virman ff (bas haq hai ek mera) IMP NOTE

HELLO EVERYONE
I M ANANYA
I M NEW HERE ...
GOING TO POST MY FIRST EVER STORY
PLZ BEAR WID IT ...😛


PROLOGUE

PYAAR... nowadays i hate dis word nd dis feeling... aajkal iska matlab kisiko nahi pata... sab ise give nd take policy ki tarah samajhte hai... khair choro...maine bhi pyaar kiya lekin zor ka jhatka bhi mujhe bahut zor le laga pyaar mein ...meine kabhi bhi nahi socha ki jisse mein sabse zyada pyaar karti thi woh hi mujhe galat samjhega aur mere upar toh bilkul bhi trust nehi karega... aur mera best frnd bhi isme shamil thi,,,, wow commendable...

oops main toh apne aap ko introduce hi nai karai... mein MAANVI CHOUDHRY...

CHARCTER SKETCH

MAANVI CHOUDRY : fun loving bubbly carefree girl... very filmy ... belives in love but only in films not in real life cz she fears dat she wil be betrayed. loves her sis to the core

JEEVIKA CHOUDHRY: Elder sis of maanvi . loves her very much

JANVI MITTAL: chaddy buddy frnd of manvi ... dey r just carbon copy of each other ... similar to manvi... jo manvi ka hai woh iska bhi hai or jo iska hai woh manvi ka hai ... ye dono sab kuch ek saath karte hai... suhagraat ke samay bhagwan inke pati o ko bachaye hayeee

VIRAT VADHERA: a total prankstar... flirts with girls... girls just drool over him... but he never crossed his limits... pyaar toh woh sab ladkiyo se karta hai lekin ishq sirf ek hi ladki se... and he is waiting for dat. loves his bhai immensely

VIREN VADHERA: bro of virat nd loves him dearly



precap...
4 years ago


hows it... i knw it was a crap...
plz let me knw ... and i'll continue then
luv ya 😳😳


INDEX...
PROLOGUE AND CHARACTER SKETCH...
PART 1 - PAGE 1
PART 2 - PAGE 2
PART 3 - PAGE 3
PART 4 - PAGE 4
PART 5 - PAGE 6 MAHAEPISODE

NOTE - PAGE 6
NOTE - PAGE 9

PART 6 - PAGE 9
PART 7 - PAGE 11
PART 8 - PAGE 14

NOTE - PAGE 16

PART 9 - PAGE 16

NOTE - PAGE 21

PART 10 - PAGE 23
PART 11 - PAGE 29

NOTE - PAGE 37

Res


Unres

See naina is first to comment on ur first ff...!!!! Its a goodluck sign... 😉 ab tera ff hit hoga... Dekh lio meri jaan...
Coming to d prologue... Its superb... 😃 n dare u call it crap... 😡
I liked it n kahin ye best frnd jeevs toh nahi...
Anyways waiting for d first chap anne... 😃
Cont soon n all d best...

haaw nainu thank u ...
jeevs nahi hai ... intzaar mere dost sab pata chal jaega
but teko to secret pata hai na 😆

Originally posted by: nahaananya

haaw nainu thank u ...
jeevs nahi hai ... intzaar mere dost sab pata chal jaega
but teko to secret pata hai na 😆

Ur welcum... 😊
N yes i know d secret... 😉
Waiting fr d first chap now...

1st chappy coming soon... tomorow for sure
love ya ...

hello everyone
i cudnt stop myself from writing
u knw pehla pehla xcitement
ok here's d update
plz tell me hows it

Part 1

4 years ago

Tring tring''..

Maanvi: Arghh😡 chup ho ja. Kya tujhe koi aur kam nahi hai jo subah subah mere nind ki band baja rahi hai'. Whuff .. hello (in a sleepy tone)

Jeev: Mannnuuu kaha hai tu kya kar rahi hai '. Jaldi uth ja

Maanvi : Diii kaha ho aap 😲? aap toh kal aane wale the na? toh aaj OMG I cnt beliv u r here '👏.

Jeev :Reee ruk main abhi aayi nahi'. Just boarding the flight'.. will cya soon in a next couple of hours'.

M :Oh maine socha aap aaa gayi. 😭Khair choro' jaldi aaj jao. Am dying to meet u.. love u❤️

J :Love u too mannu ❤️

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A few hours later in evening

"Maanvi jaldi karo jeevika aati hi hongi'" mom was shouting uncontrollably cz her fav daughter was coming. But never mind I'm my daddy's daughter'(hehe)

"Yes mom am ready. Aap dono jaldi chalo hume di ko lene airport jana hoga" I said

At airport

M :"ouch kya hai dekh ke nahi chal sakte'😡 aandha kahi ka"

Stranger : o hello aap zara aapni sunglass hataiye aur dekh ke chaliye. Ajeeb hai sham ko sunglass pehen rhe hai. Whuff😲

M: sunglass rakhu ya nikalu ye meri marzi hai.. aap hote kon mujhe tokna wala' bada aaya huh

S: mai? Main VIRAAT SINGH VADHERA in short DOG 😃😃

M: hahahha DOG hilarious😆

S: main janta tha tum aise hi hasoge isliye maine full form nahi bataya'. DOG ka matlab hai darling of girls'😉. Khair tum nahi samjhoge' bandariya

M: uuu. Tumne mujhe bandariya kaha'.😡 Tum.. tum ek number ke chep'. Bada aaya mujhe DOG samjhane wale huh

J: mannuuu

M: diii kaise ho aap. I'm so happy to see u.. maine aapko kinna shaala mish kiya

J: awww ab mai aa gayi. Ab hum khub masti karenge. Chal ghar chalte hai''

Janvi's house

M: jannu aaj di aayi hai. Tu aaj mere ghar aaja milkar masti karenge

Janvi: wow mannu I'm coming now only. I cant wait to see di

Janvi and manvi are best frnds from childhood'. U knw diaper frnds

Precap:

Virman meet in club ''

Welcome dear

new ff
i like the prologue n update both
hehee...virat ka pet name dog h...
waiting for next...

First... Welcome in forum dear...
Nd starting was fab... With this sTory...
Starting looking fab...
Virmaan first meeting nd DOG also amazing...
Waiting for the next one...
Enjoy...

It was nice! I like dis dog!