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Abqurah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

awesome update but
emotional one😭
thanx for scrap
update soon

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Res

unres

first of all soo sorry for unres soo late...

n thank u anne taht u reminded me... warna res ka kabhi unres nahi hota 😆

coming to the update, it was damn emotional n made me cry 😭 😭

my viru boy is soo hurt n its hurting us all seeing virat like that...

virman convo in basement was bang on... loved it (u know why... bcos it showed how much virman love each other n how much they are hurt by whatever happened... it somewhere displayed taht they love each other way too much to believe on teh harsh truth in front of their eyes but what to do circumstances sometimes force us to do what we dont intend to ) 😊

voice msg was damn too good though it was copied from my ff... 😉 😛

but still i love it... 😃

waiting for the next update...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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Huma

@Huma0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Ananya rula diya mujhe im in tears after reading this update- my heart went out to both virman feel damn sorry for them omg manvi left gon from everyone's life oh no!! n virat didnt even get the message oh god!!ab thi aur intazaar nahi hota so plz try n update quickly 😉

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

nice update poor girl she didn't know why he is behaving with her so rudely
what will happen when he get now real truth update soon

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Too awesome...
Supoerbly superb...
Thanks for scrap...
Waiting for next one..

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Hi its gr8 n add me to pm list and update soon and plz unite virman. Em sad after reading this:( poor souls. But waiting for next update cz i know they will unite at the end n will get romance also;)

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Awesome..!!! It was emotional...now they are separated...Looking forward to how will they meet again...n wht circumstances...Continue soon..!

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

awesome update

liked it

really felt bad for maanvi

plz cont soon

thanks for scrap

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JESMY

@JESNIA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

superb.
thanks for scrap.
plz unite virman asap.

Edited by JESMY143VIRMAN - 12 years ago

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Pehle toh character sketch ki who line .."Pyaar toh who sabhi ladkiyon so karta hai par ishq sirf ek se" Kya dialogue hai yaar ... amazing.

I really love this whole concept . This Manvi is just like me, believes in love but only in films.

Chapter 1

Really liked this chapter. Virat intro was amazing .. DOG? OH MY GOD! Ek number ka flirt lagta hai mujhe toh. JeeMan relationship seems so cute and so does Janvi's friendship with Mannu.

Chapter 2

WOW! They meet at the club as well and will be going to the same college. The dance was just so amazing .. hai. Mujhe toh sharam aa gayi. Looks like dono ko jaldi pyaar ho jaye ga. Aur dusri taraf Virika ka kya haal ho raha hog a. This update was so amazing, and so romantic. I really really loved it. Their nhok jhok is so funny.

Chapter 3

"Ishq Key Khayaal Bohat Hain..
Ishq Key Charche Bohat Hain..
Sochte Hain Hum Bhi Kar Le Ishq..
Par Sunte Hain Ishq Mein Kharche Bohat Hain.."

This was the most hilarious think that I have ever read in my life. Itni achi shayari kaha se ? Virat yaar .. very bad, bechari Mannu ka plan hi ulta ho gaya yaar. 😛

SCORE MANVI:0''. VIRAT:2 😆

ALso very funny but I felt so sorry for Virat as well as Mannu, hope they sort everything out very soon. Great story so far 😃.Do you know everytime I see the name of your story, I remember the Rahat Fateh Ali Khan song 'Chahaat'. That's one of my favourite songs. Really good name choice.

Abhi ke liye itna hi ' I'll read the rest very soon and comment.

Thanks for the scrap.

Continue Soon, I will be waiting

Edited by .aliyah. - 12 years ago