Kyon Satati Hai Yaadein[Epilogue, Pg 66]

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Hello you all beautiful people out there😃 This FF is NOT my piece of work, it has been written by a very very very dear friend who is tooooooooooo scared to put up in her own post. I have actually given up convincing her to go ahead and post but since she doesn't want to so I am here posting this on her behalf.😊 Your comments/suggestions and criticisms will all be greatly appreciated, both my me and her😛 So please, join me in trying to convince her to continue doing this wonderful work and post in her own thread😉 It is long, I know but please himmat jutao aur aage baddho😉 😆

So my dear dear dearest friend.................here we go!!!!!😉

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Kyon Satati Hai Yaadein

Jai Walia - is a 33 year old successful Business man in Mumbai and owner of Walia Group of Industries, is well known and has a large female fan following. Is one of the most eligible bachelors in India. Jai has had a few serious girlfriends but changed his girlfriends every week. His last flame Roshni left him for some modeling contract in America, leaving him very bitter but most of all untrusting. He doesn't believe in true love and thinks it's just a time pass to entertain himself since he works so hard.

Jigyasa Bali - is a 38 year old, a mother of 3 children and was married to Jai's best friend Aditya. They got a divorce about 12 years ago, it was a love marriage at a very young age. She likes to party and show off her wealth, and never has time for her kids because she's always out at a kitty party or shopping.

Aditya Bali - is a 38 year old father of 3 children from his ex-wife Jigyasa. He is Jai's loyal and best friend. Aditya worked for Jai's dad and when Jai's father past away and he had to take care of the Business Aditya helped Jai and they became inseparable much to Jigyasa's distaste. A very loving and caring father, he loves his children to bits and wishes that he and Jigyasa would get back together because he still loves her.

Ranveer Bali -is a 22 year old, the oldest of the 3 siblings. Has a Business degree graduated only one year ago, working in his uncle's firm and helping with his father in presenting presentations, he is in charge of any and all presentations. He is very religious and hard working, doesn't have any plans to get married in the near future. Secretly wishes his parents to get together.

Sahil Bali - is a 21 year old, he is the second oldest, is working for his Business degree it is his second last year and studies with his sister because he failed the first year. so they are in the same classes even though Sahil is older. Isn't really hard working, love to just hang around and tease his Jai mamoo and is really into cars. Secretly wishes his parents to get together. Sahil thinks that every girl is in love with him but really they only hang out with him because he is a Walia and is rich.

Anu Bali - is 20 years old, she is the youngest daughter of the 3 siblings. Is working on her Business degree as well. She really didn't have a mother watching over her even though Aditya did his best Anu still sneaked out of the house to go and party. Secretly wishes her parents to get together. she is very free spirited and carefree. You can always find her at a party or school event.

Pushkar Walia - is a 21 year old, he is very intelligent and isn't very hard working at all but can solve any of Jai's Business problems in 5 minutes. Pushkar is a boy that Jai found on the side of the road and took in, sent to school, showered his fatherly love on him, raised him. Jai can never really be mad at him. He completed his studies in Business management so he could help Jai. Jai had his last name changed because he says Pushkar is my son. Jigyasa doesn't really like him at all she thinks he should go back to the streets where her brother found him.

Masi - is an elderly lady is Jai's mother's sister and has been there for Jai and Jigyasa after her sister passed away, when she found out her husband was involved with another woman. Jai's dad had another wife and a son but no one has ever met them before. They don't even know their names or where they could be or who they could be. Neither has tried to contact the other. She is the head of the house and loves Jai and wishes he would get married soon so she could see Jai's children. Everyone loves her and wants her to be happy.

Bani Dixit - is a 22 year old girl from Mt. Abu and she has 2 other sisters Rano and Pia. she has a degree in Business and foods but is unable to get an office job in Mt. Abu but is in dire need for one so works at a restaurant as a waiteress. Her parents passed away a year ago and Bani had to step into their place so fast that she never really got the chance to grieve for her parents she was too busy consoling her sisters and making money to keep them in school. Her dream is to have a restaurant/hotel of her own.

Rano Dixit - a 20 year old girl, she is the youngest sister of the bunch and is very very intelligent and wants to help her sister when she opens a restaurant so is doing the same thing as Bani di. Rano is a very quiet girl and isn't very social, although she is very loving and caring she isn't very open.

Pia Dixit - a 21 year old girl, she is the middle sister of the 3. She is very pretty and knows it and plays games with al the guys. She gets bored very easily once she gets one guys attention she drops him and wants another guys attention. Pia loves to go shopping and is very fashionable and really thinks that she can do anything. Hates the fact that they are middle class and are just making the bill payments for their house.

Raashi Shukla - is a 21 year old girl who lives in Mt. Abu with her brother Rohit and they are sharing a house because neither can afford a place on their own and are really close to each other. She is very quite ever since her parents passed away with Bani's in a plane crash a year ago. She loves Bani and her family actually she believes they are one big family of 5 brothers and sisters. Has completed her foods and catering degree but is unable to find a job like Bani. so they both work as waitresses.

Rohit Shukla- is a 20 year old boy, loves his sister Raashi a lot and would do anything for her. He is very protective of his 4 sisters and loves them all. He has problems with Pia he doesn't appreciate the way she gets guys attention it makes him angry they are always fighting about this. ( in a brotherly way)

Roshni Chopra- a 29 year old girl who lived in Mumbai and had a serious relationship with Jai Walia but left him for a modeling contract in America. They were engaged for about 4 months and she broke it off with him. Jai was devastated and embarrassed since then he has not been able to have a serious relationship with anyone since but is always seen with different women on the most popular magazine covers making Roshni jealous as hell.

Tony - he is the main butler of the Walia house and is the only one who understands what Jai is going through but is unable to say or do anything because it is not his place he is a mere butler.

These are the main characters but more will be added and explained as the story comes along. I am going to be following the main story line and change it up a bit to my convenience. If this story sounds like yours or you have read it before I am sorry and it was definitely unintentional.

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Walia Mansion-Jai's room

Brrring Brrrring! the alarm went off and Jai mumbled about having to get up in the morning and breaking the damn clock. He was never a morning person no matter what and always had to be woken up by a alarm he could never get up on his own. After a little while he sat up in bed and looked gorgeous as ever with his hair tousled and only boxers on. He grabbed his robe as he heard a knock on the door and his Masi walked in.

Masi : Jai tum abhi thak utthe nahi ho! Chalo jaldi karo aaj tumhari important meeting hai.

Hearing this Jai gets up quickly and walks over to his Masi to give her a hug.

Jai : Thank you Masi I forgot about that.

Jai makes his way to the washroom and as he closes the door he hears Masi mumbling about him being old enough to pick up his clothes yet he throws them on the floor and what would his wife say about that.

Jai : Masi I'm not married so you don't have to worry about that!

Masi : I know your not married but when you do get married she will say I never taught you anything.

Jai : If I clean up my mess then what will she do all day and by the way I'm getting late we will discuss this later.

Masi : yeah yeah tum hamesha yahi kehte ho, anyways chodo main nashta lagati hoon. Jaldi se taiyaar ho jao ab

Jai : jee Masi

Everyone is seated at the breakfast table eating breakfast and talking about what they are doing today. They become silent as they see Jai coming down as they know that he does not like chit chat at the table, he likes to eat his food in peace and quiet. As Jai seats himself everyone says:

Everyone : Good morning Jai bhaiya/mamoo

Jai: Good morning

Jai : Ranveer Aditya kahaan hai ? We have an important meeting today and he isn't even here yet. Please usse phone karo, we need to leave in 5 minutes! And who had the presentation files?

Aditya : Jai just relax I'm right here and I have them, I'm ready to go so you now you better hurry up before we are late.

Jai : Go sit in the car I'm coming

After 5 minutes Jai finished up and met up with Adi and Ranveer in the car.

Ranveer : Mamaji I have booked you for 2 days from now to do interviews for your new P.A. and tomorrow you have a meeting with Oberoi group of industries they want a partnership with us.

Jai : Hhummph..... fine but can't you meet with them I don't want to they always ask for partnership but I don't want it this is my company and I have a good team I don't need anyone else

Ranveer : Ok mamaji I will talk to them but next time you have to

Jai : thanx.

They arrive at the office and head to the board room for the presentation.

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Mt. Abu-Dixit Residence

Bani smiles as she wakes up to the sound of her sisters and brothers arguing over who gets the last piece of chocolate cake. Looking over at her clock she thinks this is going to be a long day after months we all have the same day off and they are already arguing early in the morning. She was trying to decide whether to have breakfast first or get ready first when her bedroom door flew open and they all came in talking at once about what they wanted to do today.

Raashi : Bani didi what should we all do today ?

Pai: I want to go shopping! Lets all go together when was the last time we all went shopping together?

Rano : I hate shopping lets watch a movie or something

Rohit : how about we go out for dinner.

Raashi : No it's a nice day lets go to the beach

Pia : No one wants to got to the beach so just be quiet ok

Rano : No one asked you to come you can go shopping we'll all got to the beach

Rohit : Who said anything about going to the beach ?

Bani laughed as they all argued amongst themselves.

Bani : ok you guys we'll talk about what we are going to do after. How about we start off with who's making breakfast, what do you guys want? I'll make anything you guys want.

Rohit : How about garam garam paratha's

A chorus of Hhmmmss......................and yeses were heard

As they all sat at the dinning table eating breakfast the phone kept ringing but no one would answer it because no one wanted to go to work and if they answered the phone and get called in to work none of them were in the position to refuse.

Rohit : Thanx Bani di breakfast was awesome, and since I'm already ready for the day why don't you girls all get ready while I clean up the kitchen and put the stuff away?

Bani : awww thanx Rohit.

and she kissed him on the cheek, walking of to her room to get ready. Rano, Raashi, and Pia all kissed him on the cheek and went off to their rooms.

Bani yelling from her room as she got ready

Bani : Why don't we all go to the mall for a bit then go for a stroll on the beach, head for dinner, and then a movie! How does that sound to you guys?

Everyone : sounds good!

Rohit : but I want ice cream as well! it's compensation for going to the mall with you girls.

Pia : Deal! And it's on me.

Bani's phone had been ringing off the hook but she really didn't want to answer the phone but it was getting to her so she formulated a plan in her head, if it's office I'll just say that I'm ill and can't come in sorry for the inconvenience. With that she answered the phone

Bani : Hello

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Walia Industries-Jai's office

Ranveer : Mamaji this deserves a celebration we finally convinced Mr..Joshi to sell his property.

Aditya : Congratulations Jai

Jai : (hugging both of them) well I couldn't have done it without both of you so thanx.

Pushkar just walked in hearing the last part

Pushkar : Hey, what about me ?

Jai : Yeah yeah I know I couldn't have does it without you either awesome job on the proposal. I'm proud of you!

Pushkar : I know you couldn't have done it without me!

Flicking his collar up

Pushkar : after all I am the best!

They all laughed as Jai chased Pushkar around his own office warning Pushkar of dire consequences if he catches him.

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Dixit Residence-Bani's room

Bani : Hello

Mr..Joshi : Hello Bani

Bani : Good afternoon Joshi uncle aap kaise hai?

Mr..Joshi : Mai ttheek hoon.

Bani : kuch khaas baat thi?

Mr..Joshi: Actually Bani I just phoned to tell you that I have sold the property and the house to and industrialist who wants to make a hotel here, and I need the house empty in 2 days and today being one of them.

Bani : Lekin uncle Joshi aapne aisa kyon kiya? Hum saab kahaan jayenge? I know we can't match what he is giving you but still we could take a loan and.....

Mr..Joshi cut in

Mr..Joshi : Bani my lawyer went to Mumbai and I have signed the papers there is no looking back i am really sorry beti. Goodbye.

Bani was so shocked she dropped her phone on the floor. Bani started crying her hand over her mouth, eyes filled with sorrow and worry. She ran into the washroom and turned the shower on so no one could hear her crying. After 20 minutes when she emerged she looked confident and ready to face the world. In her mind she had resolved that they would pack up and move to Mumbai in search for better and higher paying jobs. As she looked in the mirror she promised herself that they would get through this and she would tell them tonight when they came home after dinner because she wanted them to have fun on their day off. Wiping the absent tear from the corner of her eye she made her way to the family room where everyone had gathered.

Bani : Ready?

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No replies??????? 😭 Kisiko pasand nahi aaya????
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OMG great start.. 👏 👏 👏 Will be back after more reading. 😆
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WOW. OMG, why isnt your friend posting this herslef, do you know how many positive comments she will get on this. Its sooooooooo goood, and I love you style of writing. Pls pls pls cont soon, and I would looove you see who this mysterious person is who wrote this. 😳
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Originally posted by: aman123

OMG great start.. 👏 👏 👏 Will be back after more reading. 😆

Thanks a lot😃

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a great begining! I like the way you've started the ff and I love the Jai in this ff. He seems to be a fun loving, carefree yet business minded man!

Now when do our lovely couple meet? lol!

Really looking forward to reading more of this ff!

Continue soon!

Anam
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Originally posted by: strawberry007

WOW. OMG, why isnt your friend posting this herslef, do you know how many positive comments she will get on this. Its sooooooooo goood, and I love you style of writing. Pls pls pls cont soon, and I would looove you see who this mysterious person is who wrote this. 😳

Thank you, thank you.😊 I am going to try convincing her again to continue from here. I know, she writes really well and it's a real shame she isn't doing this herself.

But thanks again for the encouragement😃

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Originally posted by: salmansgirl

a great begining! I like the way you've started the ff and I love the Jai in this ff. He seems to be a fun loving, carefree yet business minded man!

Now when do our lovely couple meet? lol!

Really looking forward to reading more of this ff!

Continue soon!

Anam

Hey Anam, thanks hun. I am also loving this Jai and am waiting for the next part😳. The couple might not meet so soon but let's see what the writer decides to give us😉

Thanks again, I am sure this will lead to a change of mind of my friend and she might decide to continue from here.

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Awesome start.
loved it.
Beautifully set up....so Bani and the gang ready to move to Mumbai.
Love to know this mystery writer....she is good and I glad to post it on her behalf.
plz plz cont. soon.
👏 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome start.
loved it.
Beautifully set up....so Bani and the gang ready to move to Mumbai.
Love to know this mystery writer....she is good and I glad to post it on her behalf.
plz plz cont. soon.
👏 👏 👏

Thank you sweety😊. Yes Bani and gang are all ready to move to MUMBAI! Yeah the writer is really good and I will definitely tell her to continue............and soon too😳

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