#$~I Hidden Desire I~$#

BerryBlush07

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ok here it is poem no. 3 😎

Khushi..doesnt know what to do..buaji wants her to marry shyaam..but she is not convinced..

nothing seems to be right ..she feels lonely..her conscience says something else!

Everything seems so huge from here...

I am holding back something, I fear...

All the lights are slowly blowing out...

I don't know what , but I can feel my heart shout..

My desire hidden behind a veil...

There is something for me yet to feel..

There is a cold wind with a weird chill...

I feel it rush as I sit on the sill...

I can't ignore my well-wishers...

Neither can I see things getting easier...

I can't figure out my own plight...

I guess I have to look beyond my sight...

Why do I feel segregated...

Why do I look hesitated...

What is it that I aspire...

The veil hides my concealed desire...

*sighs*

Only a gentle heart-filled promise...

Can break this restless silence...

The End! 😳

i hope u enjoyed it!

P.S: If u want PMs for my further updates then plzz like the post below!..as i dont want to unnecessarily disturb people 😳

Regards,

Berry..😃

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BerryBlush07

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Posted: 12 years ago

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lyk this post for PMs 😳

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Khesnee B

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Posted: 12 years ago

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First page🥳

Ok First of all that pic looks creepy...why is only her hair and clothes moving😲

Now coming back to the poem; needless to say that it was superb as usual!😳

Hmm the poem seems to be so apt for the situation of Khushi! She wana respect her parents by marrying shyam but still that desire she feels for another man is deffo taking a toll on her emotions and confusing her more!

I love this line

First page🥳

Ok First of all that pic looks creepy...why is only her hair and clothes moving😲

Now coming back to the poem; needless to say that it was superb as usual!😳

Hmm the poem seems to be so apt for the situation of Khushi! She wana respect her parents by marrying shyam but still that desire she feels for another man is deffo taking a toll on her emotions and confusing her more!

I love this lineOnly a gentle heart-filled promise...

Can break this restless silence...

So beautifully written Ayeshu😳

And i believe that only a promise of love can save the poor soul from the dilemma!

I'm falling in love with ur poems Ayeshu😳

And yeah i have a request...will let u know through Pm😳

Eagerly waiting for the next one!

*bows to the queen*😉

Edited by kenny_Arhi - 12 years ago

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