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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh so its the end 😭 but it was brilliant in the way you always trump reader's expectations!! when Khushi detailed her plan to Arnav, I was like ooohooo, she has it all covered. And then you surprised us with Arnav's Shaatir dimaag who made sure none of them gave up thier dreams for the other, it was so sweet that they both thought for the dream of the other 😊.

But Nani's plan was a total surprise to top this all. Not only she is accepting of Khushi but ready to goom her under her wings. But I understand Arnav's hesitation, polytics is not for good natured and honest people like Khushi. Only self centric, cunning, manipulative etc etc people can survive polytics not just in India but any where in the world.. that's the unfortunate truth

This was a fitting end to a journey filled with Nafrat!! Magar Picture abhi baki hai to waiting for the Epilogue with bated breath. And I'm not going to make any guesses as to what's coming beacuse I know you always have something that trumps any expectations!! 😆

Will miss you dearly 😔

Luv n Hugs
🤗
K
Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beeeaautiful update! Enchanting and heartwarming (: I'm awed by these 2 pure rich unselfish souls coming together the way they are (: All smiles! =D
Brrriilliant writing =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Im sorry i wasnt able to comment on the past few updates...but they were amazing!
The story was amazing!
I had so much fun reading it...cant wait for the epilogue :D
Politics looks boring but i actually find it interesting after your story :p
Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahhh how far they have come! cant wait for the epi to see what decisions they made.
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Posted: 12 years ago
And so this journey of love hopefully will begin for these two, they both lost so much and gained each others trust and love, but what a treacherous path they had to endure, its not smooth sailing even yet but truly a step in the right direction. Garima showed her, just like any mother would, that Khushi had to think for herself and let go of the guilt, it really doesn't achieve anything...

It was a treat to read the excitement in Khushi as she prepped food for Arnavs arrival but alas all best plans !! The red sari was a bonus treat for him.. but the best part had to be they were both were ready to sacrifice for each other, if that's not love the what is

Nani is very astute, she knows her grandson well and if Arnav marries Khushi, who has excused himself from politics.. then the Raizada bahu will go into politics, ;-) If Khushi accepts that is...

You taught many important life lessons in this FF, forgiveness being the foremost, acceptance of us all as human beings regardless of race creed or caste..



Note, please share fwd for a family friend, this should not happen to any parent, but it did, the suspicious death of a daughter after marriage .please sign petition for -http://www.bhoomikakochhar.com/
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know an updex is going to be freaking-amazing, when its dedicated to Meera!!

And dan you see the word "Hamesha" :)

Kya bolun ab?

Its a sort of bittersweet moment everytime I write my "last comment" on your story. What a journey its been. Thank you Juju! I cannot even..well those 158 points should tell you right? So continuing from there..

159. The mystery never stops (or my overactive imagination when reading an expel story!). And so the first scene has me kinda worried..you never put anything in your story without any consequence, and I am hoping Garima is safe and sound and exactly what mannat has been fulfilled that she is going to the lucknowi dargah?

160. "There was no use speculating about his responses, he always managed to surprise her anyway." That definitely sounds familiar!! And basically why this chapter is such an expel-esque one. At first I really thought you would have K go all out with her lucknowi dishes, red sari at the date would be perfect. Galat. Then I thought K would be the one to make that compromise and A would accept. Galat. All because of ASR! Dammit that man is a bag of surprises that I am secretly phangirling over. But that is another postulate all together. So as always thank you J for keeping me on my toes, and second-guessing my own-self!

161. Hai dhoop sa magar, and M tink gutterz heer. "She had lived in the shadows for so long...and now that she had taken the first step into the sunlight,"

162. Even without the below neck fiddles, M tink butterflies plateau? But what I like most is A stops and admits this wasnt his reason for coming. I like that you have stressed that through the last few chapters, and finally we see just why..

163. The forgiven kostin. Just like the past kostin. I am glad that the so called "getting over the past" isn't just put in the back burner as the story moves on..yes they have each other now and something even bigger than all that. But no one can easily forget something that have essentially changed their lives for. Thank you for bringing K out of the shadows and making her honestly speak her heart!! I think time will be the healer along with lau ofcourse!

164. I loved K's solution. But DAN you gave A's and you reminded me just why I love that man in this story. I was reading back to my comments, and realised he needs to stop running away no? That was something he is famous for..and family is a big deal, especially after leaving his grandma in such a lurch! So not only is your reasoning sound-proof to us hopeless romantics, but also to the sane ones. I bow down to your shatir dimag that has ALL the correct solutions hamesha!!! HAMESHA.

165. TFS. "Never, ever suggest that I'm not serious about you. "

166. The Photograph!!! Mystery solved! He has one tooo..YAY. (Lunatic) Dreams do come true indeed!

167. Thank you a million times for bringing her face to face with Nani, Anjali and Shantivan. I think it was only fair after A faced NK...I really loved the way you handled it!

168. Ah see this is something I did predict, the whole rajneeti, bahu for president stuff. And I had the exact same kostin as K, as to why that wouldnt work, and also because this aint no SKD..but as always you justify your reasoning, I guess we will have to wait until the epilogue to see where there life goes? If you decide to take us that way..I'd much rather prefer da houseboat/lake honeymoon :P

169. And the TERRACE is back. M tink dis be a hint 2 da future ;)

170. Hey in every single person who guessed the title "iss pyaar ko kya naam doon" for this chapter's defence, it was awfully close..and the last conversation pretty much proves it!! That was a discussion I was wondering about too, glad there are no grand gestures of weddings and 23kids in the horizon yet! Not even the ILUDs that remind us that the story is finally coming to an end. Just the simple "for you" and "hamesha". #Let me love you. Perfect end to a not so simple love story, and for me you did recreate all the magic that was or rather would have been IPK. Thank you J and the biggest 🤗

Lulu
J (& S) phanki 5eva
Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
same here i want to know that what decision they made,... juhi ...i also want to make request that please continue writing ...you can update once a while...like once a month...please
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Posted: 12 years ago
i stalked and got rewarded. it was a beautiful tale of loss, love and trust. it has been a short but a fruitful one. hope some day everyone would be able to rise above prejudices and love will prevail
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update! nice to see them fight for each other :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

Da Shattered OS-
Do dil consummashun ka rahen hain, magar chupke chupke


Wrning- Dis OS is 4 da 95+ pplz. if Ur nt one amng dem, dnt read it, or read it in ur LOO. 😳


B4 reading ma OS plis dnt 4gt 2 drnk dis.



U vll need dis to reduce da hotness U vll feel aftar readin ma OS. Maine abhi warn kar diya, keep drnkin ur nariyal pani. If U blshz in frnt of otha pplz, dnt hit me wid ur chotte danda. (Gutter mindz 😆)


Arnowji in da cotton sari attyre 😉

Koosie in da politishian attyre
😉😉

Oops galti se mishtake ho gaya, (S)Exchange da attyre plis.

Arnowji and Koosie r sitting in his plotishian office room. Arnowji is wryting notes, Kossie is dictating note vile luking at da laptop. Phir se galti ho gaya 😭. (S)Eechange da work plis.

'Nd dat is awl Kossie yaara. UR dictashun in nw over.'

'TFS Arnowji.'

'Koosie cn U plis read my dictashun.' Arnowji asked with his husky eyesight dat made Koosie blush 2 da core of her ovaries. 😳

'Sure Arnowji. Koosie said as her cheeks blushed red lk da sarojini markets tamatars.

'Res.' 😕

'What is dis Kossie. Ver is my dictashun?'😡

Arnowji was nw angry which md Kossie feel hawt undar her neck. (Plis Arnowji nd Koosie r da IF couple ya? no acshun under da neck ok?)

'Arnowji a Res is lk an itch U cn scratch. So upd(s)ex karna hai to karo.' Koosie replied luking directly into da loin's eyes. 😉

Arnowji looked at Koosie unda da neck seducshunly.

'Cum heer U...' 🤗

He said pashunately.

'Koosie dak dak increased as she had eaten rajma chawal last n8t.'

'Kossie walked 2wards her arnowji.'

'Aur paas yaara.' He said.

Koosie was in da haze of pashun. Awl she wnted 2 do was 2 make luv 2 her Arnowji.

'Aur pass Koosie, dammit!' He screamed, which md Koosie CUM to him. (Dnt tink gutter thots) 😲

Koosie den sat on Arnowji's lap mking Arnowji scream 'koosie meri jalebi banogi.' ❤️

'Koosie got 2 (S)excited nd threw her head bk nd den straddled him.😲

'Arnowji starts screaming, oohh... aaah... dats 2 gud yaara.'

'Koosie feels encouraged nd she repeats da moshun.

'Oh No koosie.'

'I kn Arnowji, U wnt more, I vll give U more.' She increased da speed of her moshuns.

'Dammit Khushi, turn arnd nd see what U did?'

Koosie turned arnd 2 see Arnowji's laptop on da grnd.

Nd den Shattering dun.

'What vll I do den Arnowji?'

'Kossie dammit I was reading da consummation dialect of (S)Expel's FAK Fiction.'

'Is that so?' Kossie asked wid da twinkling green lk spinach eyes.

She den stars straddling him agn.

Arnowji looses himself in her moshun agn.

'Dis is 2 gud Kossi yaara. Aur Tez.' He whispers.

Koosie moved bk nd forth, bk nd forth while she rubbed herself. (Her chameli ka tel gutter pplz )

Koosie not long nw. Arnowji screams.

Koosie den wnt close to his face and flicked his nose.

Dat simeple act md Arnowji Cum close to Kossie nd scream 'Koosie UR da luv of ma lyfe.'

And den earth SHATTERNG consummashun dun. 👏

A/N-

Ufff... I need my tanda tands nariyal pani nw. how did U lk ma Shattering FF. Better dan (S)Expel's story, ya?👍🏼





CONGRATS!


🤣🤣🤣

Kadka OS in Pink font, a fitting salute to (s)Expell!! 😉

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