MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 14

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waiting for the update nimi
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PART 19


PAST

In khurana house

It ws late night something around 11'o clock. Bell rings.
Maan was working in his laptop he saw no 1 opening the door so he approached the door.
He opened the door.there was no one over there he just looked at a distance but couldn't find any1 present.he was abut 2 close the door when he heard a baby cry.
Maan looks down & findz a baby kept in a basket tucked with cover over it.
Maan looks at the baby he immediately takes the baby in his arms.
He calls watchmen.
Maan:watchmen...watchmen. ...
Watchmen:sabji aapne bulaya...
Maan:yaha koan aaya tha...
Watchmen:no 1 sabji...
Maan:tua ye bacha yaha kahase aya...
Watchmen:nahi sabji mey sach bol raha hu koi nahi aaya yaha par...
Maan:tum kaha thay 5min pheley...
Watchmen:sahabji wo mey washroom gaya tha...
Maan:tua gate pey koan tha...
Watchmen:sahabji wo aaj raju nahi aaya tua gate pey koi nahi tha...
Maan:aacha tum jao...
Maan close the door & took baby & the basket inside.he made baby comfortable in his arms & slowly swing baby...
He checked the basket he found a letter inside it he immediately open the letter.

Letter:

Dear maan,
Maan I no u must be having lot of questions that whoz the baby.why it is with u & many more...
Maan this is ur baby...our baby...bas himaat nahi hui tumare samne aaney ki tua soacha ki letter dey du...
Maan I no I did many mistakes bt this is the most loving mistake I did ever.maan she is just of 21 days plze uska dyaan rakhna..I hv named her muskan...she is ur muskan...ur mishtys muskan our muskan...
Maan I don't hv gutz to come & face u...I really hope u r happy with natasha take care of my baby maan..
Pata nahi aab kab mil paugi mey usey but I want 2 give ur happiness 2 u tua I blindly trust u & hv given u the most lovely thing whch I took care off 4 eight months..
Meri muskan ka khayal rakhna maan...plze...don't let her feek less keep her happy. ..I no u will...last but nt least I still love u bas kabhi himaat nahi hogi aab aapne pati ko aapnaKhaney mey...

Ur only urz...geet



Present:

Maan made his way towards bed.he settled on the bed.he took geets pic kissed it & cover himself in quilt & try 2 sleep. But sleep was far away 4m his eyes.

In london

Nanu:mom r u ready...
Geet:yes manav wait will come in few mins.
Manav:ok...u r always late anywayz...
Geet:I heard that...
Manav:I said it so dat u can hear it...
Geet:ohk...coming...

Geet & maan made there way towards there car.manav sat in front while geet sat behind.
They drove towards snow park.they reached the place & b4 geet could get down manav hurriedly got down & pulled geet with him...
Manav:mom plze do fast we won't be able 2 enjoy plze walk fast...
Geet:manav wait mom can't run baby...plze w8...
Manav:no come fast...
Geet saw his excitement & just smiles.they had a gala time over there they enjoyed all the rides...even saw penguins
Geet didn't go 4 all the rides as she was a bite scare of height & speed.
But didn't stop manav as he was never scare of anything.
They enjoyed over there & decided to have lunch in the snow restaurant.
They were sitting on the snow slab whch had a table of snow.glass of snow even vase & flower made 4m snow..
Manav really got excited with all dis..
Manav:mom...see the water in the glass hasn't turned snow...it's so cold out here...
Manav:mom can we hv a snow ice candy plze...
Geet:no Manav u will catch with cold & they someone will do aachi aachi whole night...
Manav:no I will take medi b4 sleep...plze..
Geet:no manav...plze next time paka..
Manav:hmmm...
Manavs attention goes on the opposite table were a son & his father were sitting. The father had got a ice candy 4 son & den he was enjoying it & his father kissed him on his forehead.
Manav was busy looking at dem somewhere he felt he would also be with his father.
Geet looked where Manav was looking & felt bad.she asked the waiter 2 get a ice candy.
She gave that 2 Manav. ..manav got happy. .
Manav: mom u called dad...
Geet got blank 4 a moment.
Geet:amm...ya bt Manav he couldn't speak 2 u as u were sleeping.
Manav:another...issue...mom do u remember I m going 2 complete 3yr next month...hope u make it special & I want dad dat time...if nt I won't talk 2 u...
Geet:ohk nanu now hv ur lunch...
They have there lunch & leave the park as it was going 2 be evening soon.
They came home...manav changed & took his dads pic in his hand & sits on the bed...
Geet comes up turning her hair in a ban & entered manav's room.
Geet sense Manav is missing his dad a lot now a days as he is able 2 understand it well nw as he is growing very fast.
Geet:kya hua nanu...missing papa...
Manav:hmmm...
Geet:dis is ur 1yr photo u were just started 2 stand with help of tea table. ...
See papa was catching u at a distance so that if u lost balance tua he can catch u fast...
Manav:really. ..
Geet:yes baby...dad use 2 take care of u more den me...he really loves Manav a lot..
Manav hugs geet & even geet hugs him tight. ...a drop of tear escape from geets eye.
She wipes it & smiles.
She made manav sleep properly & cover hi. With quilt & switch of AC & on fan so that it doesn't affect manav's sleep.
She kissed him on his forehead & close the door.

Precap:more abut past.Edited by nimi216 - 10 years ago
Gurti_Maaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome update dear
thanx for pm :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
loved it
like is nt working
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u so much..will try 2 update dis 2day...bt nt sure
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
thanks for pm
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kya hogaya ki geet maan ko chhod k chale gaye...

 beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
manav n muskan are twins
geet left muskan to maan..
but y they r living seperately
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Originally posted by: valli22

manav n muskan are twins

geet left muskan to maan..
but y they r living seperately


Di I was eagerly waiting 4 ur comments. ...anywyz I hv a prob plze do text me wen u r free...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part 
maanav nd muskaan dono twins hai..aur geet ne muskaan ko maan ko de diya...par usne aisa kyu kiya???maanav apne dad ko bahut miss kar rha hai..waiting for the past to be revealed soon
thanks for the pm
update soon