ArHi SS:Shattered #5 *Completed*

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Chap 12
superb
both were ready to leave their work for each other
loved it
finally they are together hamesha
update soon
thanks for pm

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

M update da comment heer - 88808476

Wonderful ending hamesha!

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ILUD

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KDHI

Lulu

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

that was brilliant update juhi.. just superb

so garima is going to lucknow and khushi was worried for her.. hmm

wow.. both were ready to leave their country for each other and even khushi applied for PAHO.. to be with him and also talked to he family about it

arnav also planned everything... and his plan was better

loved their talk, it was very important for them and loved it how they handle everything.. it shows whatever comes they will sort that problem together

aw.. they both have their photo and omg arnav had it in his wallet

he took her with him to shanti van and there they meet nani.. love the way he supported khushi in everyway and encouraging her

love nani... well to be frank I was kinda expecting this convo of nani's preposition but proud of khushi's decision

they finally give had some relation.. loved it

will gonna badly miss this ss.. waiting for prologue to come

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Congrats on new thread... have to read 3 updates.. Will be back with my chotu sa comments😊

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cvrocks

@cvrocks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

I just like loved it. Great update

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Jo Pehle Hua Na

I loved it when Arnav shared details of his aspirations and hos concerns wth reagrds to remaining a politician with her, Unknowingly they had already taken the first step towards a reconciliations.

Alas that joy was short-lived. Setting foot on Sheesh Mahal brought back all those memories. I know I may be in the minority when I say that in a way Im glad that the Sheetal episode happened. Arnav hadn't moved on from the past, he needed to do something to make peace with the past. But in his efforts to hurt Khushi he also realised that he couldn't see her like this. You have stayed true to Arnav's character here and did complete justice to their love hate relationship. One second he shares something very personal and another second he hurts like no one else.

Interlude-

This is poignantly tragic chapter. there are so many grounds you have covered here. Right from communal harmony in the form of Hindu parents adopting muslim children, the undying love of a sister for her brother and of a brother for his sister and the evil in men who did what they did to Anjali.

You handled the chapter with aplomb. there are stories that make you cry, but this update made me think.