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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was great
that was so funny when he finds out that kripa has a daughter. 😆 😆
plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#12
awwwwww awesome parts Jenny. I am loving it. 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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That was amazing Jenny. Loved it yaar. Plz cont. fassssssssssssst. 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I'll post the next part today... 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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gr8 job jenny! luv it👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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continue soon jenny. I am loving it. And if you get time in your hands, please continue other two fan-fics of yours as well. 😳😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: happe

continue soon jenny. I am loving it. And if you get time in your hands, please continue other two fan-fics of yours as well. 😳😃

happe,

school is starting on monday, so those fan fics, are out of the window and into the trash, unless u wanna complete them.. i'll post this part rite now...😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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awwwwww Jenny. School is more important. I would love to continue your fan-fics if you don't mind since I love the story line for all three of em and plus I have 3 week off, so I am free to write fan-fics.

I am waiting for next part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Intezaar: Fan Fic: Part 3

Angad: Tujhe na dekhoon to chain mujhe aata nahin hai
Ek tere siva koi aur mujhe bhaata nahin hai) - 2
Kahin mujhe pyaar hua to nahin hai - 2

Kripa: Dil hoke judaa tujhse reh paata nahin hai
Koi bhi mere dil ko samjhaata nahin hai
Kahin mujhe pyaar hua to nahin hai - 2

Kripa sat on her bed thinking about Angad and Angad did the same vice-versa, just then, there was a knock on the door.. It was Naina.

Angad: Hi mom.

Naina: Hi beta, how are you?

Angad: I am good. Any problems?

Naina: Beta, I want a favor from you

Angad; Sure mom.

Naina: Beta, Will you handle Dreams?

Angad was surprised.

Angad: I thought it was your friend's project.

Naina: It is, but me, damini and gayatri are old now, and we want our childern to take over the project.

Angad thought that this was a good idea to meet Kripa and he smiled.

Angad: Okay mom, I will do it..

Naina smiled..

Naina: Thanks beta.

Just then there was another knock at the door. It was Kartik.. and Suraj.

Suraj:Mom, include us in ur talks also..

Naina; come here

Suraj ran to Naina and Kartik walked in.

Angad: Bhai, are you okay?

Kartik: Just tired.

Angad put down his head on Kartik's lap..

Angad: Are you sure bhai?

Kartik: Of course I am.

Angad got up and saw Kartik's face.

Angad: Then how come ur crying?

Naina and Suraj looked at Kartik's face.

Kartik: No, am not crying. I am just happy to see you back.

Angad smiled and give Kartik a hug. Kartik smiled and hugged Angad. Naina and Suraj stared in distress.

On the other side, there was a knock on Kripa's door. It was Bhoomi.

Kripa: What happened beta?

Bhoomi: Mom, I can't sleep here.

Kripa: Why?

Bhoomi: It feels weird here and Nanny keeps giving me milk.. yucks..

Kripa: Bhoomi! Milk is good for you.

Just then Gayatri entered.

Gayatri: You guys still awake?

Kripa: I was reading a book when the badmassh came in and said, u are trying to make her drink milk.??

Gayatri: Yea, Milk is good for you.

Bhoomi: YUCKS..

Gayatri: She is just like you.

Kripa was surprised.

Gayatri: When you were young, Me and your dad used to run around you, making u drink milk. Aryan loved milk..

Bhoomi: Really Nanny?

Gayatri turned out smiling and Kripa was surprised.

Bhoomi: Ops, I meant aunty..

Gayatri: No beta, Pls call me nanny.. I am ur nanny..

Bhoomi ran and gave her a big hug..

Kripa: Mom, did you need something?

Gayatri: Beta, I wanted to talk to about my new project Dreams. I want you to take over it.

Kripa was surprised..

Kripa: How come?

Gayatri: Me, damini and Naina are tired of handling the business, we want our kids to do it now.

Kripa smiled and thought this was a good idea to meet Angad.

Kripa: Okay mom.

Gayatri: Thanks Beta.. Good night.

Kripa: Good night...

and the finally in the door next to Khannas, Damini was sitting on the bed telling Prithivi the same thing who also agreeded..

I will continue later, as I have to go now...

Someone else contiue,



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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: happe

awwwwww Jenny. School is more important. I would love to continue your fan-fics if you don't mind since I love the story line for all three of em and plus I have 3 week off, so I am free to write fan-fics.

I am waiting for next part.

happe,

plz do.. I love ur writing skills and I think u would do justice do all my fan fics.. u can even continue this one...😆

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