YaHi SS: Friendhip At Stake(Final Part on Pg 13) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: D3_4life

Juhi's part was well narrated...
Waiting 4 next...


Glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: safi_kisha


Juhi ...sry yaar i had exams etc so couldn't comment before! Its okay dear😊
No worries here i am...
Damn awesome it is...
Thank u😊
U r jzz fab i must say...
Luved KDs worries abt kiya ...
He is very caring😃
YaHi were flawless must say...sooo cutee...
I love them😃
Continue soon...i am waiting!
Luv
Safrena

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, dis is d final part of dis YaHi SS. I finally updated dis SS. Its also my 21st birthday 2day n my 1st birthday in TBP forum😊. Sorry for updating dis SS after more than 3 1/2 months. As u see, my previous update of 5th part was on 13th march a day before Season 1 of TBP ended so I was feeling weak to update dis SS further n kept on delaying d date. As u all know dat cvs visits IF n most probably read our posts n works. And sumtyms, they show a little bit of wat v hv written n dat v hv discovered many times. I felt a little responsible for Ruby's crap n MMS incident in d show as I mentioned some similar things in dis SS dat led to breaking of YaHi's friendship due to a video shown to Kiya by Ruby. I might sound stupid but I felt dat writing dis SS was my mistake. I also used to think dat if I had not written dis SS then d show wud not hv got dat much worse 2wards d end Season 1. May be I am unneccesarily blaming myself n acting stupid. But I hv noticed dat sometimes some part of d contents in our posts n works r shown on d show as if they r taking our ideas. But anyways, I decided to end dis SS as there is nothing much left in it. Thanks to everyone those who loved dis SS. After dis, I am planning to start a KiSha SS/FF. It vl be d 1st time, my work vl be titled by KiSha's though I hv majorly shown KiSha in most of my works. Dis vl also be d 1st wen I vl write sumth out of TBP which I never did before. Sorry, if u got offended by wateva I said😊.


Part 6(Final Part)

At night, Juhi is resting on her bed. She recalls how she tried to help Kiya during TFP using Aanya's name n Kiya getn irritated by dat. She then recalls Kiya teln her abt Aanya being mean n insensitive. She also recalls how Kiya attempted suicide sometimes. She then thinks abt her n Juhi's hug after becumn friends again. She smiles thinking dat.

"Ab Kiya aur mere beech koi bhi problems nahi hai," said Juhi to d camera.

Next day, Juhi gossips wid some girls on random topics.

"Tune Aanya Gujral ka gaana suna?" asks 1 of d girls to Juhi bringing Aanya's topic.

Juhi moves 4m there going back to her place. RV goes to her bench.

"Tuje Kiya ne jarur apna secrets bataaya hai na?" asks RV.

"Haan," replied Juhi, "Maine kabhi imagine bhi nahi kiya tha ki muje Kiya k baare me ye sab sunna padega. Uski mom aur sister to bahot hi insensitive hai."

Kiya enters d class n hugs Juhi tightly. Juhi also hugs her tightly.

"Yaar, tum dono firse shuru ho gaye," said RV jokingly seeing both continuously hugging each other thinking them liking each other in dat way.

"Shut up, Ranveer. Hum dono ko disturb mat kar," said Juhi.

"Humne 2 din se ye nahi kiya hai class me," said Kiya.

RV got embarrassed. Ruby n her curly-haired friend(name assumed as Leena) enters d class. They r shocked to see YaHi hugging each other.

"Kiya, tu Juhi ko hug q kar rahi hai?" asks Ruby.

"To kya tuje hug karu?" asks Kiya still hugging Juhi.

"Lekin Kiya'," Ruby was abt to ask sumthn but was stopped by Juhi.

"Tuje dikhaayi nahi de raha hai kya ki hum dono kitna busy hai?" asks Juhi, "Tu aur teri chamchi yaha se kalti le aur hume disturb mat kar. Bimbos kahin ke.

Ruby gets irritated wid YaHi ignoring them. She turns to RV.

"Ranveer, in dono ka patch-up kaise hua hai?" asks Ruby.

"Dats none of ur business, Ruby. Tumhe kisiki friendship todte huve sharam nahi aayi. Tumhaare vajah se Kiya aur Juhi bahot hurt huve hai. Behtar yahi hoga agar tum apna dimaag sahi cheezon me use karo na ki cheap cheezon me," scolded RV.

Ruby n Leena goes 4m there annoyingly. Panchi enters d class n sees YaHi hugging.

"Ranveer, dono aise kitne ache lag rahe hai na?" asked Panchi wid a smile.

"Haan, kuch jyaada hi acchhe lag rahe hai tabhi to ye dono 5 min se continuously hug kar rahe hai," replied RV.

RV realized dat Panchi talked wid him normally n also smiled while talking wid him. YaHi broke d hug n saw Panchi.

"Panchi, tu kab aayi?" asked Juhi.

"Jab tum dono bahot busy the," replied RV wid a sarcastic smile.

YaHi luks @ each other n goes outside d classroom leaving RaHi 2gthr to talk.

In d library, PraSha r sitting on a table.

"KD bhai, aapka aur Kiya ka patch-up ho hi gaya hai to aap use apni feelings k baare me bata q nahi dete hai?" asks Piddhi.

KD remembers d slap of Kiya during APC n touches his cheek.

"Main use sahi waqt aane par bata dunga qki agar maine abhi bataaya to vo muje thappad maaregi," replied KD.

Piddhi remembers Bobby's slap on various occasions n laughs @ wat KD said. Kiya comes there n is puzzled to see Piddhi laughing.

"Piddhi, tu itna has q raha hai?" asks Kiya.

Piddhi does not know wat to say.

"Vo kya hai na Kiya, aaj bhi kuch logon ne Piddhi ko chidhaaya ki vo bahot patla ho gaya hai aur vahi baat Piddhi muje bata raha tha," replied KD giving an excuse.

Kiya laughs heartily @ dat. She goes to d canteen. She sits wid Juhi.

"Kiya, ab humaara Buddies group unite ho gaya hai. KD aur Ranveer bhi friends ban gaye hai. Un dono ne apni saari dushmani khatam kar di hai," said Juhi.

"Hope Buddies humesha aise hi rahe," said Kiya.

KD comes there.

"Kiya, kya muje tumhaari chemistry ki notes mil sakti hai?" asks KD.

"Yaa sure," replied Kiya giving him her chemistry notes.

"Kiya, KD tujse humesha chemistry notes k liye hi q poochta hai?" teases Juhi.

KiSha gets embarrassed n blushes.

"Qki KD muje chemistry me kabhi hara nahi paaya hai," replies Kiya.

KD goes 4m there. JJ comes to YaHi.

"Kiya n Juhi friends again. Wowww," said JJ happily lukn @ them.

"Main Juhi k baare me kitna galat sochti thi cuz of some of her behavior lekin Juhi vaisi nahi hai jaisa maine socha tha. Juhi to meri RA ki 1st friend hai," said Kiya.

"Its very nice ki tumhaara doubt clear ho gaya hai," said JJ.

"Mere NYP me drunk hone k vajah se to bahot gadbad hua," said Juhi.

"Tum dono abhi ye sab puraani baatein bhool jao aur aage humesha acchhe friends bankar rehna," said JJ wid a smile n YaHi nodding their head.

After school, all d buddies r @ d Buddy Cafe.

"Tera class kaisa chal raha hai?" asks RV.

"Bahot acchha," replies KD.

"Students increase huve kya?" asks Panchi.

"Haan. Kal aur 10 students aa gaye hai," replied KD.

"Dats realy very gr8, KD. Hope kuch aur jyaada students aa jaaye tab tumhaare ghar ka loan bahot hi jaldi chukta ho jaayega," said KD.

"Sab tension us taklu Banga k vajah se start hua," said Piddhi frustratingly.

Bobby drinks water 4m her bottle. While drinking water, some water accidently fell on Kiya's wrist n watch.

"Sorry," said Bobby.

Kiya removed her watch to dry it. Juhi spots a cut mark on Kiya's wrist which was hidden by her watch. She gets suspicious abt d cut mark.

"Kiya, tere wrist par kis cheez ka mark hai?" asks Juhi much to other's amazement.

RV gets a little doubtful while Kiya is shocked wid Juhi's question regarding d mark which Juhi n RV notices.

"Fruits kaatte waqt muje galti se chaaku lag gaya tha," replied Kiya.

RV notices d suspicious look on Juhi's face n shocked look on Kiya's face.

"Kiya, tu apna dhyaan rakha kar. Anyways guys, mere paas tum sabke liye na ek good news hai aur vo good news ye hai ki aaj maine aur Panchi ne patch-up kar liya hai. Hum dono firse buddies ban gaye hai," said RV happily.

Pthers got very happy.

"Janab, ye to bahot acchhi baat hai," said Samar.

"To humaare class se jaane k tum dono ne patch-up kiya na?" asks Kiya.

"Haan," replied RV.

"Maine realize kiya ki Ranveer bahot badal chuka hai isliye maine usse patch-up karne ko decide kar liya," said Panchi wid a smile.

"Tum dono firse kabhi alag mat hona," said Bobby.

In d evening, YaHi r @ Juhi's home for a school project. Juhi thinks abt d cut mark on Kiya' wrist.

"Kiya, tere wrist par kis cheez ka mark hai?" asks Juhi.

"Maine kaha tha na, Juhi ki fruits kaatte waqt muje chaaku lag gaya tha," replied Kiya as she is shocked again.

"Kiya, muje pata hai ki tu jhoot bol rahi hai. Tere expressions se saaf pata chal raha hai. Out wid d truth," said Juhi.

Kiya decided to tell d truth as it was no use of lying.

"Juhi, ye cut mark 3 mahina puraana hai jab maine suicide attempt ki thi. Par maine apne aap ko rok liya khud ko hurt karne se jab maine apne buddies aur apne dad k mere dancer banne k dream k baare me socha," said Kiya.

Juhi was shocked.

"Kiya, dobaara plz aisa kuch karna. Tere sapna dancer banne ka hai?" asked Juhi.

"Haan Juhi, mera sapna singer nahi dancer banne ka hai. Dancing is my passion. Meri mom chahti hai ki main music me apna career banau just cuz I am Aanya's sister. She does not understand my own passion n dream," replied Kiya.

"Kiya, tera dad aur tera dream jarur poora hoga. V all know kit u kitna acchha dance karti hai," said Juhi.

"I wish it happens," said Kiya.

"Main pray karungi ki tere saare ghar k problems khatam ho jaaye, teri mom badal jaaye,tuje understand karne k lage aur tuje humesha support kare," said Juhi.

"I hope aisa hi ho," said Kiya.

"Main aur baaki k buddies humesha tere saath hai. Tu ek din bahot acchhi dancer banegi aur Aanya se bhi jyaada popular hogi," said Juhi wid a smile.

"Juhi, dis is not easy," said Kiya.

"Kiya, u r still much better than Aanya. Aanya popstar to hai par uske paas dil nahi hai. Jo apne hi behen ki itni badi dushman ho vo jyaada time tak successful nahi ho sakti hai. Tu to uski ekdum opposite hai. Tu bahot acchhi insaan hai dil se aur bahot acchhi friend bhi hai jo humesha apne friends ko support karti hai. Aanya k paas koi friends nahi hai aur uske attitude k vajah se na kabhi honge par tere paas to kitne saare friends hai cuz of ur friendly n caring nature," said Juhi wid a smile.

Kiya was getn very happy @ Juhi's words for her.

"Tub hi ek bahot acchhi friend hai," said Kiya wid a smile, "Tu meri us time pe bhi friend banna chahti thi jab mujse sab hate karte the."

Kiya hugged Juhi into a tight hug n Juhi hugged her back.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee ending👏👏

loovvedd ittt😊

and happy b'day🥳

u gonna start a new SS on kisha😳

waiting for t😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Proper Ending to a really good SS
& yeah, belated Happy B'day 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003


awesomeee ending👏👏 Thank u😊


loovvedd ittt😊

and happy b'day🥳 Thank u😊

u gonna start a new SS on kisha😳 Yaa😃

waiting for t😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: D3_4life


Proper Ending to a really good SS Glad u liked it😊
& yeah, belated Happy B'day 😃 Thank u😊😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Juhi this ff is also very interesting😊😊
KISha and YaHi patch up👏
im so loving it the way u write and portray their feelings😉😉😉
thanks for the pm dear😃

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