~ To Make You Mine ~ A TaaRey OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya guys! Another OS from me. 😆 After a long time! 😛 This one is not related to D3! After writing this I think that my writing has gone back to square one 🤢 I won't say anything further.. Here you go! And yeah, just a few ideas have been taken from YJHD! You'll understand when u read!
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She sat there, draped in a yellow dress, looking stunningly beautiful, with the haldi all over her hands and face. She was finally getting married. All her friends and family were present there. She only wished that her best friend would be present there too.

Banno re banno meri chali sasuraal ko
Ankhiyon mein paani de gayi
Duaa mein meethi gud dhaani le gayi

Banno re banno meri chali sasuraal ko
Ankhiyon mein paani de gayi
Duaa mein meethi gud dhaani le gayi


She smiled wide as her Sharon di sang and danced for her. Sharon came up to her and pulling her chin, kissed her forehead.

~*~

Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Faqeera yun na ja
Aaja tujhko pukaare teri parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira maan ja
Re Faqeera yun na ja
Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya

He sat there in his room with her best friend's wedding card in his hand. He had his back rested on the wall. He clutched her wedding card close to himself and closed his eyes, as tears made way out of them.

Tooti chaarpai wohi thandi purvaai rasta dekhe
Doodhoon ki malaai wohi
Mitti ki suraahi rasta dekhe...

A lone tear escaped his eye, as he thought about the fun times they had spent together during their school and college times. They were inseparable. The Best of friends. It had been almost 3 years now since they met, at Sharon Di's wedding. And now, his best friend was finally getting married.

Tooti chaarpai wohi thandi purvaai rasta dekhe
Doodhoon ki malaai wohi
Mitti ki suraahi rasta dekhe...
Ho Doodhoon ki malaai wohi
Mitti ki suraahi rasta dekhe...


He smiled a little remembering the way she used to call him Mr. Ambitious. Yes. He was ambitious. He wanted to become a photographer. He wanted to see the entire world and capture it in his camera. But he never knew that this ambition of his would tear him apart from his friends and family, and most importantly her. He knew that he loved her, but his dreams and ambitions, blinded him and did not let him realize his love for her. But now he had.

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Gudiya ri gudiya tera gudda perdesiya
Jodi aasmani ho gayi
Shagun pe dekho shaad maani ho gayi

Gudiya ri gudiya tera gudda perdesiya
Jodi aasmani ho gayi
Shagun pe dekho shaad maani ho gayi

Although she didn't show it, she was very unhappy. Unhappy because she was not going to spend her life with the person whom she had loved, her best friend. She was doing this marriage just for her Di's and Jiju's sake. Her and Sharon's parents had died soon after Sharon got married to Swayam. Swayam had taken her responsibility on himself. They kept her like their daughter. But, she didn't want to become a burden on them for long. So when her Dii asked her for getting married to Arjun, brother of Swayam's friend, she could not refuse.

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Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Faqeera yun na jaa
Aaja tujhko pukaare teri parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira maan ja
Re Faqeera yun na ja
Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya

He had already packed his clothes and other stuff he needed. He was going to go back to India. He caressed a photo of his and hers together. They had taken during the last day of college. A tear drop fell on the photo. He kissed the photo and kept it in his suitcase which he had already packed. "I'm Coming Taani.. To make you mine!" Rey said.

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A Very short one I know! But I had this idea when I first heard this song. Wanted to write on it and finally did. Sorry if it wasn't up to the mark. I don't know but I feel my writing has deteriorated.

If you like it then please hit the like button and comment! 😳

Silent readers please hit the like button atleast if you like it!😳

P.S.- I'm really sorry Megha dii and Mimi dii for not completing your dares. I'll complete them once I feel that my writing is back on track!

P.P.S.- PMs for this OS will be sent in 2 hours! 😃

Edited by Shivangi_Taarey - 12 years ago

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...Natasha... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS, it was short and sweet
Hope Rey be successful in making Taani his forever
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Posted: 12 years ago
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short n sweet os...
loved d ending...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shivangi !! I Love You For Making An OS on This Song !! 🤗 ... You Won't Believe, While I was looking Through the D3 Forum This Exact Song was running in my head !! Well after watching Today's PreCap got a bit excited but that's a different story !
Now The OS was just too beautiful ! It was a short and sweet OS filled with heart-warming emotions ! And The Song was sooo Apt to the song ! It was just so perfectly matching the lyrics ... And I was really overwhelmed after reading it ! It brought a smile to my face ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome shivi

bt why so short os ?? 🤔
peraltagasm thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

It was awesome shivi

bt why so short os ?? 🤔


Kyuki mere dimaag me aur kuch nhi aaya 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres...

lambu comment dungi tu pehle part 2 de..

no drama but wo bhaga le jaaye taani ko bass..🤣

demand
-maggie😎

Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
dh19 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice idea
keep writing more dear.
PRASSI thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its an awesome OS dear...
Its short its so sweet and lil bit emotional
But I loved it a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey shivangi it really is nyc..dnt look dwn on urslf lyk dat :)

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