FF Jai jr updated pt14 pg19 14jan NB pg1 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Neetusxm

hi holy belan...i hope u dont mind i call u that..its 2 cute... 😉
well i love this ff..i just read the entire thing in one go...boy wat intense ff...
the twists and turns in this ff keep me at the edge of my seat..
roshni meeting bani
jj calling roshni chachi...
like rahul dating jigz
jj accident
bani all of a sudden in chicago..
well now all i hope is that jai finds bani in chicago..oh that wud just be a treat...

update soon...

neetu

keeper of the holy belan sharan XXX

PS wow neetu thanks for reading i was thinking of ending this soon but you guyz make me wanna continue!!!!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: shaz81

*HOLY BELAN* thanks you for your praise!!!!😳

keeper of the holy belan sharan XXX

PS wow neetu thanks for reading i was thinking of ending this soon but you guyz make me wanna continue!!!!!!!🤗

finishing...no way yaar...im all set to read lots and lots of updates...

although i feel like threatening u...im afraid of belan...😆 😆

so im requesting u instead...dont end this ff so soon...

i love this story...

i hope u will not disappoint ur ff readers.😭.may be blackmail might work😆

neetu

hey sharan, firstly, i hope all your aches and pains are vamoooosh by now.

sorry for taking so long, but i finally finished reading all the parts you have posted till now and what can i say ......... awesome, different, unique and you give ekta mai a bad name too what with all the twists and turns, to think i used to call myself the "expect the unexpected girl" am more than happy to hand over that crown to u today.

i love everything about it, the way it flows, all the characters, their relations, the way u keep the reader guessing ......... thanks dear for suggesting i read this, otherwise i would have really missed out on a good piece of work out here. 👏👏👏

update sooooooooon, and i really mean it.

this is for you a well done, proud of u jhappi .....

Originally posted by: RaviMalhotra69

I've finally finished todays task of reading the story from the start to the current episode! 😃 i hope my index was helpful mango!!!!

Well, what can I say Sharan... for starters, well done! 👏 AW 😳 Thanks mango, thats really sweet of you to say!!!!😳

I liked the mischievous nature of Jai Jr very much! The idea of mixing tanning lotion in Mrs Shukla's face cream was a great! 😆 i posted it in other thread but i will repeat it , that trick was told to me by a friend who actually did it to his PE teacher😆, i was wetting my self when he told me, so i decided to included it!!!!!!

Also the introduction of Roshni "Hair flicker" Chopra was a good one! I really hated that character in KS! Seeing as we have Roshni and we also have a hospital, how about creating a situation where they both come together... 😃 I was thinking that maybe a bloodthirsty person wielding a *BELAN* could be introduced to make that scenario happen... 😈 😆 you requested mango,i will see what i can do😉!!!!!! 😆😆😆 Blood thristy belan weilding person i wonder who that could be???????

And of course, there was masterful Henna's introduction into the story! I laughed when I first read that Henna was a nurse! And hey, koi ne mujhe battaiya bhi nahin ke Henna ki shaadi hone waali hai... Aur woh bhi ek paise waala shaikh ke saath! 😆 If you read the entire post i promised her i would get her married in my FF even if it killed me😆😆😆!!!!!!!

I'm off to go and grabs some ladoos in celebration! 😆 WOW keep some for me too!!

Anyways, great stuff Sharan! I've thoroughly enjoyed it!Make sure that you keep updating whenever you can! Even though Ranvir isn't a part of the story, this FF gets the Offical Mango stamp of approval! 👍🏼 As per your earlier request i'm thinking about it, look out for my next post it will have a few surprise's, what surpiries i haven't decided yet 😆😆😆!!! , and i'm so HAPPY😃 to recieve Mangos official stamp of approval, phew the hard work was worth it!!!!

Sharan Keeper of the holy belna XXXXX

God bless.

Originally posted by: sabsj

hey sharan, firstly, i hope all your aches and pains are vamoooosh by now.Thanks to your japi's 😳!!!!!!!!😆

sorry for taking so long, but i finally finished reading all the parts you have posted till now and what can i say ......... awesome, different, unique and you give ekta mai a bad name too what with all the twists and turns, to think i used to call myself the "expect the unexpected girl" am more than happy to hand over that crown to u today.WOW sabsj's i'm so extremly flattered, such high praise, i feel like i don't deserve it, i'm choked seriously thats so nice of you to say😳!!!!!!

i love everything about it, the way it flows, all the characters, their relations, the way u keep the reader guessing ......... thanks dear for suggesting i read this, otherwise i would have really missed out on a good piece of work out here. 👏👏👏No body read it any way so no big deal i only had this itch to start a FF one day and ever since my first post i have just kept on updating, this FF writting is the closest thing to being PAAGAL😆 i swear i wake up middle of the night to write a paragraph sometimes, i have lost so much sleep over this!!!!!!!!!😕😆

update sooooooooon, and i really mean it. i dont know i might make you sweat first 😆!! 😕 only kidding i will update this on the weekend i promise😳

this is for you a well done, proud of u jhappi ..... 😳 😳😳 BIG THANKS!!!!!!!

Sharan XXX

Hey sharan,

sorry for the late reply

But wonderful update, i was too busy oogling over my jaan 😉

Heena is lucky, she is all set for her marriage.

but one question, WHERE IS MY BABY???? don't test my patience too much, warna i'll explode, and bani is in chicago so she might get run over by a car if my baby doesn't make an appearance soon.

Shina