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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Guys ,
I know most of u dont know me and those who did must have forgotten me so i thought before i am completely erased i will make a comeback 😉..
I had written this OS for 500 epi thread but somehow couldn't post it then so am posting it now
The idea was given by Shehjar aunty (hope i have done justice to ur brilliant idea aunty )
this Os is especially dedicated to senior gang (Uma aunty ,DeebZ aunty ,Bharti aunty ,Shehjar aunty ,fatima aunty,Rama aunty,Hiral aunty )sorry if i missed someone
english translations in green( specially for Sindu)😊
Hope u guys like it 😃..
Luv
SU

Sandhya has cleared all the exam The UPSE, prelims the finals and she finally cleared her interview. She needs to report for her training in a weeks time at Sardar Vallabhbhai Patel National Police Academy Hyderabad .
Bhabasa ,Chotu and Chaturi are elated
Bhabo has finally accepted the whole IPS thing still with doubts and heavy heart
Vikram and Emily are happy too .
Mohit ,Meena and Chhavi let's not talk about them and spoil our fun .


Suraj is over the moon .He is very happy to see his wish finally fulfilled .
He is making that special Kesar barfi that Sandy's dad used to get for her ..
He finishes his work and closes the shop for the night.
In the GG room Suraj enters when sandy is removing her jewelry in front of the mirror
He looks at her and is mesmerized by her beauty.
sandhya turns around and sees him and says "Arey Surajji aap kab aayain "
(surajji when did u come )

Suraj comes out of his dream world and says" Sandhyaji main woh bas abhi abhi aaya
woh kya hain ki Main aaj bahut khush hoon deekhiya main aap kay liya kya laya hoon"
(sandhyaji i am very happy today see what i got for u )

He feeds Sandy the Barfi she is happy that he remembered and feeds him back and with a naughty smile says "Surajji yeh barfi say kuch nahi hoga mujay kuch aur tofa chahiya"
surajji this burfi is not enough u have to give some other gift as well)

"haan haan Sandhiyaji bataiya na kya chahiya aapko"
(
"yes Sandhyaji tell me what do u want )

"Surajji woh mujay"
(surajji i umm)

"haan haan sandhyaji boliya na"
(yes Sandhyaji tell me)

surajji woh mujay wahi tofa chachiya jo aapnay apnay singapore wali pratiyogita jeetnay ka baad muj say manga tha"
(surajji I want the same gift that u wanted after winning the Singapore competition )

Suraj gets shocked and says kyaaa"
(whaaat)

Sandy feels shy blushes and looks down
Suraj moves her hair from her face and tips her face up and looks at her lovingly and says"Sandhiyaji main aapsay bahut pyar karta hoon par main nahi chahata ki iss wajah say aap kay upar koi dabav ho "
(Sandhyaji i love u a lot but i dont want u to be under any kind of pressure )

Sandy keeps her finger on his lips and says"Shhhshh Surajji aapki wajah say to main hoon mera sapna pura ho raha hain aur main aap say bahut pyar karti hoon sirf isliya nahi kyonki aap meray pati hain lekin isliyain kyonki aap ek achay insaan hain , kyonki aap hamesha meray saath har mushkil main khaday rahain .aapnay meray sapnay ko apna banaya aur aap nay badlay main kabi kuch nahi manga bas deetay gayain bina kuch kahain "
(Surajji today i am here coz of u my dream is becoming a reality coz of u ..i love u a lot not coz ur my husband and i have to but coz ur a good person u have always stood by me through thick and thin and always supported me and u never ask for anything in return ).

Sandy gets emmotional and hugs suraj tightly ..
Suraj hugs her back strokes her hair and kisses the top of her head

Sandy looks at him through her teary eyes and says"Surajji main duniya ki sabsay khushnaseeb patni hoon kyonki mujay aap jaisa pati mila hain thankyou surajji meri zindagi main aanay kay liya"
( Surajji I am the luckiest wife in the world coz i have u as my husband .Thank you Surajji for being in my life )

Suraj looks at her lovingly and says"thank-you aapko bhi Sandhyaji meray jeevan main aanay kay liyain"
(Thankyou to u too for comming in my life )

They hug again and Suraj says"Sandhyaji wo I ..."
before he could finish Sandy looks up tiptoes a little and kisses his Cheek .Suraj is pleasantly shocked by the boldness of his wife .

Sandy suddenly feels shy and turns to run away but Suraj holds her hand and pulls her back "Sandhyaji yeh to mera tofa hain apna tofa nahi chahiya aapko"
(Sandhyaji this was my gift
dont u want yours)

He pulls her in his arms holding her ever so gently looking into her lovely eyes he moves her hair from her face trails his finger on her face gently cups her face and slowly brings his lips down on hers.

He had intended it to be a soft gentle kiss but the pent up passion in both of them exploded and it turned out to be a very deep passionate kiss.
It was as if they had been waiting their whole lives to taste this, to touch this, to have this .

Both were breathless after the kiss and Sandy held on to Suraj coz she was feeling dizzy Suraj regaining his composure asked her one last time "Sandhiyaji are u sure"
She nodded and hugged him tightly pressing her lips to the side of his throat .It was like sliding into a dream ,one she hadn't know but somehow she had pooled inside her.It was like being granted a wish she hadn't known slept in her heart .

That was all Suraj could handle he slowly lifted her in his arms and carried her to the bed .
he made her sit on the bed and sat besides her lifted her hand and pressed his lips to the center of her palm .Her hands were elegant with silky texture they might have belonged to a princess in the castle but he knew there was too much of strength in them for a princess His wife was different and he loved her with all his heart and soul and so did she

The bedroom windows were open and the cool breeze danced through the curtains and brought with it all the damp and mysterious scents of the night .The moon shimmered through throwing in a silver glow..It was a magical night they felt golden rich with sensation ,each one somehow separate and shining even as they merged together savoring the magic and their innocence reaching for intimacy.
this truly was magic of love ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! Lovely OS. Emotions are brought out beautifully. Thank you for dedicating this to us. I hope something as magical will happen one day on dabh.

Nice idea partner!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aha! Romanchik O.S..☺️.
What a way to begin my sunday morning!!
Now I'm totally in romanchikland of "hara hara"! ☺️
Tu hi hain mujh ko chahu mein kya, Apane dil ko bataa de...!

Brilliant dedication to my lubly hopeless romanchik senior gang.🥳.

@Shehjar Mama:- You always shine from the backdoor by giving such a wonderful ideas.. Woohoo!😳!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS...Wow Wow Wow ...aaj yeh forum main ho kya raha hain...😉 Senior gang ko itna khush kyon kiya ja raha hain...Two super romantic poems now this super romantic story...Excellent Beta. I am reminded of the days when I used to read Mills and Boons. Waiting for this scene to be enacted in DABH han with some 🤬.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Su this is truly magical so like SURYA
What a way to comeback and lovely treat for senior gang .This is the most romanchik OS ever in SURYA
And I dont deserve the credit it is ur brilliance that makes my idea look great [
Hope to see something like this in the show cvs the script is ready jagoo8->]
DeebZ and Ami all hardwork is done by Su it is her goodnesd to give me the credit 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, beautiful OS☺️. Loved it🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh wow! An OS on SurYa and I'm one of the people it is dedicated to......thank you.
What is going on inthe DABH forum this weekened?
Everyone has romance on their minds .
As for the OS...I have to second UMDU Ji...Wow! Wow!! Wow!!!
I can imagine this to be the actual scene of SurYa's long awaited and magical union.
I can also imagine Bryan Adams' song "Have you ever really loved a woman" playing in the background.
Fabulous job...thanks for this lovely weekend treat...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deebz

Wow! Lovely OS. Emotions are brought out beautifully. Thank you for dedicating this to us. I hope something as magical will happen one day on dabh.


Nice idea partner!


Thankyou DeebZ aunty and ur welcome it is my pleasure to bring a smile on your face
Frankly I love ur posts and i am a huge fan of ur writing always to the point and from the heart ⭐️
Edited by sulakshanadabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sulakshanadabh


Thankyou DeebZ aunty and ur welcome it is my pleasure to bring a smile on your face
Frankly I love ur posts and i am a huge fan of ur writing always to the point and from the heart ⭐️


Thank you dear. It is so nice to be in the company of all of you, talented youngistan! Keep writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS Sulakshana. Nice comeback. Thanks for dedicating it to us.

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