hey diva...how r u?? h0pe u r f9...
just got ur pm and thank Lord that i was free so i got a chance to read this SS...
and believe me if the writer is YOU then its got to be PERFECT!!! cuz YOU *points towards u* ARE A MIND BLOWING WRITER!!! :))
so first comes the title of the SS...hmmm...dramebaaz life...that's interesting and if i make a trip in its depth then i can see that its going to be a happy-go-lucky, very soothing and calming story...which one cud read when they are tired... :))
Okie n0w to the character sketch...
hmmm...
So Arnav is as the same...thats good...
wait...but khushi HAS GOT A CRUSH ON HIM...now thats new and thats very blo0dy exciting... :)))
i like it... :))
all in all i like the wh0le c0ncept...
n0w to the st0ry...
soo0 Khushi is j0bless...aww..po0r soul..and plus s0on to be h0meless... lol
well but who kn0ws that before th0se 12 hrs A LOT can happen.. 😉 ☺️ couldn't it???
and awww she has a stalker and that too shyam jha...hawww
n0w thats dejected...
but well who pays attention to SHYAM...when we have ASR... :)
and i like their first encounter...the bumping part was amazing! :))
and awww he helped her...thats cute... :))
i was like this - 😆 - when she screamed...! After all girls are girls... :))
and Arnav found a lady for him...hmmm
but as i read the prolouge i was like c0nfused someh0w...that they are sexually involved but still din love each other...i din read anything like this b4...and that's what catches my attention...as i always say diva that your work is unique...stimulating... :))
and awww the end was gr8...
he kissed her...w0www... :)))
and it would be m0re crispy when khushi would remove 'ji' from Arnav... :) Simple Arnav would s0und gr8... :))
anyways
overall...this was amazing piece!!!
love it to core...!!
:))))
and update s0on...
waiting...
xoxo
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