ARHI FF: HONA THA PYAAR # 3 part 33 pg 2 17/4 - Page 6

All d 3 brothers getting married 2 3 sisters,arhi's marr was a sacrifice.but they accepted it happlily.liked how u made karan druv.arhi hid their marr,so tht khushi can work with shyam.tht time shyam seemed 2 b decent.but later it was a shock tht he was in luv with k even from school days.thank god arnav didn't misunderstand khushi.he supported her.shyam-sheetal's marr was a shock.later I understood d truth behind their marr.arnav's arrangement 4 sr was sweet.there was no vulgarity.thts wht I like abt ur ffs.arnav got shot.oh..thank god he survived.arnav's 23 b'day gifts wer a surprise.i've never read sth like this in any other ff.hats off 2 u 4 this innovative idea.ending was also beautiful.arnav telling tht d best gift was given by k..their son arush.tho d other pairs hav no imp I liked d fact tht u added them also.it increased d charm of this ff.i rly enjoyed this wonderful ff.

In d index u hav not written tht its finished.plz edit ur index.

I think in parts 2,3,12,13,14,18 in one place u've written pia instead of Khushi.In pt18 in one place u've written abhay instead of Arnav. Use replace option in word,so tht this mistake wont happen