hm aj rat ko dinner pe jaynege

m.hum kyun

vt.kyunke bandariya vo akele kabhi razi nhi honge samjhi

m.hn chalo bat karein di jiju se

vt.yup

they went to virika room.manvi was about to knock but virat held the knob of door

m.cheep knock to karo they r couple or couples ke room mn bina knock kiye jana dangerous hosakta ha

vt.tum mjhe cheep bolti ho lekin khud cheep ho agar do logon mein larai hoti ha to vo kya ek kamre mn akle mn kiss kar rhe honge stupid

manvi nod n thy wnt in

m.di

j.han mannu kya hua

m.di dekho na ye cheep mjhe dinner pe leke jarha ha

j.hn to

m.to di mn akle kya karungi ap or jiju bhi chalo na hum ek saath bht enjoy karnge

vn.manvi mera bht kam ha plz

m.kya jiju mn itne time bad aayi hun or ap meri bat nhi manoge

vn.mn to man lun lkn apni di ko manao phle

j.mn apni mannu ki baat kyn nhi manungi chlo

virat,manvi smirked and all came out after getting ready.

vt.dadaji hum dinner pe ja sakte hain plz

vt wink to dadaji

d.han han jao maza karo

vt,vn,m,j.thanku dadaji

they came out.viren sat on drivingseat. virat open door of front seat and was about to sit but manvi held his arm n whisper.chp di ko bethne do.virat smiled and sat back with manvi jeevika unwillingly sat with viren.in car virika wre quiet virat,manvi wre trying their best to make them smile,make them talk but they were sitting and acting like strangers who had met for one time.virat,manvi made face n sat queitly.

m whispred.virat kuch socho jaldi

vvt,tum wait karo bas

they reach cafe.car stopped with a brake n jeevika fall on viren chest virat,manvi smirked and smiled.viren jeevika wee lost in eyelock when virens phone ring and they came in sense.jeevika immediatly open the door n came out.virat,manvi smiled n hi5 thinking something else to make them together.viren went aside to attend call n virman,jeevika went in.

GUESS WHAT CAN HAPPEN IN RESTURANT.

I CLDNT UPDATE IN PREVIOUS WEEK AS I WAS REALLY REALLY BUSY WITH MY CLG N STUDIES NOW MY RESULT OF FIRST YEAR IS ANNOUNCED AND ITS NOT MUCH AS I EXPECTED I WAS A BIT DEPRESSED AND MY MIND ET FRESH BY THOGHT OF VIRIKA SO I THOUGHT TO COONTINUE THE PART N NOW I AM FEELING GOOD BUT PLZ DO LIKE AND TELL ME HOW CAN I IMPROVE MORE

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VIRMAN VIRIKA ON DINNER

DISCUSSION WITH FRIENS

Edited by Farihangel - 12 years ago