Kabira maan jaa...[Kriyansh+Taani SS]

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is specially for my pagal behen aditi,happy belated b'thday sis.

Kabira maan jaa...

a.encounter of the past and present

10:30 pm Juhu Beach,Mumbai

Rey's attempt to manofy failed completely and Taani would be leaving Mumbai tomorrow.Today was her last day in Mumbai. the gang had kept farewell for her,everyone was upset especially Rey.After bidding her last goodbye everyone left for their home.Taani was feeling nostalgic ,she remembered each and every moment she had spent in Mumbai .she felt she had go somewhere lonelier to compose herself for tomorrow .she asked Swayum to leave her in the nearby beach, swayum was astonished but later agreed to fulfil her wish.he left her juhu beach and made her promise to call him when she wanted to return rather returning by herself.as Swayum left her,she was lost in her own world.she recollected each moment spent over here in 'City of Dreams',her dream was to be with her 'prince charming' Rey.she was brought out of her memory chain when a pair of hand pulled her back.she looked towards person by who she was pulled back,and she saw a girl who sighed relief,then the realization drawn upon her,the girl just saved her life by pulling her back from hitting a truck.she observed her savior,the girl was wearing a red salwar with golden border,her long wavy hair was left open and was playing in the air which made her look gorgeous.the girl was looking fresh like a star and her pair beautiful pair of eyes filled with innocence had another story to be told,she somewhere felt that she had seen her somewhere but yet could not recollect where?.taani had agree that this girl was one of the beautiful creations of god.as she was thinking,the voice of the girl brought her back.

listen to this song-https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHNNMj5bNQw

"aap thik toh hain na" asked the girl concened.

Taani then thanked her for her for saving her life.the girl smiled at her understandingly.

"Boyfriend problem?" asked the girl as they moved towards the beach.

"aap ko kaise pata?" asked taani surprisingly.

She gave a knowning smile to taani.

"agar apko koi problem nahi hain toh,app apni problem mere saath share kar sakthi ho,problem share karne se kam hota hain"said the girl as they were sitting on sand and watching the waves.

Taani felt an inner connection with her savior ,so without much hesitation she told the girl about her life and about her love.

The girl listen to her carefully and after taani completed her story.

"dekho main aapko nahi jaanti, par apko meinek baat batungi,pyar dimaag se nahi dil se ki jaati hain,aur pyyar who ehass hain jo mita nahi paungi,tumhare dil humesha yeh pyar rehga.aur sacha pyar humesha nahi mil tha toh tum use bago mat kya pata jab tumhe apni pyar pass ane hain toh kismet ne tumhe apni saath hi nahi diya toh,mein yeh sab isliye keh rahi hu ki kismet ne kabhi meri pyaar mein saath nahi diya,aur pya se dor reh na dukh mein achi tarah se janti hu"said the girl letting tears flow down from her eyes.

Taani understood her mistake but yet she does not wont to stayback in mumbai .she was concerned and curious about the girl.

"kya aap mujhse apni problem share karna chahungi"asked taani.

The girl give a weak smile to tani and stared her story.

"mein unse meri hometown ki ek new year party mein mili thi,humari pehli mulakat ek jagad se huyi and jagade se wajah se humhe police station bhi jana pada" the girl smiled remembering those precious moment of her love story.

"police station"asked taani a bit surprised.

"haan"girl said with a smile understanding taani's astonishment.she continued"phir mein Mumbai aayi,aur phir se kismat ne humne mila di,mein wahi college join ki thi jaha woh padtha tha,phir hum dono ke beech bohut jagde ,misunderstanding,aur dosti huyi,phir humein pyaar hua.phir jaise hum ek dusare ke bohut karib aa gaye,kismet ne humara saath chod diya.humein alag hona pada,mein nahi chahthi ki who mere waja se apni life barbad kare,isliye unki saath bohut badi breakup ki drama kyunki who apni life mein move on kare".the girl let out all her pain through tears made their way from their eyes.

Even Taani was taken back and feeling sad for the girl.

"dekheye isliye keh rahi hu ki aap job bhi faisala karege,who soch samajah ke lene,warna aap apni pyar ko humesha ke liye ko dungi meri tarah" said the girl.

Taani just noded as she was in deep thoughts.

"tum Mumbai wapas apni pyaar ko milne aayi hu?"asked taani

"nahi,I am getting married,ladka Sidhant Modi-the one of the successful business man of the generation,meri mom ki friend ki beta hain.aaj humari engagement thi."she said without any emotions

"kya ,tum pyaar ko chod koi aur ko accept kar paungi,tum use shadi karne se manna nahi kar sakti"asked tani concernly

"meri mom ki decision,job hi who karege meri ache ke liye karege"she said assuring herself than taani.

"tum apni zindgi ek ajnebi ke saath reh ke barbad kar lungi"said taani

"jab apne hi ajnabi ho jati hain toh kya kare"said the girl

Taani did not understood what she said.

"tum khush ho iss shaadi se" asked taani

"meri khush ho ne se ya na se kya farak padtha hain,ab toh sab kuch ter ho gaya na"said the girl coldly.

"par tumne apni pyaar ko chod diya tha"asked taani curiously

"mujhe apni dosti aur pyaar mein ek ko chun na tha,toh mein ne apni dosti ko choose kiya"said the girl

"tum sach mein ek angel ho,jo humesha dusaro ko bare mein soch tha hain,agar tum nahi hoti toh mein abhi zinda nahi hoti"said tani greatfully.

The girl give her beautiful smile in return to tani compliment

"anyway ab mujhe chal na chahiye bohut raat ho gayi hain,par jaan se pehle se phir se kehuga sacha pyar kabhi mita nahi paungi, ,the decision is in your hand, all the best for your future life" said the girl getting up.

Taani give a smile to her, and said"aap se milke aur baat kar ke acha laga,aur tum bhi apni life ki decision ache se lena".

Taani saw the girl's figure disappearing into the darkness as she went away.

Taani p.o.v

I am sorry rey, but mujhe apko chod ke jana na padegi.ab mujhe apni khudki identity bana hain,par aap humesh meri dil mein rehungi.

Girl's p.o.v

I am sorry rey,mein ne aap ko bohut dukh di hain,mein phir se aap ki zindgi mein ake apko pareshan nahi karungi,par aap humesha mere dil mein rehenge.

yes the girl was none other tahn Kria Ghai.

Kria's salwar


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Two girls who fell for the same boy met by destiny without knowing each other's real identity .they are going to make biggest decision of their life, but destiny has some other plans stored for them.

note-this has 2 or more parts,next part will be updated according to the response.Taani will an important role in uniting kriyansh but os is not on taarey

p.s -special thanks to aishu for keep remainding of my promise to write this os,i hope you are happy

b. past unfolds-pg-

with love

pia

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-Pia- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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B'thday girl's review😊

Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi

And you're telling me about this now? :O


Hold hold. Me have a test. Kal padhing and reviewing. :*

Love you baby! 🤗


-Unres-

Okay, so firstly thank youuu soo sooo much for this Pia. I love you for this gift sissy! :*
I fell so happy when you scrapped me with the link. :D
At least someone over here remembered that it is my birthday! <3 :*

Coming to the OS.
Although sab kuch past ka tha. Still it had a very peaceful impact.
You know when I read it I was soo tensed for I had a paper next day. But when I finished reading it, I was so relaxed. :D
This was a very brilliant part. :)
I loved the way you portrayed their feelings.

Please jaldi se you come up with the next part and post it soon.
I do not want to finish this thread by spamming as well. 😛

And yeah, don't forget to scrap me this time as well. :P As you know I don't check PM's. :P ;)

I actually loved it. :D
Update soon.
Take care.
And thanks again for the OS. :*
Love you lottsss! <3 :*


- Your Behena, Aditi.
Xoxo

Edited by -Pia- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres abhi karing...

awesome start mommy...

loved it

i was sure ki the other girl was kriya..

aap next two parts kab update karoge?? jaldi karns plzz...

Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazng part dear . .
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gre8 job . . .
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luvd taani and kriya's part . .
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watng fr the nxt part. . 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..nice work dear..
taani uniting kriyaansh;;;liked that idea a lot...
thank god u made taani a positive chrctr...
taani-kriya part was awesome..
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os pia
will be waiting to se hw taani unite kriyaansh
updt dis sn n T amo too waiting fr it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IT was an amazing OS
simple and sweet
one of my fav songs...
love kriyaansh...
update this OS soon.
and do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept ...
beautiful start
plzz update soon
and pm me even :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply amazing..
Tani n Kriya spoke there heart out widout knowing dat they r talking about d same guy.. Tht they did hurt d same guy !
Kriya is getting married.. Smriti still dint realuse d damage she has done !
Lookin forward to d next part.. Update soon :) n pm me plz !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Start...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊

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