SWARON SS; I DONT WANT U BUT U R MINE updt page 11 - Page 13

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

oops..that was unexpected...pleasantly surprised 😳

RES till tomorrow..will be back with a longer comment...

THE UPDATE IS WAY BEYOND ANY WORDS OF APPRECIATION ..CAPS & BOLD

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Hey Medha...

U know u are an AMAZING writer...i have never seen such beautiful expressions ...use of such flowing language for Swaron...every writer has a unique style of writing..and u my frnd ..are just AMAZING...ur style of writing is FRESH..UNIQUE...CLEAR...EXPRESSIVE...just HEAVENLY...while going through ur SS ...one can feel the feelings which the characters are going through...u can make them laugh and cry through ur words...BEAUTIFUL piece of creativity...how u have shown his importance in her life...its so touching

And it choked me. i...i felt like now i really am nothing to him. Dance was who i am...and swayam, being his girlfriend...although not many knew about it had quietly also become a huge part of who i am. I felt like i did not have any effect on him anymore.felt like i was of no consequence anymore. It choked me. throttled me. lord it suffocated me worse than the dance.

His reaction to see him with her inhaler..was beautiful portrayed...a moment beyond words..

Found it. breathed in.moments passed. Collected myself and looked up at him. He was looking at me and the inhaler...but i cant define his expression.it was not confused...or shocked...or relieved or hurt. It was...like he could not or did not want to connect or associate that inhaler with me.he saw it but he did not want to make the connection. I know...thats exactly how i felt when i found out. It was not acceptable to him. His pain...my pain...same thing.

The pain she was going through got lessened with HIS touch...his pain...his hurt was soothed by having HER in his arms...the comfort his embrace can provide her no other thing can give that..

but right now all these could wait...all that mattered was i get to be in his arms and its so comforting...my head tucked under his chin and its just so safe..like nothing can hurt me anymore. he understood. perfectly.

I just loved how u gave these loose ends a conclusion...he finally got to know about her illness...

This beautiful part of ur SS is dedicated to me..as it was my birthday...couldn't get a better Gift than this..its just BEAUTIFUL..thanx dear😳

Luv
Deep

Originally posted by: Trouble_Magnet

It was a treat to read this SS..

It was touching..beautiful..and everything that defines Swaron..

I loved it..
Please do write more on them..:)

finally just read d whole ss.. its awesome ur a great writer.. u used words brilliantly.. u portrayed sharon's helplessness love everything brilliantly.. swayam's confusion to his declaration of leaving dance was beautifully written... n d way sharon reacted n swayam got to know abt her prob n d way u ended their love saga was just beyond words.. awesome ss.. in love wit ur ss...

awesome sss😊😊😊 and superb ending...sorry for late comments 😃

I JUST FINISH READ IN ONE GO... LOVELY SS ... FABULOUS AND SUPERB LOVED IT...