Hello Payal and Deepika Di :) You guys just wrote a Happy OS and congrats for that. Coming to the One-Shot that jst shooked my thoughts It was sexy and hot. I am just blushing around in my house after reading this. Sheesh. You guys stood out here in the concept. It was Awesome! Fabulous job Payal n DD. joota n chappals to you for writing this in sucha hawt weather!!!
And the note at the end..inviting us to share our wild thoughts LOL I am trying to keep my mouth stripped up. This is it for now!
First off all I'm mentally slapping myself from commenting on this Deepu dii and payal🤗 the os was👏 It was a correct balance of love,naughtiness and sensuousness.It got pretty sexy yet never seemed vulgar. Swayam ne dates cancel karke apne paon par kulahdi maar li.Loved sharon's punishment and swayam's reaction to it. Sharon ne swayam ko strip dancing ka task diya.She jumped on the axe herself🤣as we all know swayam can be very sexy when he wants to be.Loved how the emotions kept changing for both of them throughout the story.The writing seemed flawless and had a nice flow to could not differentiate between dii's and payal's part.The song selection was apt for the os.It was a treat to read this one...