IPK/EHM FF: Dil De Diya Hai! ❤️ Chp 4 updtd 8/7

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Hey guyzzz, this is my 2nd story! M a silent reader of all ur stories guys n trust me I Love them a lot!!!
So after getting inspired from u ppl m trying to write my story! Please correct me when m wrong and also appreciate if u like it!!!

My story will have characters from shows IPKKND and EHMMBH!!!

Do comment!

Character introduction-

RAIZADA FAMILY-

Nani- head of the family,78.


SWAMINI BUA- second elder in the family, loves her family but fails to show it, does not easily trust everybody, slight negative character, but very close to Arnav, 55.

Anjali Singhania- eldest sibling, loving and caring, 31.


Arjun Singhania- Anjali's husband, unlike shyam, helpful and good at heart, co-owner of RS industries, 33.

Arnav Singh Raizada- 2nd sibling, rude, arrogant but not a spoiled brat, loves his sisters a lot, co-owner of RS industries along with Arjun, 27.

Jeevika Raizada-3rd sibling, just like Anjali but is an Project Presentator in RS industries, 25.

Manvi Raizada- yougest sibling, happy go lucky girl, still completing her degree in Mass Media, 22.

VADHERA FAMILY-

Beeji- head of the family, 76.

Buaji- second elder in the family, loves her nephews and niece a lot, 57.

Viren Vadhera- handsome, caring, protective towards his both siblings, esp. Khushi, criminal lawyer in Chandigarh court, 28.


Khushi Vadhera- MBA of Fine Arts from Harvards University, making her debut in Bollywood as choreographer, 25.

Virat Vadhera- youngest sibling, naughty, handsome, Aspiring singer, has a huge female fan following, 24.


Raizadas have a bad past while Vadhera children have lost their parents in an accident!

Other characters will be introduced as n when time comes!

Guys please tell me if i should continue further or not???



HAPPINESS ALWAYS...

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Ok guyzz, here I go...

It was early morning in Delhi... Everybody at the Raizada Mansion(RM) were in a great hurry... After all today Arnav Singh Raizada was going to launch his chain industry RS Fashion (RSF)! Everyone in RM was extremely happy, especially Anjali as her "Chote" had grown up and was lauching his own industry but she was equally worried too due to his nature!

Anjali(to Arjun)- Suniye, will Chote be able to handle this responsibility? I mean, I am really worried of his short-temper!

Arjun- Don't worry Anjali! He'll prove as the best fashion designer in the country! [Arjun lived with the Raizadas as he didn't have a family, but was a very good businessman]

Anjali-Ji, I hope it would just happen as u say...

[just then Manvi starts calling Anjali & Arjun from downstairs]

Manvi- Di, Jiju if ur morning romance is done, would u both plz come down? Nani is calling u both for pooja in mandir! hahaha!

Arjun- yes Manvi dear, we both r coming!

Anjali- Ye Manvi bhi na! Chaliye!

[they both go down. everybody is present at the mandir except Arnav, he's busy in his room calling someone]

Anjali (to Nani)- Arre Nani, ye Chote kaha reh gaye? Wo nahi aaye?

Nani- Anjali bitiya, humne unhe bulaya to tha par aap to unhe jaanti hai na! Unka is sab par vishwas nahi hai!

Jeevika- Aise kaise Nani? Bhai ko to aana hi padega! I'll call him! Lets see how he refuses me?

Nani- achha bitiya!

[Jeevika goes to Arnav's room, sees him busy on a call. she runs to him and snatches his phone away!]

Arnav- What the!!!!!

Jeevika- Kya "what the" Bhai? everyone's waiting for u in the mandir! Chaliye!

Arnav- U know very well Jeevi, i don't believe in all this!

Jeevika- I know, I know Bhai! But can't u come there once for our happiness?! [makes a puppy face]

Arnav- ohkay! now don't start blackmailing me by making that puppy face! I'm coming!

Jeevika (jumps with joy)- Come on, Lets go!

[they go downstairs and the pooja starts]

Here at Vadheras,

Morning aarti is beginning in Vadhera Mansion (VM)

Everybody is present, except Khushi & Virat.

Just then Khushi comes down shouting and pulling Virat along with her who is still sleepy- Buaji!!!!!! Aap hamare aur Virat ke bina aarti kaise shuru kar sakti hai???? Rukiye!

Buaji- Hai re Nandkishore! Sanka Devi, aa jaao jaldi!

Khushi and Virat enter the mandir.

Khushi &Virat- Good morning everybody!!!

Viren- good morning!

[Then the aarti is done]

Khushi- Bhaiyya, when is your next case starting?

Viren- Probably in next 3 days dear!

Khushi(with sad face)- Oh! So u hv only 3 days to spend with us?

Virat interupts- Khudi(Khushi di), why r u sad? Its not new for us! Bhai does this everytime! I wonder how our future bhabhi will suffer due to this!!

Khushi giggles. Viren lightly hits Virat's head. Just then Beeji hears their conversation.

Beeji- Now Virat reminds me of ur marriage,Viren! We have started seeing girls for u! We have also liked one girl...

Viren- Oh Beeji! U know m not interested in getting married!

Beeji- ha...ha... We all know! But u can just see the photo! And m sure after seeing her photo u'll not even dare to say no! Saying this, Beeji hands him the envelope and says- Before u see her pic, let me tell u her name. Her name is Jeevika Raizada and all her details r in the envelope

Just then Khushi snatches the envelope from him saying- Let me see it first. If Ilike her then only i'll show her pic to Bhaiyya! After all our choices match!! Right bhaiyya? (winks & giggles).

Viren- u r right dear! But this time, let me see the pic first!

Virat- Now Khudi, u only hv to open the envelope! I can see eagerness in Bhaiyya's eyes! Go ahead, m with you!

Hearing this Khushi immediately opens the envelope, her mouth is just like, Surprised, she mutters- Bhaiyya, she's so beautiful!!!!! And runs away with the pic!!!!! Viren runs behind her and snatches the photo from her and as soon as he sees it, he's glued to that place mesmerized by her beauty!

Khushi-Kaisi lagi??

Virat- Zor ka jhatka hai zorose laga!!!!

Saying this khushi and virat start giggling...but Viren doesn't entertain them... he was just lost in Jeevika's pic thinking if she's so beautiful in just this pic how would she look in reality???????

guyz, tell me if should i continue...

HAPPINESS ALWAYS...

$hraddha...

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Chapter-2


So here it goes...

Khushi goes near Viren n moves her hand in front of his eyes and asks- Bhaiyya, just her pic has such an effect on u, I think u would just faint when she comes in front of u!! Saying this she hi-fives Virat!

Viren feels slightly embarrassed n says- Its nothing like that dear! U r my princess n no one can compete with my sister's beauty! (winks)

Virat interrupts- Ahem...Ahem... I know Bhaiyya that no one can compete with our sister's beauty... But it seems that our future bhabhi (looking at khushi) is going to give a tough competition to u Khudi! (smiles naughtily)

Just then Khushi gets a call and she moves away to take the call...

Here at RM...

Everybody is now in the living room discussing about how's the day going to be.

Anjali- Nani, I hope the whole event in the evening will go on smoothly!

Nani- Anjali bitiya, don't worry,everything's going to fall in right place!

Swamini Bua- Ha Anjali, no need to worry at all... I know Chote will prove himself at its best!

Arnav- Di, I don't know why u worry so much? And i doubt if u know anything other than worrying?! I pity u jijaji... How can u handle her "worries" everyday????? I just get irritated with it so easily! (saying this he looks at Anjali who is showing her fake anger)

Anjali- What the!! CHOTE!!!

Manvi interrupts- Di, Bhai is right! I support u bhai!! (saying this, she chuckles)

Anjali- Mannu, u too??

Jeevika- Mannu, don't irritate our Di more! She already on a height of worrying! (saying this she also starts laughing)

Arjun- Arre, why r u all troubling my beautiful wife?? Don't worry Anjali... M with u... As i know how much we tell u, u'll never stop worrying!!!(laughs)

Anjali- Aap bhi shuru ho gaye??? Not fair, six against one! Ok fine, i'll stop worrying! (smiles)

Arnav+Jeevika+Manvi- Thats like our Di!!!!!

Then everyone share a common laugh!

At VM,

Khushi comes back shouting and yelling happily- Yeah!!!!!!! Yippee!!!!!! I did it finally!!!!!!

Buaji- Hai re Nandkishore! Ka hua Titaliya?

Beeji- What happened Khushi puttar?

Viren- Why r u so happy princess??

Virat- Can we get to know d reason behind ur happiness Khudi?????

Khushi keeps on hopping n says-Beeji, Buaji, Bhaiyya, Vitu, i just can't describe my happiness today!

Everyone- But WHAT HAPPENED???

Khushi(turns to Viren n Virat)- Bhaiyya n Vitu, u both remember I had won a dance competition 3 months back???

Viren n Virat- Yes, we do! U were just amazing at that time!

Khushi- thank u, thank u!! You remember it had director Yash Kapoor(YK) as its judge????

Viren n Virat- yup, we do remember!

Khushi holds both their hands and says- Just now his PA called me n told that Yash Kapoor is keen on taking me as a choreographer in his next film!!! His PA also added that YK really liked my performance that day! Otherwise, he doesn't give break to a fresh face, he also added that i was the lucky one!! Isn't it wonderful everybody?????

Viren- Its amazing pricess!!! U hv so much of talent!!!

Virat- I knew u wud do it Khudi!! After all u r Vadhera daughter!!!

Beeji+Buaji- We r really proud of u puttar!!

Khushi hugs both her brothers and then takes blessings from Beeji, Buaji and says- Its just bcoz of ur support everyone!

Virat- Khudi, when have they called u to meet???

Khushi- Day after, Vitu!

Viren- Great! M also free on that day! I'll come along with u!

Khushi- That sounds amazing, Bhaiyya! Thanks!

Beeji- Now puttar, Go and get blessings from ur Devi maiyya!

Khushi- Ok Beeji! (saying this, she heads towards the mandir)

At RM,

Its evening time now. All the Raizadas are ready to leave to the place where the event is going to take place.

Arnav- Di, Jijaji, Jeevi, Mannu, Nani... R u guys ready????? Shall I tell our driver to get our cars out??

Anjali- Yes Chote.. We r coming!

Manvi- Yeah bhai, tell them to get our cars out! (says this while coming down the staircase)

Arnav- Arre waah Mannu! U r ready so early?!

Manvi- Yeah Bhai! After all its ur launching party! How can i be late??!

(Just then Manvi sees Jeevika along with Anjali and Arjun coming down)

Manvi- Wow, Di and Jiju! U both r looking amazing! (laughs and winks at Anjali and Arjun)

Manvi(to Jeevika)- And jeevi di, after looking at u, m confused that its Bhai's launching event or urs????(giggles)

Jeevika- Mannu!!! (shows fake anger) Bhai, lets move! I'll bring Nani!

Arnav- Ok Jeevi, u, Di, Nani and jiju go in one car! I'll take Manvi along with me! As m taking a different way and i also hv to finish some important tasks! We'll leave now! U ppl can leave after some time!

Manvi- yippee!! M going with Bhai! Bye, everybody!

Everyone- bye!

Arnav and Manvi leave RM...

Do comment guys...

HAPPINESS ALWAYS...

$hraddha...

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Chapter-3

At VM,
Virat- Khudi, u remember na that I have my concert in Delhi tomorrow???
Khushi- yes Vitu, of course!! How could I forget??? I hv packed my and Bhaiyya's bags... Even Bhaiyya is coming this time for ur concert! I thank Devi maiyya, that my meeting with YK is day after or else i would hv missed ur concert!
Virat- No Khudi,no such day will come when u'll not be able to attend my concert! i'll not let that happen! u're my lucky charm after all...
Khushi- oh, so sweet of u Vitu!!! Love u a lot!!!
Virat- Khudi, Love u too!!
[Just then Beeji, buaji and Viren enter]
Beeji- u 3 going to delhi 2mrw???
Virat- yes, Beeji! 2mrw i hv my concert in delhi...
Beeji- Good... Me and ur buaji r also coming!
Virat- What???? Great... R u both seriously coming tomorrow for my concert, Beeji???
Beeji- Actually Virat, we're more interested in meeting the Raizadas also tomorrow... As we already saw that Viren liked Jeevika, so we can take this matter ahead.. and ur concert is also in delhi, so we'll enjoy that too...
Virat- oh! Okay! I thought u r coming specially for my concert!
Khushi- Thats great Beeji! But have u told them about our visit?
Viren interrupts- Why r u in hurry, Beeji to get me married? I didn't even tell that I liked her...
Khushi- So Bhaiyya, u mean to say, u didn't like her? If thats so... then Beeji no need to go to the Raizadas 2mrw...
Viren- Hey princess, when did i say i didn't like her???(feels embarrassed after realising what he just said.)
Khushi- So u like her, right??? (winks at Viren) So whats the problem then?
Beeji- Look Viren puttar, we r just going to meet them... We r not going to fix ur marriage date... So don't worry! Marriage will take time!
Viren- okay, Beeji! If u insist then!
Khushi- Thats like my Bhaiyya!
Virat- But what about my concert then? (makes a puppy face)
Khushi- Vitu, don't worry! Ur concert is in the evening! We'll go there in the morning!
Virat- Ohkay, Khudi!
Khushi- Beeji, did u tell them about our visit?
Beeji- No, not yet! I'll call them now!
Virat- What Beeji? U haven't told them yet? Call them just now! Today they have a launching event of their son, Arnav Singh Raizada! They might have left their home by now!
Khushi- What??? ASR????? He's related to Jeevika?? OMG!! I love his designs!!! They r just awesome!!
Virat- yes, Khudi... ASR is Jeevika's elder brother and today he's going to launch his own fashion industry!
Khushi- Wow! Thats great! So 2mrw i'll be seeing my favourite designer's face for the first time!!! OMG!!!
Beeji- Thanks Virat for informing me. I'll call them right away!
[Beeji goes to call the Raizadas]
At RM,
Nani, Anjali, Arjun and Jeevika r still at home and r about to leave. Swamini Bua is already at the venue to check the preparations for the event.
[just then phone rings, Nani picks up the phone]
Nani- Hello!
Beeji- hello,Devyaniji Namaste! Hum Mrs.Vadhera baat kar rahe hai!
Nani- Ji namaste! kaisi hai aap?
Beeji- Ji main toh bahot changi hu ji! Humne aapko yeh batane ke liye phone kiya ki Hamare Viren uttar ko aapki Jeevika bahot pasand aayi!
Nani- Kya? Sach? Kitni achhi khabar sunayi hai aapne!
Beeji- toh kal hum delhi aa rahe hai... kya hum aapki Jeevika se mil sakte hai??
Nani- ha..ha... jaroor! kyun nahi??? Hume toh bahut khushi hogi... waise humne bhi Jeevika ko Viren ka photo dikha diya hai... Usse bhi Viren pasand aaya...
Beeji- ye toh badi achhi baat hai!! Toh hum kal aapke yaha 9am baje tak aa jaayein?
Nani- ji jaroor! thik hai! Ab hum rakhte hai!
Beeji- ji, kal milte hai!
[She disconnects the call]
Nani turns to see Anjali, Arjun and Jeevika's eager faces to know whose call was that. Nani gives a wide smile to them and says- Vadhera family wants to make our Jeevika, their daughter-in-law!
Hearing this, Jeevika starts blushing and runs away saying that she'll see that the car has come or not...
Anjali giggles at her reaction and asks Nani about her talk with Beeji. Nani gives her all the details and says that they r going to come to see Jeevika tomorrow!
Then they leave for the event.
At the event-
The launching of RSF is done and the Raizadas sit for the media conference.
Manvi (to Arnav)- Bhai, don't get irritated if they ask u some stupid questions. Just give them some stupid answers! And if they ask about our past, please don't loose ur temper! Just say "NO COMMENTS"! okay??
Arnav- Okay Mannu! I'll try my best! But how do u know what questions r they going to ask?
Manvi- Bhai, who else will know other than me? M a media student after all...
Arnav- Oh, right! how can i forget as it is u like to poke ur nose in everything just like those reporters!
Manvi- Bhai!!!
Anjali- Stop u two! Shut up and sit quiet!
Arnav and Mnavi immediately straighten themselves and get ready for the conference.
While the reporters were asking some stupid questions Arnav always used to look at Manvi and she looked back with "I told u" look.
But just when a reporter asked about his past, he was enraged and got into an argument with the reporter... Just then Jeevika handled the situation and made him calm down!
After the conference was over, they all got back to RM...
And then Nani told everybody that the Vadheras were coming the next day to see Jeevika...
Manvi was the 1st one to react- Wow Nani!! Jeevi di's going to get married?? Amazing!!
Arnav blurts- What???? Jeevi's getting married??? Saying this he goes to his room with a sad face
Manvi- ye bhai ko kya ho gaya?
Anjali (with worried face)- Bura lag gaya Chote ko!
Nani- ha Jeevika to Chote ke dil ke bahut kareeb hai!
Jeevika also feels upset and runs to Arnav's room...
To be continued...
Plz let me know if u need some changes in the story or should i continue??
Do comment!!
HAPPINESS ALWAYS...
$hraddha...
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Oh, I love this! Great peice of writing! My favorite couples, please PM me if you continue! :D
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CHAPTER- 4


Here i go...

Jeevika followed Arnav to his room... She saw him pacing back-forth near the poolside blabbering something to himself...

Arnav (upset)- What Jeevika's getting married??? She's so young... just 25... I wonder why r these family members in a hurry to get her married...

Jeevika- Bhai! What happened?

Arnav immediately after hearing Jeevika's voice turns and hugs her...

Arnav- My Jeevi's soon going to get married... I still can't believe... I still remember small Jeevi running behind me for everything...

Jeevika- Bhai! Don't be upset! (consoles him)

They share an emotional moment!

Here at VM...

Khushi- Beeji, Buaji are u both done with ur packing? We hv to leave early by 5.30 am tomorrow... Our flight to delhi is at 6.30am...

Beeji- yes puttar! We're done with our packing! U ppl sleep now... Goodnight!

Khushi- Goodnight Beeji!

In the morning, Viren is first one to be ready to leave...

Khushi (while coming downstairs)- Arre Waah Bhaiyya! U ready so early! Don't be so impatient bhaiyya!

Virat- Khudi, how can u tell him to be patient? After all he's going to meet his future wife! Right, Bhaiyya? (winks at Viren)

Viren- Shut up u two! Stop teasing me!

Virat and Khushi giggle on his reaction... Just then Beeji and Buaji r ready to leave... Vadheras leave VM...

Here at RM,

Anjali is running throughout the RM to check all the preparations.

Anjali- HP, Did u do all the preparations which i told u to?

HP nods and shows her the preparations...

Anjali nods happily after seeing all the preparations are done in a right way.. Just then Swamini Bua comes there..

Bua- Why r u worrying so much? They r just coming to see Jeevika and not for the marriage...

Anjali- I know Bua! (smiles)

Now its 8am, everybody at RM is ready except Jeevika...

Manvi- Jeevi di, why r u taking so much time to get ready? They r just coming to see u, its not ur marriage!

Jeevika- Mannu!! Stop it! U'll soon come to know what condition i'm going through when someone will come to see u...

Mnavi- No way Jeevi di! There's much more time for me to get married... Bhai is in the queue before me...

Arnav who is on the way to his room hears their conversation..

Arnav- What the Mannu!!! U very well know that i'll never get married!!

Manvi- hmmm Bhai... Lets see!!

Arnav angrily mutters "whatever" and rushes to his room saying he has a conference call for next 2 hrs... Before Manvi could react he's already in his room and closed the door...

Manvi(to Jeevika)- Yeh Bhai bhi na!

By that time Jeevika gets ready to go downstairs...

Manvi- Jeevi di, my to be Jiju is going to faint after seeing u!! U're looking just awesome!! (winks)

Jeevika (blushes)- Thanks Mannu!

Now everybody is downstairs waiting for the Vadheras to arrive...

Jeevika (to Anjali)- Di, will those people like me?

Anjali- Don't worry Jeevi! Why will they not like you? U're a gem! (smiles assuringly)

Just then they get a call from the Vadheras that they'll be coming in next 15 mins...

Vadheras...

Khushi- Vitu, aren't u excited we're going to meet our future bhabhi!!(winks at Viren) And i also can't believe i'll be meeting my favourite designer ASR today!! I always wanted to meet him in personal!! I wanted to see how my favourite designer looks like!! As it is he never makes a public appearance... Its my dream come true..

Virat- Khudi- M also very happy... N one thing Khudi, Why r u so excited to meet ASR?? If u want i'll ask Beeji to carry on ur matter with ASR. As it is he's also single..(winks at Khushi)

Khushi- Stop it Vitu!! He's just my favourite designer nothing else!!

By then Vadheras reach RM... Raizadas greet them heartily and all r now seated in the living room...

Anjali- Hello Mrs.Vadhera... M Anjali... Jeevika's elder sister.. This is Arjun my husband... N there comes Manvi.. she's our youngest sister.. And we hv a brother Arnav... he's elder to Jeevika...

Beeji- Just call me Beeji... Anjali puttar... Pleasure to meet u all...


HAPPINESS ALWAYS...

$hraddha...

Edited by Shradz_K - 12 years ago

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