Taarey FF: A One Man Army #3 (season 2 OUT) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
you know what
i can imagine each and every word
like i am watching action movie
everything gunshot, taani's scream, swayam helping rey, he is on branch everything just perfect.
you are an awesome writer
keep it up dear
worried for taani
hope reyam will find her soon and as rey said no mercy for shaka.


and cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
TaSha... U always make me speechless yr...
Today also u did the same...!!!
I mean itna acha update...Me toh totally lost in the update...
It was that mind-blowing and amazing...
I so loved the way i write each and every part...
That part where Shaka shooted Rey was really very scary I was also like someone snatched something from me cozz such scary scenes always brings such sensation in me and u also did the same...
Now I'm totally scared for Taani yr...!!
And ya thanx for making Swayam know that the clues which Rey left were wrong...
I so wanted that to happen...
I so loved that Swayam knows Rey a lot...
And the way Swayam tried to take out the bullet was scaring me but still it was awesome yr...
And that ReYam part in the morning was awesome...
I so loved the dialog Rey said to Swayam when Swayam was saying all that that what will happen to Taani and all...
I really loved that dialog of Rey's...
Now only waiting for ReYam to find out Taani soon...
Over all u did a fantastic job...
Hats off to u...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
that ws compltly heart breaking update...
only 1 gud thing happnd ws swayam found rey...
n nw rey s ok i m sure that he wl nt let nythng happn to his taani...
i trust rey compltly in that...n as nw swayam s also thr wt rey i m sure they wl find taani really soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
TaShu!!!😭😭
Loved the Update..
It was so emotional, so touching..
I had tears in my eyes..
Rey was in such a bad condition..
And seeing Rey like that Taani was also in so much pain..
Wait.. Let me take out all my frustration first...
SHAAAKAAA!!!!!!😡
Feels Better...😆
That Shaka😲
How dare he???
He shot Rey..😲😭😭
And Taani!!
Her screams.. Her Pain..Her fear...
You described that part so beautifully, dear..
Really Loved it,..
The way you write everything, it actually feels like an ongoing Movie...
So Perfectly Visualised...
And Swayam...
He knows his Best friend so well..
I really loved the flashback..
Specially that particular part which depicted Rey's attitude..
Haye!!! I am so in love with it...
I really respect their friendship...
The way you described Swayam's fear..
And then the way he saved Rey..
Really loved it, TaShu...
Hahahahhaha!! That scene..
Swayam sitting on the tree...😆
I could not stop ROFLing...
So Hilarious...😆
And I feel so bad for Rey...
He could still feel her pain..😭
Really loved how Rey said those Lines about Taani to Swayam..
It showed how much he loves her...
I really loved that part...

Amazing Update, dear..👏
Now, Jaldi chahiye next update...😡
Plz..😳😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
omg wow
kya update tha yr
maza aagaya
rey shot😲
taani in danger😲😲😲 that guy😡
sw finally found rey n helped him wow👏
now they will find taani soon👏
loved the update
plz continue soon
muah love u
ur ss😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
hell to shaka... Rey being shotd but thnkxx to swayam he ws dere by tym..Nd thnkfully swayam choosed de ri8 direction.. IN Scary situation reyam r hving funny doalouge...mostly swayam hats off to dem.. Hope soonly dey will find taani also nd will make kimma of dt creepy saka...
Edited by Bista-anzana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

OMG... I AM SO HAPPY THAT SWAYAM FOUND REY AND HE IS PERFECTLY SAFE AND ALRIGHT !!!! MY FAVORTE LINE WAS WHEN REY TOLD SWAYAM " As long as I am alive no one can harm my taani." I HOPE THAT SWAYAM & REY FIND TAANI SOON. PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.

Edited by CharMarfan1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: CharMarfan1

<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="6">OMG... I AM SO HAPPY THAT SWAYAM FOUND REY AND HE IS PERFECTLY SAFE AND ALRIGHT !!!!MY FAVORTE LINE WAS WHEN REYTOLD SWAYAM" As long as I am alive no one can harm my taani." I HOPE THAT SWAYAM & REY FIND TAANI SOON. PLEASECONTINUE SOON. </font>



Thank u so much dear
Yup swayam found Rey
Awe I love that line too :)
N will try to update soon :)
Edited by --Ta_Sha-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Res
Sry...have already commented on pg 13 😛
Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashisha

congo for ur third thread...👏

awsm ff👍🏼andupdate


Thanks dear

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