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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys I know I know I said i would be hell busy this week but i can't stop writing this an os which I was thinking to post from a long time so here it is
Simply dedicated to my Nidhi , Persia
And the awesum writers on IF Cheeni aka Komal aka cheesemad & Abi aka rami92



My Dream Girl


Yess yess like this ..!!

There yes there please make it fast baby ..!!

Arnav jaldi please i cannot wait anymore ..!!

Khushi i love it when you go crazy when I make love to you ..!!

Par patience my sweety let me satisfy you first ..!!

Then i will provide you the ultimate pleasure ..!!



Arnav..!! Arnav wake up what are you doing what the hell are you saying . Arnav wake up beta ..!

Maa you there ..? I was wit..!Arnav stopped in middle seeing his mother standing infront of him not khushi

You was with what beta ..? And what were you all that baby and all..?? His mother Naina singh raizada asked raising left eyebrow as if caught his son red handed doing a crime ..

Uhmmm maaa woh ..!! Arnav was stammering while speaking don't know how to answer her question .. Unable to answer the question of his mother Arnav acted smart and soon the question was on Arnav's mother .. Maa what is the time and why in the first place you are here . Don't you have any work to finish if dad comes to know that you are still in my room then there will be no limit of his anger .. He said as a matter of fact .. Go maa see whether he needs anything or not as you can see I am already awake now I won't sleep anymore you can trust me on this . With this he gave his a cute puppy dog face showing as if he is the only cute and innocent boy in the whole world and the rest are bad with all the bad motives.

His mother always used to get trapped whenever she found him doing something weird while sleeping this was the effect of arnav singh raizada on his mother . She had blind trust on him. It was not that he was a bad guy, who would lust for a girl or can do any wrong thing . Naina Singh Raizada being easily trapped in his son's words got worried for her husband behavior and listening again and again from Arnav's mouth made her more mad and giving a cute smile to her son she left the room without telling the purpose she was here .


"Ayee titaliya khana toh kha le thik se ..!! Sukh kar kanta hogayi hai aur khana khana ka naam nai .. Chup chap baitho aur khana khao .. Warna kahin nai jana milega samjhe ki nai..!! Hayee re nandkishore " Buaji said tiwisting khushi ears .. "Ahhh buaji leave me dard ho raha hai" Khushi said trying to escape from buaji holds but failing everytime .. No I wont leave you until and unless you have your food and where are you going now dont you know you have to come with me today ..?" Buaji said raising a eyebrow as a matter of fact as if she knows ki khushi will run away anytime from here ..!! "Are buaji hum kahin nai ja rahe hai .. It was just preeto was calling me outside for some help..!!" She to tried to act innocent being caught by her nandkishore saying buaji ..


Helloo .. Haan were did you reach I m almost about to enter the gate ..!!Arnav asked on the phone "Did she come to collage...?"

"Heyy arnie no man she didnt come yet and I guess she won't come also" Akash singhania Arnav Singh Riazada's best friend said him by getting the latest new passing to his ears

Arnav and akash were the best friends called as chaddi buddies. They knew each other's crushes' name, loves' name whom they are serious, with whom they just hang around for fun there first kiss too. There wasn't a single secret between these two ..!! And right now akash knew his friend's madness for a name Khushi Kumari Gupta one of the most simple and elegant girls with whom every boy wanted to get mingle but not for pure relationship only for satisfying his lust over her. But but this time the case was different with the great Arnav singh Raizada. Akash knew his friend is madly in love with the girl and have done almost every damn thing with her in his dreams or to be precise wild dreams. A small smile came on his lips watching his madness

He was roaming in the whole collage to find any information regarding her and what he found from a friend of her shocked him to the core..!! He didnt expect this to be coming on his when he was supposed to propose a girl whom he dreamt of from the past three years.. "SHE IS GOING TO GUY A HOUSE FOR A MARRIAGE PROPOSAL"The words were roaming in his mind remembering the day when he saw her..!!

Flashback


It was a normal day for everyone also .
New day new life and new responsibililties
When everyone was busy in there own lives Arnav Singh Raizada for the first time was staring at the main gate as if he sensed her . She did not even make her entry also Arnav was sure that there is his angel going to come now. And there she came, his angel dressed in a white salwar kameez hair made in a simple pony tail looking like just came for him . He was ogling her unaware of the stares he was getting from the hot chicks who was going gaga over him watching him come everyday . They were fuming at khushi because she was getting the most handsome hunk's attention. As if she snatched away arnav from there grib .
Arnav never paid attention to those girls because he knew that what are there intentions . He was busy in his angel's world unaware of fact his angel and his chaddi baddy were laughing at him silently

Khushi was entering the main gate when she found the most handsome guy staring at her she didnt wait to ask him for what he was staring at her because his intaza gaze was making her heart beat faster then her usual rate. He is breathtaking she thought mentality and left that place with a soft smile adorning on her lips.

Days passed like this before her entry in collage arnav could feel her and would make his chocalate brown eyes to the entrance of the main gate. Khushi would be left amazed with the fact that still he could feel her mere presence in the air without watching her.

Khushi woud wait everyday watching arnav come to canteen and would mentally think he would ask her the question which she was longing to hear from him. He would talk all the thing in the cafeteria hours use to pass like this but arnav never approached her.

It was one of the day when the college would celebrate fresher days. And khushi being a fresher in the college was also invited to the party. Khushi didn't like to make up much but wore a red colour saree one of arnav favourite colour purposely . With the thought that finally Arnav would approach her . But all went in vain when she found that arnav had gone out of station due to some urgent work and wouldn't be able to attend the function.

After that encounter of arnav and khushi . They never got a chance to come in front of each other for . But never left to feel each other on the main entrance of the collage

Arnav have decided that he will propose khushi in the final year because if she rejects also he wouldnt have to face embarassment so he left approaching her and here khushi thought he isn't destined for her so she left waiting for him everyday . Only would to watch him in college gate because her heart never agreed with her mind in this case..

Lest they knew what future holds for them ..

Flashback ends

Arnav chain of thought broke when akash hand his way on his shoulders and he said "Arnie what are you thinking ..?? What did that girl say?? Arnie ..?? Arnie ..??

Arnav cme out of his thoughts and was about to speak when he got a call from his dad ..

Hello dad ..!! Arnav said

Arnav where the hell are you ..?? Dev singh raizada aranv dad shouted on the other side of phone almost bursting the speakers of the mobile in arnav ears

I m in college dad ..!! Arnav replied casually " Why did you need something or is there anything you want to say me.." Arnav asked omly to get another loud reply from him

I WANT YOU HOME IN NO TIME DO YOU GET THAT . NO TIME MEANS WITHOUT WASTING A MINUTE CAME HOME RIGHT NOW AND DARE YOU GIVE EXCUSES TO ME I M NOT YOUR MOM WHO WILL GET TRAPPED EASILY IN YOUR TRICKS" And with that he ended the call without even waiting for his reply

Arnav was already mad with the info he got right now and more over his dad was now making it difficult for him to get some more information about the girl he was mad for.

He left college leaving a confused and questioning Akash behind.


Khushi was getting ready without even knowing where she was going to. It was third proposal in a month , every time a boy used to come to she her this was the first she was going to a guy house without knowing the name of the guy . Becuase last time when she came to know about the guy family she made a trick with them and made there decision in her favour "Rejection" so this time her buaji tricked her and made her stay at the home and didn't even told the name of the family

"Are ohh sankadevi taiyayr hui ki nahin , Hayeee re nandkishor hum toh hadd gaye hai iss sanka devi ka samne .." Buaji said while coming towards hall

"Haan haan buaji hum taiyar hai par kaam se kaam humein ladka ka naam toh bata dijiye .." Khushi asked innocently

Chup chap humre saath chalo jahan hum keh rahe hai aur khabardar agar is bar koi chalaki dikhayi toh kasam nandkishore ki sanka devi acha nai hoga buaji said in a angry tone making khushi worried .. She didn't want to marry anyother guy leaving arnav. She was waiting for him to propose her ..

Khushi followed her buaji footstep and entered the raizada mansion her head was down casted as her buaji taught her . She was greeted with two three ladies and a male .

Khushi was seating between two aged women and when they introduced themselves she in return said namaste to them.

Khushi bitiya yeh Arnav ki dadi hai aur woh Arnav ki behen anjali and woh hai Arnav ka papa

Khushi was saying namaste to every one but her mind was dancing like a maniac listening the name of the guy she was on the edge of bursting out her laugh when the person made his entry and was blabbering without even watching the surrounding and the hazel brown yes staring at him

"Dad why did you call me all of a sudden" Arnav asked

"I was busy in ..." Arnav stopped in midway when he felt her

His eyes glued to her as if no one was existing there he was madly staring at her without even knowing what she doing here in his house .. His chain of thoughts broke when Arnav mother grabbed his hand and made him sit on the sofa opposite to khushi

Both were staring at each other when naina said "Chottey she is madhumati gupta and she is her niece khushi gupta "

Arnav understood everything and without even letting naina complete her sentence and staring at khushi with his sexy smirk and naughitness in his eyes he said " MAIN MUJHE YEHH RISHTA MANZUR HAI "

All people sitting around in the hall where hell shocked with the answer of the chotter only a pair of hazel brown eyes was laughing the reaction of this chottey

They all were happy seeing the happy side of chottey and with that without caring about anyiother people he grabbed her hand and made his way to his room again leaving everyone in shock

Arnav kya kar rahe ho ..?? Khushi asked in a panic tone

For which she got only a pair of lips to shut her up and with that they kissed each other till the last breathe they had




๐Ÿ˜Š Guys dat was it
Rotten tomatoes chappal are most welcome and also criticism ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Because most of the time i write a crapwa ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
if anyone liked it do cmnt and like for it rest cn simply ignore

and for fututre updates BUDDY ME ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wen I strtd reading dis I ws in shock modewa... ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ



A gal whoz shyyy wrote such explicit stuff???? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Bt all my shock went into d drain wen I read further... ๐Ÿ˜†

Arnav's mom caught him red handed blabbering all tht STUFF?????? ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hez so smart tht he trapped his mom in his wrds n got off... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Arnav n Akash as Chaddi- Buddies... I cn imagine tht... ๐Ÿ˜†

Ye Arnav k dreams hamesha itne wild q hote hain???? ๐Ÿคฃ

He use 2 ogle Khushi silently??? Cho cuteee... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Wat d, d gr8 ASR ws scared 2 propose her????? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Finally, Buaji NK tied dere destiny n dey met... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Arnav's instant acceptance to Marriage Proposal ws hilarious... ๐Ÿ˜†

Finally, d KISS happened n my RG wrote it... โ˜บ๏ธ

Who said its crapewa?????? Its AWESUMWA... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘




Edited by asthagarwal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aimmy

omg...new os by my barfi...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

lovely...it feels so great...
when i started reding it ...i was like...hein?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
mature os?...but then i was laughing like hell๐Ÿคฃ
his fantasies are 2 wild and dengerous๐Ÿคฃ
he is a clg guy...i just love these teeny love stories...
he sensed her without watching her
true love re...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
and the last part was 2 damn funny...without even a single word he agreed for it๐Ÿ˜†
kiss was hmm u knowโ˜บ๏ธ
meri baat maan...aik aur part likh iss ka uss mein khushi ko preggy kar de๐Ÿคฃ...warna muje saans kaise aye g?๐Ÿคช
awesome barfi...really damn gud...

hug to banta hai na


loved it muahhh

urs d...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by asthagarwal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh God Pooja...that was awesome...m sooo happy...



A very matured and confident writing...simply amazing...
Arnav n his fantasy... ๐Ÿ˜†
Loved d way Arnav handled his mom...Smart boy... ๐Ÿ˜‰
FB was cute...
Simply loved d concept of silent love...
Desperate Arnav didn't even proposed her n kissed her... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Congrats for such an amazing writing... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธ





Edited by avni_barun - 12 years ago
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Kar diya tera n CC ka res heroine...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res ha
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main aa gaya finally ..sorry ji delay ke liye
wow..awesome OS
haye ...love at first sight
doono ko ek doosre se pyaar tha..par koi kuch keh ya kaar nahi raha tha so kismat ne kaar diya
uske liye arnav ka hi rishta aa gaya..lovely
Edited by ..Gunjan.. - 12 years ago
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Awesome OS dear ๐Ÿ‘
Edited by mishachwdhury - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res ๐Ÿฅฑ

unres๐Ÿ˜ณ

aww poo this was a cutee os

Arnav madly n lovee wit khushi

finally the proposal for khushi s arnav

d start of d update was amazinggg๐Ÿ˜‰

totally lovveedd ittt
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what the...u posted it without me...
m mad at u
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resss
unresss

Th..OOPS HUGS poojz fr the dedication..๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
Aww u made me grin like a fool after seeing this๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
and ofcourse i loved ur surprise..๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
being all busy n running with clock u gave me such a chweeeyt surprise spl hugs fr tht baby๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—


Now to the update๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

OMG what was that poojz with a naughty shot was the thought that ran in my mind.. โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ
And i read further i was like poojz U R SIMPLY BESHHHTTT ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
they talk through eyes๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Khushi dresed in red fr arnav๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
but poor him mised it๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
just loved the way arnie is head over heels in love with her๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ha ha khushi is such a naughty bunny that bua is wryd to say the family's name also..๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
And just loved the entire drama in raizada house
OMG arnav directly said ok bfr anyone could speak๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
And then rushing her to his OOPS their room๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ahem ahem only kiss ???๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

And once again it was too nice poojz๐Ÿค—




Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago

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