New FF: Journey to Love (Arshi) - Chapt 1

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

A Fantastic start to the story.👍🏼

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nafisa

@zar-bara

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice update.
i guess the guy is arnav 😎
they are meeting after 3 years>what will happen next?

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Sumaiya

@-SBKA-

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

The start is really good 👍🏼 and the prologue was really sad, poor Khushi 🥺. After reading the 1st chapter, I'm really confused. I think that the hot guy Lavanya sat beside is Arnav, well I don't know. The person sitting beside Khushi, I guess, is someone she met a long time before because if it was Arnav, they coudn't possibly forget each other, either one of them might have recognized. But it again, it can be possible that Arnav got hotter (☺️) and that's why she didn't recognized and she didn't even pay attention. All in all it's really good start and concept 👏. I have a feeling I'm going to cry in the future updates, 😛. PLEASE continue soon.

Edited by -SBKA- - 12 years ago